高考英语写作专题

专题二十 书面表达 考点一 提纲类 Writing 1 2010 湖南 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部 开展了为期两个月的活动 现在 你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行 经验交流 请写一篇英语发言稿 主要内容如下 1 简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动 2 谈谈你们开展该活动的收获 注意 1 词数不少于 120 个 2 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 答案 写作提示 1 应该用第一人称的形式来写发言稿 同时注意以面对别人介绍俱乐部情况的口吻行文 2 时态方面 从试题的内容上可以看出应用一般过去时 一般现在时或现在完成时 3 内容上 首先 简要介绍自己参与组织的英语俱乐部的基本信息 其次 介绍组织过的和英语相关的一项重 要活动 最后 阐述成功组织此次活动之后的收获 One possible version Boys and girls Our English Club has held a variety of activities in the past two months which has drawn much attention of the students and teachers Recently our club held an English speech contest the theme of which is Challenge Myself and Strengthen Self confidence A large number of students attended the contest and showed their wonderful performances and a great many teachers and students crowded into the hall to see their performances At the stage no matter what pressure the speakers faced they bravely overcame it and challenged themselves to achieve great success What s more they impressed us the host deeply with their unusual confidence and performances Through such an activity we know a lot more about our students and our school And we have gained much such as self confidence honor and so on Besides our club is growing stronger and more mature That s all Thank you Writing 2 2010 山东 假设你是新华中学的学生李华 你和在上海上学的英国朋友 Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游 但你因故不能赴 约 请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件 1 表示歉意 2 解释原因 3 另约时间 注意 1 词数 120 150 2 可适当增加细节 答案 写作提示 1 人称方面 应该用第一人称的形式给 Tom 用第二人称 写封书信 2 时态方面 从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点 1 2 3 时大部分内容应用一般现在时和一般将来时 部分 细节根据实际情况可选用其他合适的时态 写作时需要注意个别句子间时态的灵活转换 3 格式和语言 书信常用的标准格式要正确 语言要简练 地道 4 内容 首先 因故不能赴约要对 Tom 表示歉意 其次 向 Tom 详细解释原因 最后 与 Tom 约定新的时间 One possible version Dear Tom I m sorry for I won t be able to pay a visit to Beijing next weekend with you Because there are many friends of mine facing a coming English exam which is without doubt important for them They are looking forward to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successfully As a result I will be busy helping them at that time In addition I will attend a party which aims to raise money for the people of Yushu who suffered greatly from the big earthquake In a nutshell I m afraid I ll have no time to accompany you So I want to put off our visit until the first weekend of next month Is it OK Looking forward to your early reply Yours Li Hua Writing 3 2010 浙江 最近 李越被评为你们班的 每周之星 请你根据她的事迹 在上周六下午 不顾天气炎热 为班级选购歌咏比 赛服装 用英语为班级板报写一篇 100 120 个词的短文 你的文章应包括下列要点 1 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响 2 你的评论 注意 1 文章的标题和开头已给出 不计词数 2 参考词汇 singing contest 歌咏比赛 costume 服装 Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of Star Student of the Week for what she did for our class 答案 写作提示 1 本文应为使用第一 三人称的记叙文 描述李越的事迹时用一般过去时 其余使用一般现在时 2 第一段提出主题 李越被评为 每周之星 描述其事迹时注意时间 地点 人物细节描写的添加 最好使用现 在分词 过去分词等增添文采 注意时态 语态的转换 描写事件时注意使用时间状语和副词进行衔接 3 第二段写出自己的评论 注意使用总结描述性形容词 适当使用短语 如 devote to set a good example to 等和副词 如 besides therefore 等 One possible version Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of Star Student of the Week for what she did for our class On the hot afternoon of last Saturday Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting Finally she found the right clothes Deeply moved by her efforts we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest Li Yue is always warm hearted and cares a lot about the class Besides she often devotes her spare time to helping others She has set a good example to us Therefore she deserves the honor and we should learn from her Writing 4 2010 课标 全国 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华 你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛 speech contest 希望附近某大学的外 籍教师 Smith 女士来做评委 请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信 英语演讲比赛 主题 人与自然 时间 6 月 15 日下午 2 00 5 00 地点 501 教室 参赛选手 10 名学生 联系人 李华 电话 44876655 欢迎大家光临 注意 词数 100 左右 Dear Ms Smith With best wishes Li Hua 答案 写作提示 1 自我介绍 2 邀请 Smith 女士做评委 3 演讲比赛通知的具体内容 1 演讲主题 2 比赛时间 3 比赛地点 4 参赛选手 5 联系方式 One possible version Dear Ms Smith I m Li Hua chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School which is close to your university I m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in Room 501 in our school on June 15 It will start at 2 00 p m and last for about three hours Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic Man and Nature We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions I am looking forward to your reply With best wishes Li Hua Writing 5 2011 江西 假设你是星光中学的李华 将参加主题为 Let s Ride Bicycles 的英语演讲比赛 请撰写一份演讲稿 主要内 容包括 1 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题 2 骑自行车的益处 如节能环保 有利健康等 参考词汇 低碳生活 low carbon life 节能 energy saving 注意 1 词数 120 词左右 2 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出 不计入总词数 Good morning everyone I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is Let s Ride Bicycles Thank you 答案 写作提示 1 本文要求写一篇有对比意义的文章 同时是一个演讲稿 所以通常用第一人称 2 建议采用三段式 一段写利用汽车出行的缺点 一段写利用自行车出行的好处 最后一段可以发出号召 3 写作要点 空气污染 交通阻塞 节能环保 有利健康等 4 参考词汇 with the improvement of sth low carbon city what s more One possible version Good morning everyone I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is Let s Ride Bicycles As is known to all with the improvement of people s living standards cars have become a popular means of transport bringing great convenience to our life However they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams How can we solve these problems then As far as I m concerned riding bicycles is a good solution For one thing bicycles don t need any petrol and they are energy saving For another bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won t give off waste gas What s more riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health Therefore let s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles Come on and join us Thank you Writing 6 2011 辽宁 假定你是李华 将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业 你从报纸上得知 B 2 学习情况及英语水平 3 兴趣和特长 4 性格特点 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头语和结束语已为你写好 June 8 Dear Sir Madam I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary I m looking forward to your reply Sincerely yours Li Hua 答案 写作提示 1 本文属于应用文 以李华的名义写一封求职信 应使用第一人称 基本时态为一般现在时 2 内容要点 介绍年龄情况 介绍学习情况及英语水平 介绍自己的兴趣和特长 介绍自己的性格特点 One possible version June 8 Dear Sir Madam I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary I m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you I m 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July I m an excellent student among the top 5 in my class of 50 students I m good at English especially spoken English I often use the computer and I type very fast In my spare time I read a lot Poems are my favorite I enjoy music very much too Being an active young person I like sports and outdoor activities Besides I m easy to get along with and I like to make friends I m looking forward to your reply Sincerely yours Li Hua Writing 7 2011 全国 假定你是李华 你所喜爱的 Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见 请你依据以下内容给主编写 封信 内容主要包括 1 说明你是该报的忠实读者 2 赞赏该报优点 1 兼顾国内外新闻 2 介绍名人成功故事 3 提出建议 刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意 1 词数 100 左右 开头语已为你写好 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Dear Editor in Chief Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror Sincerely yours Li Hua 答案 写作提示 1 本文属于书信体文章 重点介绍 Global Mirror 周报的优点 建议使用第一人称 时态以一般现在时为主 2 内容要点 说明自己的身份 该报的忠实读者 介绍该报的优点 对该报提出改进建议 One possible version Dear Editor in Chief Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror I m a regular reader of your newspaper I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons First it covers both national and international news so that by simply turning the pages I can learn all important things that have happened during the week Equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place As a young student I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning and I hope that it will become even more popular Sincerely yours Li Hua Writing 8 2011 陕西 假定你是中学生李华 在一位名叫 TigerMom 的学生家长的博客上 你看到如下内容 请你根据博客内容 写作要点和要求 给这位家长回复 I m the mother of a fourteen year old I have a rule for my daughter be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another She has been doing very well in school but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her Am I wrong 写作要点 1 表明自己的看法 2 陈述自己的理由 可举例说明 3 提出至少两条建议 要求 1 短文词数不少于 100 不含已写好的部分 2 内容充实 结构完整 语意连贯 3 书写须清晰 工整 Hi TigerMom What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China My idea is 答案 写作提示 1 本文为议论文 基本时态为一般现在时 文中表达的观点和提出的建议要合理 论据要充分 2 内容要点 表明自己的观点 对此做法给出判断 举例证明成绩重要但不代表一切 且惩罚不是解决问题 的方法 提出自己的建议 3 参考词汇 evaluate v 评估 评价 turn out to be 结果是 证明是 as as 和 一样 by no means 一点也 不 One possible version Hi TigerMom What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission development in wisdom emotion health and life attitude should never be ignored There are many examples around us Some all A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities Furthermore punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically So I suggest that you take your friends advice More importantly let her live like a lovely girl let her have more friends and social activities and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do Writing 9 2011 浙江 假设你是高中生李越 有感于校园中存在的随意涂写 to scribble 和乱丢垃圾 to litter 的行为 请用英语给校 长写一封 100 120 个词的信 信中应包括以下内容 1 说明写信的目的 2 对这些行为进行批评 3 提出建议 注意 信的抬头 落款及信的第一句已给出 不计词数 June 8 2011 Dear Mr Headmaster I am Li Yue a student from Class 1 Senior 2 Yours faithfully Li Yue 答案 写作提示 1 本篇书面表达是关于态度看法的文章 所以主体时态为一般现在时 2 注意三个要点 第一 陈述现象 第二 进行批评 第三 提出建议 3 本篇书面表达是比较常见的题型和内容 故要想得到高分 就应该注意特殊句式的应用 One possible version June 8 2011 Dear Mr Headmaster I am Li Yue a student from Class 1 Senior 2 I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students littering and scribbling It makes our school dirty and unpleasant and does harm to the image of our school I always feel ashamed whenever I see this It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour At the same time students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves I believe that with the joint efforts of both teachers and students our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Li Yue Writing 10 2012 江西 某英文报社举办以 I Like Reading 为主题的征文活动 你打算投稿 请根据以下要点写一篇短文 1 你为什么喜欢读书 2 你喜欢读哪一类的书 例如 历史 科学 文学等 请给出至少两个理由 注意 词数 120 左右 答案 写作提示 1 本文为议论文 基本时态为一般现在时 2 参考短语 for one thing for another as we know a variety of One possible version I Like Reading Reading is my favorite I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life As we know books are the source of knowledge I benefit a great deal from reading There is a variety of books for us to choose from like history books science books literary books and so on But what interests me most is literary books especially those by famous writers For one thing they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons For another they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun Isn t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading Writing 11 2012 辽宁 假定你是某中学的学生李华 请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信 表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法 内 容主要包括 优点 1 话题广泛 2 图片丰富 3 有助于提高学习兴趣 建议 适当降低词汇难度 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头语已为你写好 不计入总词数 Dear Editor As a student reader I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house 答案 写作提示 1 本文属于应用文 书信类 建议以第一人称给出版社的编辑写一封信 时态以一般现在时为主 2 内容要点 围绕现在使用的英语教材 从教材的优点和提出的建议方面进行阐述 优点 话题广泛 图片丰富 有助于提高学习兴趣 建议 适当降低词汇难度 3 参考词汇 advantage a variety of topics be interested in what s more however One possible version Dear Editor As a student reader I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house These books have many advantages One of them is that we can find a variety of topics such as science culture and history These topics I think are very popular with us students What s more along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures which can help us understand English better Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject However some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us Therefore I d like to suggest changing them into easier ones Best regards Li Hua Writing 12 2012 全国 假定你是李华 你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会 请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加 要点包括 1 时间 周五晚 8 点至 9 点 2 地点 学生俱乐部 3 内容 生日歌 蛋糕 游戏等 4 要求 备小礼物 注意 1 词数 100 左右 开头语已为你写好 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Hi Susan We re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming s birthday 答案 写作提示 本文属于书信体文章 邀请信 主要是邀请外教参加小明的生日聚会 写作要点如下 时间 周五晚 8 点至 9 点 地点 学生俱乐部 内容 生日歌 蛋糕 游戏等 要求 备小礼物 建议使用第一人称 时态以一般将来时为主 参考短语及句型 would like to invite sb to someplace It ll be nice to see how excited he will be have a good time at the party gather at prepare a little present light the candles sing Happy Birthday One possible version Hi Susan We re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming s birthday We d like to invite you to the party We want to give him a surprise so please keep it secret We ll gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday after the evening classes And it s going to last about an hour We each will prepare a little present When he comes we ll light the candles and sing Happy Birthday together for him Then the cake will be cut and we ll sing songs and play games It ll be nice to see how excited he will be I m sure you ll have a good time at the party too Yours Li Hua Writing 13 2012 四川 假如你是大学一年级新生李华 开学之初 你的英语老师 Ms Li 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况 并征求 教学建议 请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信 1 对英语学习的认识 2 自己目前的英语水平 3 自己英语学习存在的主要问题 4 对英语教学的两点建议 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 信的开头和结尾已给出 Dear Ms Li I m very happy to have you as our English teacher Thank you Li Hua 答案 写作提示 1 要点齐全 涵盖题目中所列四个要点 2 文章以一般现在时为主 人称以第一人称为主 3 参考词汇 master 掌握 memorize 记忆 make progress 取得进步 One possible version Dear Ms Li I m very happy to have you as our English teacher As the world is becoming a global village English is getting more and more important so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart and that I often feel nervous when speaking English I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking I believe we can make much progress in English with your help Thank you Li Hua Writing 14 2012 重庆 某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务 现在 你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换 exchange 请你用英文在该网站上发帖 发布物品交换信息 内容应包括 你将拿出什么物品进行交换 具体介绍该物品 你希望换回什么物品 请愿意交换的朋友给你留言 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 格式不限 3 文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称 答案 写作提示 1 本文为应用文 人称以第一人称为主 时态以现在时为主 2 要点 你将拿出什么物品进行交换 具体介绍该物品 你希望换回什么物品 请愿意交换的朋友给你留言 3 参考词汇 say goodbye to this friend leave a message get in touch with One possible version Hi I have an English Chinese dictionary which was given to me as a gift on my 13th birthday by my parents It has helped me a lot with my English Whenever I met with difficulties I turned to it and finally got the answer So now my English is cool especially my written English There are about 8 000 words in the dictionary and the example sentences in it are so beautiful that once you see them you ll find it hard to tear yourself from them However with time going by I have to say goodbye to this friend Besides at the present time I am in great need of an iPod because I am crazy about music Furthermore I can use it to download a lot from the Internet So if you have a second hand iPod and have an appetite for my dictionary please leave a message here and I will get in touch with you Many thanks Writing 15 2012 浙江 你校正在进行 英语读书周 活动 该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句 quote 并相互交流 以下是某同学摘录的 句子 Your future depends on many things but mostly on you 请按下列要求用英语写一篇 100 120 个词的短 文 1 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法 2 举例说明理由 注意 短文的开头已给出 不计词数 In the English Reading Week one of my classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this Your future depends on many things but mostly on you 答案 写作提示 1 本文为开放性作文 基本时态为一般现在时 2 参考词汇及句型 I can t agree more with It s true that play an important role in take sb for example One possible version In the English Reading Week one of my classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this Your future depends on many things but mostly on you I can t agree more with this view It s true that our future is determined by many things such as opportunities and help from others but our own attitude determination and hard work play a more important role In other words we are the master of our own future Take Abraham Lincoln for example He was born into a poor family and only received a limited education in his childhood Yet through his painstaking efforts he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America Even to this day Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world Therefore I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands Writing 16 2013 辽宁 一个英文网站面向中学生征稿 请你写一篇英语稿件 介绍 中秋节 及这个节日里的主要活动 写作要点 1 它是中国的传统节日之一 2 家人团聚 3 赏月 吃月饼 4 还有旅游 访友等其他活动 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头语已为你写好 不计入总词数 参考词汇 中秋节 the Mid Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake The Mid Autumn Festival The Mid Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar 答案 写作提示 1 本文为提纲类的说明文 人称为第一人称 基本时态为一般现在时 2 内容要点 1 介绍中秋节是中国的传统节日之一 2 描写家人团聚 3 描写赏月和吃月饼的情景 4 描写旅游 访友等其他活动 3 参考词汇和短语 中秋节 the Mid Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar 赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake 走亲访友 visit relatives or friends One possible version The Mid Autumn Festival The Mid Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the