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写作训练 观点对比类 典例 最近 你校同学正在参观某英文报组织的一场讨论 讨论的主题是 公园要不要收门票 请你根据下表所提供的信息给报社写一封信客观地介绍讨论情况 60 的同学认为 40 的同学认为 1 不应该收门票1 应收门票 但票价不要太高 2 公园是公众休闲的地方2 支付园林工人工资 3 如收门票 须建大门 围墙 会影 响城市形象 3 购置新花木 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好 2 词数 不少于 120 词 3 参考词汇 门票 entrance fee 写作策略 1 仔细审题 1 体裁 信 2 时态 一般现在时 3 人称 第三人称 2 确定结构 1 Formal greeting 可以用 Dear editor Sir Madam Dr Smith 等 2 Body language 正反双方观点以及原因 3 Formal ending 结束语还要带上 Yours truly sincerely 等 3 筛选词汇 discussion be charged for pay for take on an entrance fee 等 4 句型搜索 I am writing to We have a discussion about It will be necessary to 等 5 组句成篇 常用 to begin with on the contrary 等 范文赏析 Dear editor I m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks 60 of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people s expectation To begin with a park is usually considered to be a place where the public have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work On the contrary if an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for parks it ll be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls The end is that a city will take on a bad look However 40 of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted but it must not be too expensive The money from the tickets can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees With regard to myself I think an entrance fee is necessary It could protect the garden Do you agree with me Yours Li Hua 名师点评 首句表明写信目的 并用限制性 定语从句衔接 明确了争论的焦点 内容上 从正面论述不赞同收费 的原因 句式上时间状语从句和限制性 定语从句有机结合 为条件状语从句 从反面论述收 费的弊端 正反论述是议论文常用手法 增强文章的说服力 对比转折 过渡到下文 陈述另外 一方观点 表达自己的观点 此句为适当发挥 总体评价 文章结构严谨 条理清晰 作者使用了不少高级句子 逻辑严密 正反论述 说服力强 写作指导 Elegance 优雅 原文 So so 普通 1 I m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks We have had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks and I will write to you about it 2 60 of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people s expectation 60 of us students think that people wouldn t like to pay an entrance fee 3 To begin with a park is usually considered to be a place where the public have a good time when they Some classmates think that the public can have a good time in the park when they are not busy either at home or at work are not busy either at home or at work 4 However 40 of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted but it must not be too expensive But 40 of us schoolmates think that people should pay an entrance fee and it must be cheap 5 With regard to myself I think an entrance fee is necessary In my opinion I think people should be charged for an entrance fee 临摹翻译 1 范文佳句 I m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks 临摹翻译 他担心这项活动在市民中是否受欢迎 He is worried about whether this activity will be popular with the citizens 2 范文佳句 For a park is considered to be a place where the public have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work 临摹翻译 政府被认为在处理这个问题上付出了很大的努力 The government is considered to have spared great efforts in dealing with this problem 3 范文佳句 If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for parks it ll be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls 临摹翻译 如果不收门票费 将有必要限制每天进公园的人数 If an entrance fee is not charged the number of people who go to the park should be limited 4 范文佳句 The end is that a city will take on a bad look 临摹翻译 问题是政府将花更多的钱来管理公园 The problem is that the government will have to spend more money managing the parks 5 范文佳句 The money from the tickets can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees 临摹翻译 公园的游船被用来供人们作锻炼和好玩 The boats in the park are used for doin