景点介绍模板

1 写作训练五 景点介绍 典例 假如你是李明 你正在陕西省省会西安旅游 请根据下表所提供的要点介绍一下当地情 况 基本情况 1 历史悠久 华夏文明的发源地 号称 自然历史博物馆 2 四面临山傍水 风景优美 重要名胜古迹 1 秦始皇兵马俑 世界第八大奇迹 2 周边的华山 五岳之一 渭河 秦岭山脉等 3 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 可根据内容要点适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 参 考词汇 秦始皇兵马俑 Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses 起源地 origin 文明 civilization 写作策略 1 仔细审题 1 景点介绍的说明文 2 时态 一般现在时 3 人称 第一人称 2 确定结构 1 Formal greeting 可以用 Dear Sir Madam Dr Smith 等 2 Body language 正文内容 3 Formal ending 正式的建议信结束语还要带上 Yours truly sincerely 等 3 筛选词汇 scenery a long history origin civilization 等 4 句型搜索 As is known to all take for example 等 5 组句成篇 常用 firstly secondly besides last but not least 等 2 范文赏析 I am very glad to introduce my trip in Xi an the capital city of Shanxi Province What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history First as is known to the world Xi an has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization The cultural and historical significance of the area as well as so many historical sites help Xi an enjoy the title of Natural History Museum Just take Terra Cotta Warriors and Horses for example It is praised as the eighth major miracle of the world Second it is in a favorable geographical location surrounded by water and hills for example to the north of the city stands the Qin Mountains and to the north lies the Wei River I have also climbed Mountain Hua one of the five best known mountains in China which is famous for its breath taking cliffs and its unique characteristics It is really worth your visiting I am looking forward to your coming Yours Li Ming 名师点评 景点介绍开头常用句式 首先说 明介绍的内容 句为主语从句 高级句式的使用 让意义表达突出亮点 句为非限制性定语从句 使句与 句之间衔接更流畅 标点符号以及并列连词的巧妙使 用 让整个句子结构更加美观 倒装句的使用 让句子更加多样 化 通过同位语解释说明的功能 让 句子传递的信息更丰富 得体的客套用语 写作指导 Elegance 优雅 原文 So so 普通 1 What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history I am deeply impressed by its natural scenery and long history 2 First as is known to the world Xi an has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization First it is known to the world that Xi an has a long history and Chinese civilization 3 The cultural and historical significance of the area as well as so many historical sites help Xi an enjoy the title of Natural History Museum Both the cultural and historical significance of the area and so many historical sites help Xi an enjoy the title of Natural History Museum 4 to the north of the city stands the Qin Mountains the Qin Mountains stands to the north of 3 and to the north lies the Wei River the city and the Wei River lies to the north 5 I have also climbed Mountain Hua one of the five best known mountains in China which is famous for its breath taking cliffs and its unique characteristics I have also climbed Mountain Hua It is one of the five best known mountains in China and it is famous for its breath taking cliffs and its unique characteristics 临摹翻译 1 范文佳句 I am very glad to introduce my trip in Xi an the capital city of Shanxi Province 临摹翻译 得知你从国外旅行回来我很兴奋 2 范文佳句 What impress me deeply are its natural scenery and long history 临摹翻译 最让我感兴趣的是这里的传统文化和风俗习惯 3 范文佳句 First as is known to the world Xi an has a long history and is the origin of Chinese civilization 临摹翻译 正如大家所知道的 华山以它险峻的悬崖和它独一无二的特征而出名 4 范文佳句 to the north of the city stands the Qin Mountains and to the north lies the Wei River 临摹翻译 在山脚下有一座古老的村庄 5 范文佳句 I have also climbed Mountain Hua one of the five best known mounta