高考英语 书面表达对比类写作素材

用心 爱心 专心1 高考英语书面表达对比类写作高考英语书面表达对比类写作 对比类写作已成为英语书面表达中一个非常重要的形式 1999 年高考题要求学生根据 所给图画介绍学校三年间的新变化 2001 年高考题要求学生比较减负前后的学习情况 2002 年高考题要求学生比较 公园要不要收门票 的两种不同观点 2004 年北京春季高考 要求学生根据所给图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况 不管在工作学习中还是在日常生 活中 对比是人们分析问题和解决问题的重要方法和手段 这就不难理解为什么对比类写 作是高考写作中的一个重要形式 对比类写作一般有两种方式 一是集中比较或对比 集中说明一个对象的诸种特征 二是逐点比较或对比 一条一条地说明两者的异同 对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种 一 今昔对比一 今昔对比 在作今昔对比时 要注意时态的变化 谈到过去的情况要用过去时态 主要是一般过 去时 谈到现在的情况要用现在时态 主要是一般现在时 今昔对比的写作格式是 开头 提出什么事情发生了变化 对具体事例作对比 结 论 写作方式既可采用集中比较 也可采用逐点比较 在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成 整篇文章 1 开头常用句型 1 Great changes have taken place 发生了巨大变化 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China Over the past twenty years or so great changes have taken place in our life 2 Things have begun to improve since 自从 以来 事情有了好转 改善 Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load 2 对比常用句型 1 used to but now 过去常 但是现在 2 in the past but now 在过去 但是现在 3 once but now 曾经 但是现在 4 Things are different now 情况已大不同了 5 But now everything has changed 但是现在全变了 Where the playground usedused toto be nownow standsstands another new building our library I usedused toto have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well NowNow I have more free time My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters inin thethe pastpast butbut nownow we call long distance at home OnceOnce my parents listened to the radio for news and other information butbut nownow we watch the news and other programs on TV When they got married about twenty years ago my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture butbut nownow we have moved into a big new three room apartment 在作对比时 为避免句型重复 可适当变换一些句式 比如 用心 爱心 专心2 1 Another change is 再有一个变化是 AnotherAnother bigbig changechange is in the housing conditions 2 What s more 还有 What sWhat s moremore I can go to bed earlier than in the past 3 结尾常用句型 InIn shortshort changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience 20042004 年北京春季高考题范文年北京春季高考题范文 Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so great changes have taken place in our life 主题句 Take my family for example 过渡句 My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters inin thethe pastpast butbut nownow we call long distance at home 对比一 AndAnd onceonce my parents listened to the radio for news and other information butbut nownow we watch the news and other programs on TV 对比二 AnotherAnother bigbig changechange is in the housing conditions 过渡句 When they got married about twenty years ago my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture butbut nownow we have moved into a big new three room apartment 对比三 InIn shortshort changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience 总结句 在写这类文章时 首先要写好主题句 同学们在审题时要把握全局 把全文要说明的 主题在第一句交待清楚 然后根据所给材料 展开今昔对比 对比时不要单调地使用同一 句型 要稍有变化 并中间要有恰当的过渡句 最后写好总结句 即你对这种现象作出自 己的理解或判断 二 正反观点对比二 正反观点对比 对同一件事情 人们常有不同的看法 即正反两种观点 在写作时 常使用一般现在 时 写作格式一般是 提出问题 两种不同观点 对两种不同观点的论据 理由 逐项作 对比 有时题目会要求说出自己的观点 可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由 最 好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由 写作方式一般采用集中比较 在写作时可用以下句型来 组织完成整篇文章 正反观点对比常用句型 1 We have a discussion about 我们对 进行了一次讨论 We ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks 2 We have had a survey on 我们对 开展了一次调查 We ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools 3 Opinions are divided on the question 在这个问题上意见有分歧 4 Opinions are mainly divided into two groups 有两种不同意见 5 Others have different opinions 其他人有不同看法 5 Sixty percent of the students are for the idea while forty percent of the students think otherwise 有 60 的学生支持这个观点 然而有 40 的学生则不这样 认为 6 Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to but forty 用心 爱心 专心3 percent of the students don t think so 60 的学生认为 是必须的 而 40 的学 生则不这样认为 7 On the one hand On the other hand 一方面 另一方面 在对某一观点作进一步论证时 可用下列句型 1 What s more 还有就是 What s more we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study as well as improve our English 2 Besides 除此之外 Some students cannot discipline themselves Besides it s far too expensive to study abroad which is a load to the family 当然在提出多个论据时 也可用 First Second Third 来列举论据 20022002 年高考题范文年高考题范文 Dear Editor I m writing to tell you about the discussion we ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks 提出问题 Opinions are divided on the question 过渡句 60 of the students are against the idea of entrance fee They believe a public park should be free of charge 观点一 People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away 论据一 What is more it will become necessary to build gates and walls which will do harm to the appearance of a city 论据二 On the other hand 40 think that fees should be charged 观点二 because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers 论据一 and to buy plants and young trees 论据二 They suggest however fees should be charged low Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出 这类文章的写作 首先要提出问题 即双方讨论的问题 接下来提出观点 一 并用一系列论据进行阐明 说明完观点一之后 再提出观点二 继续用论据进行说明 如果需要说明自己的观点 可接下来说明自己的观点 三 数据分析比较三 数据分析比较 此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象 在写作时不 要对数据进行简单的列举 而是要通过对数据进行分析 得出某一结论 即应该通过对数 据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少 而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少 时 态常用一般现在时和一般过去时 写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较 写作 格式一般是 说明现象 数据比较 得出结论 在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文 章 常用句型 1 We can see from the chart that 我们可以从图表中看出 2 We can see from the table that 我们可以从表格中看出 We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse 3 A has increased by X A 增长了 X 用心 爱心 专心4 4 A has doubled in the past five years A 在过去五年里增长了两倍 范文范文 北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化 请根据下表和所给提示 用英语写一篇短文 以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上 年份 交通工具自行车出租车私人汽车公共汽车 20011 000 000125 000250 70017 600 20021 650 000273 000390 80018 900 特点方便 健身快捷 便宜富有慢 脏 拥挤 Along with the city development the transport system is also changing 主 题句 We did a survey on the different transportations According to the result people more a