表达六法为写作添彩.docx

表达六法为写作添彩贵州 高明琴有些文章虽通篇几乎没有什么语法错误，句子也非常通顺，但读起来却给人一种枯燥无味的感觉。文章枯燥乏味的原因在于语言不够生动、形象，过于平淡、单调。解决这一问题的方法有：一、 语序的调整一般的句子都是主语位于句首。如果这些句子的主语相同且结构又相似的话，就会给人一种啰嗦、累赘、单调乏味的感觉。例如：I get up at six every day.I have breakfast at 7.I go to school at 7:45.I get to school at 8:15.I have lunch at school.School is over at 5 in the aftemnoon.I get home at5:30.I do my homework in the evening.若我们适当地把一些句子的语序做些调整的话，读起来就会是另一番感觉。试看：I get up at six every day,I have breakfast at 7.I have breakfast.After breakfast,I go ft school.I go to school at 8:15.Usually I have lunch at school.School is over at 5 in the aftemoon.I get home at 5:30.In the evening I do my homework.写作时，如果我们适当地将一些句子的状语、宾语置于句首，就可以避免这样的单调性，使语言更为生动，且起到对这些句子成分强调之功效。例如：Slowy he said,”Cant you do it yourself?”Here in China we won wont allow any form of workers bding looked upon.Therse letters Id like to send by ording mail,and those two letters by EMS（邮政特快）. Whether she likes it or not,I dont care.当宾语指代的是前一句的内容或其中的人或物时，这样做可使两句衔接得更紧密，过渡更自然。例如：Whether they will come to our help or not I dont know.Whether it will rain or not I dont know.But all these we will discuss fully at tomorrows meeting.有时，为了强调，也可将某一句子成分后移。例如：He showed his frend his stamps.He showed his stamps to his friend.Do you find living here very dull?Do you find it very dull living here?Whether they succeed or fail doesnt interest me.It doesnt interest me wheher they or not.二、 使用强调手段写作时，适当使用一定的强调手段，不但可起到强调之功效，而且也可使语言更为生动。强调的手段有：1、 词语手段。You are the very person Im looking for.They did come to our help.2、 句型手段。It is Lucy who will be sent to the conference.It was because he was ill that he didnt come to school.3、 使用感叹句。I had an interesting trip this summer.What an interesting trip I had this summer!The result of the experiment was very disappointing.How disappointing the result of the experiment is!三、 使用倒装使用倒装有时可使句子的描述更为生动。例如：The door opened and in came a woman with a baby in her arms.Up went the arrow into the sky!使用倒装有时可起到强调作用。例如：Only in this way can we leam English well.(试比较：We can leam English well only in this way.)3Never shall I forget this day!(试比较：I shall never forgrt this day.)Cold as it was.the farmers were still working in their fields.(试比较：Though it was very cold,the farmers were still working in their fields.) 有时，使用倒装可使上下文联系更为紧密。例如：There are about 80 pyramids in Egypt.Inside these pyramids were the bodies of kings and queens.There was an armchair and on a table next to in were two pipes. sonme tobacco and a box of matchers.四、 句型的多样性写作时若通篇基本上使用同样或类似结构的句子，就会让人感到单调乏味，易产生疲劳感。例如：There is a new chassroom building on one side of the rond.There used to be a playground on the other side before.But there is a library now.There are all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines in the library.There is a new playground in front of the school.There are a lot of trees on and around the school.但若修改如下，读起来就大不一样了。例如：On one sinde of the road there is a new classroom building On the side,where the playground used tk be.now stands another building-our library,in which you can find all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines The playground is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.五、 动静态、主客体等的变化有时，我们也可通过动态与静态、主体与客体、正反叙述的变化，来避免文章的单调性。例如：The teacher smiled happily.There was a happy smile on the teachers face.We spent all our money on the house.The house cost us all our money.She likes money best of all.She likes nothing better than money.六、 使用一定的修辞手法Another earthquake took place in Sam Francisco in 1989.Another earthquake hitshook San Francisco in 1989.(Pers