八年级英语下册单元作文辅导

中小学个性化辅导专家 1 新目标八年级英语下书面表达复习指导新目标八年级英语下书面表达复习指导 第第 1 单元单元 本单元的考点 运用将来时预测未来 如未来的家乡 未来人们或是你的生活 一定要注意将来 时的运用 写地方你可以用以下句子开头 I am from It s a beautiful city with green mountains and two big river I think in ten years the road will be wider and cleaner 我想十年后 的马路会更宽 更干净 There will be more tree in the mountains 山上会有更多的树 The people in will be much happier 等等 范文 In the future I think my life will be more interesting and our world will become more beautiful Maybe I will be a teacher and make friends with my students Also I will live in an apartment with my parents Of course I will have a lovely pet dog because I think dogs are friendly to people During the week I will wear a suit to look smart But on the weekend I ll dress more casually Oh I will travel a lot I would like to visit many English speaking countries like America and Australiaa 第第 2 单元单元 本单元的考点 谈论遇到的问题或困扰 或者回复求助信 当人家遇到困难时 给别人真诚的建 议 主要用到 could do 和 should do 一般以 There are a lot of things you could do 你有很多可以做的事情 开头 然后以 I think you should could 来组织整篇文章 常见的建议有 1 you should say sorry 2 you should write a letter 3 you could buy him a gift 4 you should have a talk with him to communicate better 5 you should find a part time job 等等 最后 别忘了在信的结尾写上 Good luck 祝人家好运 范文 假如你叫王磊 你和同桌李明发生了争吵 事后你很后悔 想和他从归于好 但又不知道 该怎么做 请给你的笔友发一封电子邮件 寻求他的建议 Dear Tom I m very upset I need your help Li Ming is my deskmate We get on well all the time But yesterday I argued with him for an unimportant thing And I shouted at him After that he didn t talk to me I hope he will get over it I want to be friends with him again But I don t know what to do Could you give me some advice please Many thanks Yours sincerely Wang Lei 第第 3 单元单元 本单元的考点 谈论过去的事情 是一定要用过去进行时 来表示当过去某事发生的时候 某某 正在做某事 而同学们千万不要忘了过去进行时的格式 was were doing 而且过去发生的短暂 的动作一定要到一般过去时 注意以下句子划线处 中小学个性化辅导专家 2 例如 When the accident happened Sam was taking a shower Nick was watching TV Then they helped the injured people together 当事故发生时 山姆正在洗澡 尼克正在看电视 然后他们一 起去帮助伤者 范文 范文 昨晚七点开始下雨 请你描述一下当时你和你的家人分别在做些什么 It began to rain at about 7 00 yeaterdat evening At that time I was doing my homework in my bedroom And my sister was playing with her favorite toy doll My father was watching TV He was watching CCTV news My mother was washing dishes in the kitchen 第第 4 单元单元 本单元的考点是 转述 直接引语转为间接引语 他人的话 其作文的考察要点一般是转述别人 的话或评价 课本 30 页上的课文可能对你会有很大的帮助 但是请一定要注意 转述时 如 果前面的是过去时 后面从句部分切记用和过去相关的时态 I got my report card I did OK this time My Chinese teacher said I could do better My math teacher said I was clever MY English teacher said I was hard working 我接到我的成绩册了 我这次做得不错 我语文老师说我可以做得更好 数学老师说我聪明 用语老师说我很努力 等等 范文 Dear aunt I got my report card yeaterday I did OK in some subjects My math teacher said I was hard working My Spanish teacher said I was good at speaking And another good news is that my geography teacher said I did well in writing I found science very difficult this term So my worst report was from my science teacher He said I was a lazy student But it s not true Well that s all for now 第第 5 单元单元 本单元的考点 假设if 真实性条件状语从句 而这单元作文的考察要点 往往和1单元的 一般将来时 相结合 特别是命题为 你长大了 毕业了想当什么 如果你成了 你将 会 特别注意 主句将来时 从句一般现在时 例如 I want to be a pilot after leaving school If I become a pilot I will visit different places in the world and make different friends It will open up my eyes to the outside world 我毕业以后想当一名飞行员 如果我成了飞行员 我会参观不同的地方 交不同的朋友 开拓我的眼界 等等 范文 如果将来你很有钱 你会如何帮助他人 If I have a lot of money I will buy what I need and do what I always want to do For example traveling around the world studying outside China buying my parents a big apartment I hope my dream will come true Of course I will do something helpful to others I will give away money to charities I will help those kids who are too poor to go to school 中小学个性化辅导专家 3 Unit 2 书面表达 如何写有关提建议的短文 在英语学习中 我们常常会遇到针对某人 某事或某种活动提出建议的写作要求 写作时 首先 要弄清楚题目提出的问题是什么 根据问题应提出哪些合理的建议 再用常用的提建议的句型进 行写作 以下为提建议的常用句型 1 You could do 你可以做 2 Maybe you should do 也许你应该 3 I think you should do 我认为你应该 4 You shouldn t do 你不应该做 5 I think you d better do 我认为你最好做 6 Why don t you do Why not do 你为什么不做 写这类文章时要注意语气委婉 有礼貌且有条理 首先对提建议的对象所表达的观点表示赞同或反 对 然后可采用列点式的方法将自己的观点一条条列出 无论采用哪种方式 都要将自己的观点 有条理的呈现 最后 应用总结性的语言陈述自己的观点 典型例题分析 一 假如你是李明 上周你班同学就 毕业前我们该为学校做些什么 进行了讨论 请你根据下 列的表格提示 将同学们的建议写一封信告诉你的笔友 David 并谈谈你的想法及理由 注意 不少于 80 词 Dear David Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate The Students in our class have different suggestions Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for our school Others think that it s not necessary to spend money We can study hard and 一些同学建议全班筹钱为学校图书馆买书或为学校买 其他东西 另外一些同学建议无需花钱 好好学习 让学校以我们为 荣 你的想法及理由 中小学个性化辅导专家 4 make our school feel proud of us In my opinion we don t have to spend money We can do something meaningful without money For example we can do some voluntary work to beautify the school s environment or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us I d like to know your idea Could you give me some advice I look forward to hearing from you Best wishes Li Ming 2 格林先生由于工作压力大 生活上遇到了一个难题 下面是他给心理专家 Dr John Smith 写的 一封信 你能帮他写封回信 给他提出一些合理的建议 使他重新恢复健康吗 要求 80 词左右 提示 1 尽量不想白天的工作 2 睡前适当做些运动 3 听一些音乐 Dear Dr Smith I was healthy before but these days I can t sleep very well I always can t stop thinking about the work in the daytime I don t know what I should do Could you help me please Thanks a lot Yours Jim Green Dear Mr Green I m sorry to hear that you can t sleep well There are a lot of things you could do I can give you some advice about that First you should try not to think about the work in the daytime after you go to bed Next You d better do some sports before you go to bed Then it is good gor your sleep to listen to some music when you go to bed I hope you will get better soon Yours John Smith 书面表达 假如你叫王磊 你和同桌李明发生了争吵 事后你很后悔 想和他从归于好 但又不知道该怎么 做 请给你的笔友发一封电子邮件 寻求他的建议 Dear Tom I m very upset I need your help Li Ming is my classmate We get on well all the time But yesterday I argued with him for an unimportant thing And I shouted at him After that he didn t talk to me I hope he will get over it I want to be friends with him again But I don t know what to do Could you give me some advice please Many thanks Yours sincerely Wang Lei Unit 3 书面表达 中小学个性化辅导专家 5 如何写描述过去经历的短文 对过去的事情进行描述 属于叙事记叙文 该类短文主要是记述事件 描写见闻等 写叙事记述 文时 一般是开门见山地直接交代时间 地点 人物 事件等 然后详细叙述事情发生的原因 过程和结果等 一个事件的组成包括许多因素 写作时要选择与题目意思相关的主要材料 以下为描述过去经历的常用句型 1 On Sunday I had a picnic with my parents 星期六 我和父母一起去野餐了 2 We planned to climb the mountain on weekends 我们打算周末去爬山 3 Although we were all tired we enjoyed ourselves this day 今天尽管很累 但是我们玩得很高兴 4 What a terrible happy day 多么糟糕的 快乐的一天 写叙事记叙文要注意以下几点 此类短文要求写出过去的经历 在写作时 主题要明确 文中所 有的内容都要围绕主题展开 要正确运用所给词汇或提示 勿漏五要素 即时间 地点 人物 事件和结果 要正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时 注意人称和数的变化 典型例题 在你成长的历程中 有些日子是会让你开心 经久难忘 请以 My pleasant day 为题 根据以 下提示信息写一篇 80 词左右的短文 以记叙你那天的活动和感受 提示 ways to relax TV computer sports music shopping work homework housework cooking cleaning other things enough sleep delicious food 要求 1 参考所给提示 可适当发挥 2 语句通顺 意思连贯 书写工整 My pleasant day I had a wonderful day yesterday I got up very early and cleaned the room with my sister We had breakfast we went shopping by bike And we bought many kinds of fruit and food We had delicious food for lunch at the restaurant We ate hamburgers and had some drink but I knew they were not healthy and not good for us And it took me the whole afternoon to do my homework and wash my clothes We felt tired but we were very happy It was great fun 练习 假设有一天你和你的朋友 Ted 在放学的路上看到了一个不明飞行物 你想把这一情况告诉给当 地一家英语报社 请根据下面的提示 写一篇 80 词左右的短文 中小学个性化辅导专家 6 时间 下午 5 点 地点 大街上 物体 发白光的圆形物体 Unit 4 书面表达 如何写提纲作文 提纲作文又称材料作文或提示作文 它是根据所提供的场景或材料进行写作的一种短文 它具有 提醒灵活 内容易于控制 简单易写等特征 因此中考英语书面表达题多数都以这种形式出现 写这类作文时要把握以下几点 1 仔细阅读有关提示 对题目所提供的信息一定要认真分析 明确有哪些要点 题目究竟要表达 什么 2 提示的内容是文章的总体框