山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（13）

用心 爱心 专心1 山西省山西省 20122012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作 写作 1313 短文改错 Dear Sir I am university student I once thought life at the1 university must be excellent but now I changed my mind 2 I have three roommates and I was the last one tomove3 into the dormitory Last term I got along peacefully and4 happy But I find they are not willing to be with me now 5 They don t talk with me they ve become cold toward6 me Many time I have wanted to talk with them about what7 I felt like but I failed to find an opening When leaving8 alone I am always recall this sadness Why can t I win true 9 friendship I m lonely and look forward to get your advice soon 10 Yours Peter 书面表达书面表达 假如你叫李华 寒假期间要去英国Embassy English Language School EELS 进行短期 学习 以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表 请你仔细阅读 按要求给校方回一封信 Schedule for EELS Winter English Courses English Total Hours of Total Hours of Part Date 用心 爱心 专心2 CoursesStudytime Job six week course 12048 Feb 1 Mar 12 Four week course 60No Job but Tour Instead Feb1 Feb 27 Please include the following 1 Your choice and possible reasons 2 Your present English level 3 Specific language skill you want to improve 4 Other personal requirements 注意 1 信的开头已为你写好 2 词数 100 左右 可以适当增加细节 以使行 文连贯 Dear Sir Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter English course in your school 用心 爱心 专心3 1 am 后加上 a 2 changed 前加上 have 或改为 change 3 正确 4 I 改为 we 5 happy 改为 happily 6 第二个 they 前面加上 and 7 time 改为 times 8 leaving 改为 left 9 去掉 am 10 get 改为 getting One possible version Dear Sir Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the winter English course in your school As for my choice between the two courses I prefer the four week course for 60 hours of study Because this would allow me more time to do some traveling and make a few new friends too Of all the subjects I m learning at school I like English best I have been learning English for 6 years but my spoken English remains poor So I hope to take this chance to improve it If possible I d like to stay with a family for a couple of days so that