2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 4 Sharing 5 Section Ⅴ Writing教案 新人教版选修7

1 sectionsection writingwriting 关于志愿活动或有关分享的记叙文 文体感知 关于志愿活动或有关分享的文章是记述活动的目的 过程以及结果 或影响 的记叙文 注意事项 理清与活动相关的时间 地点 人物 活动的过程以及影响等 明确文章 结构 开头部分介绍人物 活动的目的或原因 第二部分介绍活动的过程或者主人公做了 什么 最后记述活动对他人 自己或社会的影响 找准时态与人称 理清写作顺序 将 文章的要素合理结合 使其完整 增分佳句 1 having had a heated discussion we decided to do something 热烈讨论后 我们决定做一些事情 2 we also realize that we can do something to those who are in need 我们也意识到我们能对那些需要的人做一些事 3 the story may be unbelievable but it still has a realistic significance now 这个故事可能不可信 但是它现在仍然具有一个现实意义 写作模板 last week in our class volunteered their time to help other people having had a heated discussion we decided to do 总体介 绍活动的目的和背景 on day we set out early in the morning on one s arrival arriving we did first then we did and did in addition not only did we do but also we did last but not least we did 叙述活动的过程 we have learned that we also realize that we can do to those who are in need 表达对活动的感受和活动的影响 写作要求 你校英文杂志社正在举办有关志愿者活动的征文大赛 请你根据自己的志愿者经历写 一篇短文参赛 内容包括 1 表达对志愿者活动的热爱 2 2 讲述做志愿者的经历 3 呼吁更多人参与志愿者活动 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 审题谋篇 词汇推敲 1 对某事充满热情 be enthusiastic about sth 2 对某人有益 be beneficial to sb 3 对某人有意义 be meaningful to sb 4 自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth 5 全身心投入到某事 devote one s efforts to sth 6 号召某人做某事 call on sb to do sth 遣词造句 1 完成句子 我热衷于志愿者活动 它不仅对他人有益而且对我而言很有意义 i am enthusiastic about volunteer activities they are not only beneficial to others but also meaningful to me 自从进入高中以来 我有多次志愿者活动的经历 since i attended high school i ve had several experiences of being a volunteer 我印象最深的是帮助地震受灾区的受害者 and the most impressive one is when i volunteered to assist the victims in an earthquake 我一到达受灾地区 就帮忙为灾民发放慰问品 i arrived at the disaster hit area i helped to distribute relief 3 materials to the victims 我努力帮助医护人员进行救援工作 i devoted all my efforts to the rescue work with the medical staff 为了安慰那些失去家园的人 我与他们谈话 鼓励他们 to comfort those who lost their family i talked with them and inspired them 当一名志愿者使我感到高兴与自豪 being a volunteer makes me delighted and proud 我想号召人人参加志愿者活动 i want to call on everyone to take part in volunteer activities 2 句式升级 把 中的两个句子合并并升级为定语从句 i am enthusiastic about volunteer activities which are not only beneficial to others but also meaningful to me 把 中的两个句子合并并升级为时间状语从句 as soon as i arrived at the disaster hit area i helped to dist ribute relief materials to the victims 妙笔成篇 oneone possiblepossible versionversion i am enthusiastic about volunteer activities which are not only beneficial to others but also meaningful to me since i attended high school i ve had several experiences of being a volunteer and the most impressive one is when i volunteered to assist the victims in an earthquake as soon as i arrived at the disaster hit area i helped to distribute relief materials to the victims in addition i devoted all my efforts to the rescue work with the medical staff besides to comfort those who lost their family i talked with them and inspired them being a volunteer makes me delighted and proud here i want to call on everyone to take part in volunteer activities 假定你叫李华 上周末你和几位同学在学校附近的孤儿院做志愿者 请你按照以下提 4 示写一篇英语短文 内容包括 1 时间和地点 2 活动的主要内容 分发礼物 教他们阅读和写作 打扫卫生和洗衣服 3 你的感受 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 参考词汇 孤儿院 orphanage oneone possiblepossible versionversion last weekend some of my classmates and i went to work as volunteers in an orphanage near our school when we got there all the children welcomed us happily we were touched deeply and gave them big hugs after that we gave away presents to them and taught them reading and writing besides we helped to clean their