高考英语一轮复习 暑假轮短文改错选练（二）1.doc

山东长岛县2017高考英语暑假（一轮）短文改错选练（二）【2015届河北省石家庄二中高三开学考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文以自己等车这件事为例说明耐心的重要性【答案解析】1. importance 考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我们的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be important 。2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短语。Wait for sth 等待。3. past-passed 考查动词的时态。句意：30分钟过去了，但没有一辆车来。根据but no bus came用一般过去时。4. on foot 考查固定短语。句意：沮丧又着急，我决定步行去。On foot 步行5. when-than 考查固定句型。No sooner .than 一。就6. take the next bus 考查固定短语。 句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。The next bus 下一趟车。7. another 30 minutes 考查搭配。句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。Another 30 minutes 再三十分钟。8. did I realize 考查倒装 句意：只有这时我才意识到我的问题。Only +状语 +部分倒装 。9. put后it去掉 考查定语从句。句意：耐心会浪费掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定语从句。10. losing 考查固定短语。Close to 靠近, to是介词，故后面用动名词的形式。2012模拟短文改错QWhen people think about precious things, they usuallythink about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have1._ something very preciously in my room. Its not a CD player or2. _ a cellphone. Its the view from my window. Im lucky live3. _ near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in4. _ the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground,5. _ young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and6. _ old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before7. _ their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music,8. _ but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and9. _ enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view.10. _ 【参考答案及解析】1. and but考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处表转折用but。2. preciously precious考查形容词的用法。修饰不定代词用形容词且放在其后。3. lucky后加to考查形容词的用法。此处考查短语be lucky to do sth。4. 去with考查介词的用法。此处face是及物动词，故不用介词with。5. tree trees考查名词的单复数。根据语境应为多棵树。6. walked walking考查现在分词作宾补。此处考查see sb doing sth。7. 正确 经分析本句8. their my考查代词指代一致。根据文意应为“在我眼前”。9. 去a 考查冠词的用法。解题关键：free time是不可数名词，其前不能用a。10. enjoyed enjoy考查动词时态。根据语境应为一般现在时。【由陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题改编】短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，瀚你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个翻词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1、每处锗误及修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。On the Childrens Day last year, our city held an interested activity. In theactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the richcould have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. Parents allhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that our childrencould taught a lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth dont have enoughfood and clothes. Every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food. The activitywas held make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich andalso make the parents know that too much material life wont always do good for the children.【参考答案】短文改错On the Childrens Day last year, our city held an interested activity. In the the interestingactivity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the richacted could have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. Parents allbreadhoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that our children theircouldtaught a lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth dont have enoughbefood and clothes. Every day only one halfthe world can enjoy enough food. The activityor ofwas heldmake the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich andtoalso make the parents know that too much material life wont always do good for the children.for 改为to 或把do改为be(2013昆明市适应性检测)We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I dont agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Lets take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.【参考答案】：We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I dont agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Lets take Li An as example. Only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is the process in which try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy . (2013浙江省五校联考)A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.【参考答案】：A young man called LowCarbon Brother a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a life with so many modern around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.短文改错At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy76._time. Two days before New Years Day, I went out with my 77. _friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. 78. _It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the 79. _food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new 80. _clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher,81. _Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didnt find Chinese 82. _New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes!83. _Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to 84. _start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long! 85. _书面表达 （满分30分）61. bunch 62. praise 63. permission 64. blame 65. consideration 66. differs 67. familiar 68. relief 69. delivered 70. gradually 71. misled 72. length 73. promoting 74.appointed 75. annoyed 76. have改为had77. 此行无错。78. the改为a。79. and改为but。80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。81. lots 后加of。82. surprised 改为surprise。83. excited改为exciting。84. 去掉第二个so。85. long改为longer。【2015高考复习】阅读理解Finally，I entered the university.Because of my careful savings，I did not have to work during the school years.Then，summer came and it was time to work harder than ever.I continued working as a waitress at night，instructed tennis camps several mornings a week and worked as a secretary for a few hours in the afternoons.I even decided to take a class at a community (社区) college.This class at the community college saved me $650.It was an extremely tiring summer and made me anxious to return to my relatively easy life at the university.During my second and third years of undergraduate schooling，I decided to work about five hours per week in the campus (校园)admissions office answering phones.This provided a little spending money and kept me from drawing my savings out.The overall situation looked hopeful as I approached my senior year as long as I could make as much money as I had the previous summer.I wanted to go to Israel to study for 3 weeks，but I hesitated in making this decision because it would cost me $1,600 more to get the credits in Israel.About two weeks later my mom called to tell me that I had $1,600 in the bank that I had forgotten about！One of my concerns about this trip was not only the cost，but the loss of time to make money；however，I made as much that summer in the ten weeks when I was at home as I had made during the fourteen weeks when I was at home the summer before.The way everything worked together to make this trip possible was one of the most exciting things that have ever happened to me.This experience has shaped me in many important ways.The first thing that I learned was the importance of a strong work ethic (道德准则)Working long hours did a lot to develop my character and helped me learn the value of a dollar.It also made me learn how to search for creative ways to settle difficult situations.【语篇解读】作者非常勤奋地做着各种兼职工作，既锻炼了自己，又挣到了钱，为以后自我的发展奠定了良好的基础。1Where did the writer probably work parttime before attending the university?AIn a restaurant.BIn the tennis camps.CIn a company. DIn the campus admissions office.解析细节理解题。根据第一段中的“I continued working as a waitress at night”可知，作者上大学前在饭店工作过。答案A2The writer took a class at a community college mainly because_.Ashe wanted to save money Blife there was relatively easyCsummer time was tiringDit was required by the university解析细节理解题。根据第一段中的“This class at the community college saved me $650.”可知，作者是为了省钱。答案A3The writers major concern about the trip to Israel was that_.Aher mother would not give her approvalBshe would fail to get credits in IsraelCa wellpaid summer job would be lostD$1,600 couldnt be drawn out in time解析推理判断题。根据第二段中的“One of my concerns about this trip was not only the cost，but the loss of time to make money”可知，作者主要担心没有时间赚钱了，一分高薪的暑假工作失去了。答案C4The passage is mainly about how the writer_.Amade money on the college campusBmanaged to make full use of her vacationCwas forced to support herself by her motherDwas shaped by working parttime through college解析主旨大意题。通读全文内容可知，本文主要讲述了作者通过做各种兼职工作，学到了很多东西，塑造了自己的性格，懂得了金钱的价值。答案D【2015高考复习】阅读理解“Reconstituted” families are more and more common in the UK.Steve and Debbie got married in 2001 and had two children，Lily and Alex.Unfortunately，Steve and Debbies marriage didnt work out and they got divorced in 2006.The children live with Debbie.In 2008，Debbie remarried.Her new husband，Martin，has three children from his previous marriage and they visit Debbie，Martin，Lily and Alex at weekends.In addition，Debbie is pregnant with her third child.Shes expecting a boy who will be a halfbrother to Lily and Alex and also to Martins three other children.Confused？Debbies family arrangements might have seemed strange 30 years ago but nowadays this kind of “reconstituted” family is increasingly common in the UK.Almost half of all marriages in Britain end in divorce and over 40% of marriages are remarriages.More than 10% of all British children live with one birth parent and a stepparenta parent who isnt their biological mother or father.The traditional “nuclear” family of two parents and their children is not so traditional any more.What does all of this mean for parents in these “reconstituted” families？“There are difficulties and challenges，” says Debbie.“Different families have different routines and it can be difficult for children to move between their two families.Birthdays and holidays can be tricky.Where do the children go？Who should they spend their time with？Also，when my children are naughty it can be difficult for Martin to tell_them_off.Things that might be simple in a traditional family can be a bit more complicated.”And how about the children？Martins eldest child，Ella，is 12.“I like my two families，” she says.“I live with my mum but visit my dad quite often and Im happy that my mum and dad get along OK.Theyre not married any more but its good that they can still be friends.” Of course divorce and separation are never easy but many families in the