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借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石 先借来再转为自用是巧学者之 法 内容可适用于读写任务正文部分 Miss Q 英语作文例文点评 88 篇 收集于网络 要求 英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言 No Pains No Gains 不劳则不获 并让大家围绕如下三 方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文 人们在困难面前容易气馁 并产生不劳而获的想法 不劳则不获 这一格言能给予人鼓励 学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫 所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动 范文 No Pains No Gains People attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties They start with a great interest and passion When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought their interest diminishes and their passion wanes At that time they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor The old saying No pains no gains comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that calls for exertion To improve our grades is what every student wants We may envy those who have achieved excellence and wonder what makes them succeed In fact their secret of success is no secret It depends largely on their efforts Good grades only belong to hardworking students Many thanks for the favor you did for me 评语 该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述 层次清楚 语言流畅易懂 interest diminishes and their passion wanes 中词语搭配讲究 reaping a good harvest without much labor 用另一个习惯表达法点 出了 No Pains No Gains 的含义 同时又避免了重复 文章句式灵活 长短搭配得当 使文章朗朗 上口 虽然是议论文 但却没有枯燥之感 要求 根据下面的提示写一篇短文 内容须包括下面几个要点 没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功 事业成功须非凡的干劲 有些人害怕困难 则一事无成 范文 Where there is a Will There is a Way No man can win success without strong will We hear some men have got good results but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success Success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome difficulties So it is important for us to have great resolution Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties If they meet with some difficulties they will give in So they get nothing eventually So let s make up our minds stick to it and surely win success in our career Focus on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful Don t focus on the easiest things 评语 对这种提纲式作文 一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容 但又无须拘泥于提纲 更不能逐字逐句地 翻译 对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力 大胆地创作扩展 要求 很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就 但不是所有人都能取得胜利 成功需要顽强的意志 锲而不舍的 努力 勤奋学习的精神 请你以此为主要内容 准备一篇百字左右的简短发言 范文 The way to success Everyone tries to achieve success in his her career But some finally attain their aims while others fail Why Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway Strong will perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be Life is short and we have too much to do Without diligence no one can achieve anything I believe that where there is a will there is a way and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts Don t be afraid of life Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact 评语 这是一篇议论文 作者首先提出问题 再提出自己观点 意志坚强 锲而不舍 勤奋 是成功的三大 要素 作者在结尾 巧妙地运用了谚语 where there is a will there is a way 使文章增色不少 要求 坚强的意志 Man s Strong Will 请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句 写一篇以坚强的意志为题的 文章 Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will It is not easy to cultivate a strong will 范文 Man s Strong Will Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark and encouragement when we are frustrated With this meritorious quality no enemy can overwhelm us and no obstacles can stand in our way As the saying goes where there is a will there is a way All pain helps to make us rise how ever much we may hate it at the time There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will During the Long March the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship Helen Keller a strong willed American blind woman mastered the English language and became a well known educator Such instances abound and suffice it just to enumerate the two Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity you ll be more satisfied It is not easy to cultivate a strong will First of all we must set up a firm faith in our cause namely the cause of communism and be ready to devote our lives to it Secondly we must learn from strong willed persons especially from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood Finally we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character 评语 本文为议论文 首段的 neither nor It is strong will that 和 no enemy no obstacles 的 运用 加强了文章的语气 突出了坚强意志的重要价值 段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用 第二段 用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦 凯勒这两个例子 有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题 末段谈如何培养坚强的意志 层次清晰 观点正确 具有说服力 要求 以 Don t Stop Halfway 为题写一篇议论文 论证具体 结构完整 字数 100 150 范文 Don t Stop Halfway When a man is doing some work he desires some benefit from it In order to get this benefit the must do the task to the end and completely finish it To finish a task whether hard or not requires patience and firmness Therefore when you have some work to do you must do it faithfully irrespective of the difficulty Difficulties and obstacles are unavoidable if you turn your back on meeting them you will succeed in nothing but if you can overcome them you will accomplish something To stop halfway is very bad Suppose that a precious stone is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it you must reach for it you must not stop halfway If you stop halfway you will not only get nothing but also lose something because your time and strength will be wasted It is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time and never stop halfway Cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking even if it means bucking peer pressure 评语 作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力 告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间 精 力 段落安排逐层深入 循循善诱 全文整体结构完整 自然 要求 题目 Failure 失败 是一个人经常遇到的 失败不是好事 因为它使人的努力 efforts 付之东流 但 是 失败也是好事 它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西 试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法 范文 Failure Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one But failure can also benefit us It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced Also we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves So when we start again we can succeed more easily Therefore failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us When we fail we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience Then we may succeed in the future Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats claim them all as victories 评语 本文最大的优点是正反对照 条理清楚 高考作文时间很短 所以谋篇布局显得十分重要 本文脉络 清楚 浅显易懂 应该说在考场中是容易取胜的 此外 本篇行文简练 显得干净利落 要求 每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历 失败对于我们来说 到底意味着什么 请你按如下提纲写一篇文 章 谈谈你对失败的理解 失败是生活中的常事 人们对失败的态度各不相同 就我而言 我认为失败 范文 Is Failure a Bad Thing Failure is quite a common thing in our life As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties Of course we should try our best to get over them but in many cases it is not so easy or even impossible Then how should we face failure Different people take different attitudes towards failure When faced with failure some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence They refuse to make any further efforts These people will probably never amount to anything in life Some people just don t fear failure They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success As a result not only can failure stop them but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder Such people are sure to succeed someday As for me I don t think failure is a bad thing Failure can never discourage me but only enrich my experience and steel my will With this positive attitude in mind I will try hard in anything I m determined to accomplish and attain success in the end 评语 本文按题目所给纲要分为三段 首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的 末句用了一句设问 起 到了承上启下的作用 第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度 先写错误观点进行铺垫 而后再写 正确观点 这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度 同时为引出第三段做好的了准备 末段作者则阐 明了自己的观点 全文层次清楚 段落间衔接紧密而自然 主题突出 语言流畅 用词准确 要求 失败 是人人都不愿体验的结果 有人说失败使人消沉 有人说失败是成功之母 你对失败的态度怎 样 写一篇短文 字数 150 200 字 题目自拟 范文 Is Failure a Bad Thing Failure is a common thing in our daily lives As students We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations When we play game we sometimes can t avoid losing to others And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences However there are different attitudes towards failure Some people lose heart in failure they think the world has come to an end Some people don t take failure seriously and just ignore it while some others learn much from it In my opinion what really counts is not failure itself but what we think of failure and do after failure As long as we believe in ourselves and don t give up and in the mean time learn something from our failure We ll certainly be successful in the end So I m never afraid of failure for I believe that failure is not a bad thing but the mother of success 看问题一定要看到正反两面 体现在文中 就往往是鲜明的对比 评语 表达思想清楚 内容比较充实 文字流畅 句子结构多样 第一段 第二段主题句简练而贴切 句间 衔接比较自然 用词造句有不少闪光点 如 the world has come to an end 等 要求 请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句 写一篇题为 诚实 的文章 It is usually better to be honest than dishonest One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation 范文 honesty We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy It is usually better to be honest than dishonest People tend to believe an honest man no matter what he does and what he says On the contrary dishonest people are not trustworthy For this reason honest people are always more successful than the dishonest So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience If a person tells lies his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster He will always live in fright Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation All people consider what you ve said true and trust you just because you are an honest man Therefore you can say what you like and do what you like without fear You will feel very happy Likewise just because of your honesty people respect you and love you Gradually you will gain a good reputation To be honest will ensure you a happy life 评语 该文内容切题 详略安排得当 重点放在诚实的益处 即第二段和第四段上 这两段的段末均有一句 总结句与段首的主题句相呼应 使段落结构完整 同时强化了主题 文章语言略显单调 但比较顺畅 表达也较清楚 要求 班会课上要求同学们为大家用英文讲述一个小哲理 要求条理清晰 有自己的见解 你的发言稿内容 如下 真诚是一种重要的思想方法 应该弄清楚什么是真诚 为什么有时人们难以做到真诚 真诚 是一种人生态度 范文 On the Truth Truth is an attitude of the mind It is important if one does not wish to inconvenience and bore his or her friends It means telling no lies and never backing out of one s word But it is more important to know what is the truth and not to slide into those untruthful habits of thought which are so pleasant and so easy There is a word named the victory habit of mind People who have this mind are unduly preoccupied by what was socially and morally convenient One should have the courage to think uncomfortably since it is only by rejecting the convenience that one can come to think the truth Truth is an attitude of the life 直线式思维 层层推进是英文的习惯 避免 Chinglish 不仅仅要防止出错 还要培养语感和思路 评语 这篇短文首尾照应 用同一句式 只换了一个单词 mind life 却把意思推进了一层 很符合 英文的习惯 能起到警人的效果 能够不停地把意思深入 也是这篇短的一个特点 它使用的是层层 推进的办法 没有在每个点上展开论述 但却显得乏味 要求 题目 自信 请指明什么是自信 并阐明自信的重要性 范文 Self confidence Self confidence means trust in one s own ability As a very important psychological quality it brings your creative power to play arouses you enthusiasm for work and helps you overcome difficulties When asked of the secret of her success Marie Curie answered My success lies in perseverance and self confidence the latter in particular Self confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed It is self confidence that inspires you to cope with any arduous task With self confidence the goal you intend can be reached and so can the hard nut be cracked Some people find most of the things impossible saying It is beyond my ability to do the task or I am not cut out for it In many cases these are only lame excuses When our heart is void of self confidence every hope is gone and everything we are laying our hands on is spoilt Be honest with yourself about your strengths and weakness and manage accordingly 评语 本文为议论文 分三部分层层深入地论述了自信心这一可贵的心理素质 首段在给自信心作出简要解 释后 接着阐明了自信心的重要性 段末恰到好处地引用了居里夫人的话来支持自己的论点 第二段 进一步陈述了自信心的重要性 而在末段作者首先通过两句话生动地表现出了缺乏自信心人的心态 而后从反而指出如果缺乏自信心 则会一事无成 要求 ambition 的意思是我们的生活目标 是对成功 权力 财富等等的强烈渴望 ambition 并不意味着要 成为最好的 它是一种激励我们向前的目标 使我们不因失败而失去希望 每个人都有自己的 ambition 但不是每个人都能实现自己的渴望 结合以上内容 以 Ambition 为题写一篇议论文 不要逐字逐句翻译 字数 100 字左右 范文 Ambition Our ambition means the goal we have in our life It is a strong desire for success power riches and so on To have ambition doesn t necessarily mean one wants to be number one This is not the real sense of the word True ambition is the goal that encourages us to look forward and not to lose hope because of failure Ambition differs from person to person and everyone has his or her own ambition Yet not every one of us can succeed in what we desire to do Live all you can It s a mistake not to The right time is any time that one is still so lucky as to live 评语 本文充分表达了题目的要求 思路清晰 结构完整 内容简明扼要 语句活泼流利 用词直接精当 避免了华丽浮夸的词藻或含义模糊的语句 紧扣题意 中心明确 是一篇成功的议论文 结尾处引用 格言更显出深厚的语言功底 为全文增色不少 要求 文明礼貌 Good Manners 请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句 写一篇以文明礼貌为题的文章 People all over the world set great regard on good manners There are good manners in which we behave in public places If everyone has developed good manners 范文 Good Manners People all over the world set great regard on good manners To a certain degree good manners indicate a person s good education and breeding In schools it is part of students moral trailing to develop good manners A person with good manners always wins praise On the contrary people will frown on him if he behaves roughly and impolitely There are good manners in which we behave in public places It is a good manner to offer help to the young the old and the handicapped when they are in need of it So is it to behave politely and keep away from foul language Besides we should guard against such minor offenses as making a loud noise casting peels and shells smoking and spitting If everyone has developed good manners people will from a more harmonious relationship If everyone behaves considerately towards others and follows the social ethics people will live in a better world With the general mood of society improved there will be a progress of civilization 评语 本文按照题目所给的纲要从三方面论述了文明礼貌的重要性 意思明晰 文理通顺 frown on keep away from guard against minor offenses 等小词用得准确自然 很好地传达了作者的意思 要求 在现代社会 请你谈一谈对礼貌的看法 字数 100 150 字 范文 Politeness Politeness means good behavior in social intercourse Codes of politeness may differ from country to country But the object is always to add pleasure and grace to daily life A polite person is always an agreeable companion He is agreeable because he is always thinking of others before himself He doesn t interrupt people when they are talking He is careful not to say anything to hurt other people s feelings He doesn t push in a crowd but waits quietly until it is his turn to pass In addition by acting in accordance with the prevailing customs he is considered a member of the civilized society otherwise he is looked upon as a fool and will be avoided by people of high breeding Politeness is truly a valuable asset If you are courteous to other people you have good manners and your everday life will be much happier 评语 论点鲜明 文章开头即表明作者观点 接着围绕这一观点以第三人称娓娓道来 给人以中肯无惑之感 全文运笔流畅 论证充分 读后给人以深刻印象 要求 古今中外有很多关于人生问题的讨论 这方面的精彩英语文章也数不胜数 现在有一个英语杂志想开 辟一个讨论人生的小专栏 要求语句精练警人 观点有新义 你的应征文章内容如下 生命中的快乐是人们所不断寻求的 但是我们往往忽视身边的快乐 而去寻找那些所谓大的野心勃勃的东西 快乐无所不在 想一想身边有哪些可珍惜的快乐呢 范文 The Happiness of the Life Life is like a winding path that surrounded by flowers butterflies and delicious fruit but many of us spend much time looking for happiness around the next corner We do not bend to enjoy the happiness that is ours for the taking just at out feet In our desire to reach the pot of gold complete and lasting happiness we all want to fill our lives we ignore things which don t seem worthy of such a large ambition or which can t give us the whole thing all at once Happiness is all around us but it often comes in small grains When we gather it grain by grain we soon have a basketful What small pieces of happiness surround me right now Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be 评语 该文按要求描写了自己是如何看待生活中快乐的 语言很清新 几个比喻用得很有特色 比如把 life 比做 a winding path surrounded by flowers butterflies and delicious fruit 把收集生活中的快乐 比做 gather grain 既生动又形象 最后的疑问句也起到了发人深省的效果 要求 人人都渴望幸福 但对幸福的理解却不尽相同 有人追逐金钱 有人看重名誉 有人渴望友情 有人 视爱情为人生的崇高追求 你呢 写下你对幸福的看法 字数 100 左右 范文 Happiness Happiness means different things to different people For example some people believe that if they have a lot of money or many material things they will be happy They believe that if they are wealthy they will be able to do everything they want and so they will be happy On the other hand some people believe that money is not the only source of happiness These people value their intelligence or their health or their religion these things make them happy For me happiness is closely tied to my family I am happy if my father and my mother live in harmony When all the members of my family share the good time and the bad I am happy Although the definition of happiness depends on the individual my wealth of happiness is my family Remember this