高考英语作文训练讲解

1 作文训练作文训练 评判作文的标准评判作文的标准 第一档 一塌糊涂 messy 第二档 糊里糊涂 cloudy 第三档 马马虎虎 common 第四档 清清楚楚 clear 第五档 漂漂亮亮 cool 20 分以上作文 踩点扣分 18 分以下作文 踩点给分 好作文的标准好作文的标准 书写清晰明了 无填涂 结构合情合理 审题明确 中心突出 行文语言流畅准确 不是单纯拼凑 阅卷老师一目了然 句式丰富 使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组 内容积极乐观 情感饱满 体现个人良好的价值观人生观 作文书写作文书写 态度决定高度态度决定高度 attitude determines altitude 传达两种思想传达两种思想 我很认真 我要拿高分我很认真 我要拿高分 五要 五要 干净 整洁 压线 分三段 g h f y I s 字母重点注意 恰当的大小 可以遮丑 五不要 五不要 添涂 伞型 一逗到底 上蹦下蹿 随意 瘦小挤在一起 硕 大无比 注意 注意 字母要善于辨认 字母之间有间隔 单词之间不能隔太开 忽大忽小 大概一行十一到十三字 开头结尾一个单词拼写也不能错 开头结尾三到四行不能有语法错误 作文结构作文结构 2 开头开头 总总 对提示语或图片进行解释 阐明观点开门见山 一针见血 3 4 行 中间中间 分分 提出问题 解决问题办法 结果 情绪饱满 10 12 行 结尾结尾 总总 总结观点 收获 前后呼应 感情升华 3 4 行 好单词好单词 老师偏爱 学得晚 的单词 因为使用学得比较晚的单词 可以体现一个人 学以致用 的意识 1 Adj 困难的困难的 黯然低分词 difficult 闪光高分词 tough 艰难的 challenging 有挑战性的 2 Adj 重要的重要的 黯然低分词 important 闪光高分词 vital 至关重要的 essential 必不可少的 significant 有重要意义 的 3 Adj 美丽的美丽的 黯然低分词 beautiful 闪光高分 appealing 动人的 attractive 吸引人的 charming 迷人的 fascinating 迷人的 4 adj 不开心的不开心的 黯然低分词 sad 闪光高分词 discouraged 气馁的 depressed 沮丧的 downhearted 垂头丧气 的 low spirited 意志消沉的 break down 在阅卷老师看来 活用短语是一个考生能力的体现 因此 我们可以掌握一在阅卷老师看来 活用短语是一个考生能力的体现 因此 我们可以掌握一 些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法 如 些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法 如 5 v 参加参加 黯然低分词 join 闪光高分词 take part in participate in 6 v 使用使用 黯然低分词 use 闪光高分词 make good use of make the best of 3 7 v 拜访拜访 黯然低分词 visit 闪光高分词 pay a visit to 8 最常见的换词手段 形容词最常见的换词手段 形容词 of 同根名词同根名词 黯然低分词 Important 闪光高分词 be of importance 9 v 帮忙帮忙 黯然低分词 help 闪光高分词 come to one s assistance 10 adv 黯然低分词 finally 闪光高分词 at length 好词汇词组造句好词汇词组造句 temporary setback 不要被暂时的困难所沮丧 Don t be cast down by temporary setbacks Make great progress 你越努力 你取得的进步越大 The harder you work the more progress you will make Be bound to do be doomed to do be condemned to do 除非我们不遗余力 我们注定是一个失败 Unless we spare no effort we are doomed to be a failure Obstacle 任何你遇到的困难将会让你更加坚强 Whatever obstacles you meet with will make you stronger 英语写作中的句式选择英语写作中的句式选择 结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用 总结如下结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用 总结如下 一一 改变时态改变时态 例 The bell is ringing now 一般 There goes the bell 特殊 4 事例全部用过去式事例全部用过去式 二二 改变语态改变语态 例 People suggest that the conference be put off 一般 It is suggested that the conference be put off 特殊 被动胜过主动 讲述理由时更加客观可信 I believe we will win 一般 I am firmly convinced that our efforts will pay off 特殊 三三 改变结构改变结构 不定式不定式 例 she work hard to realize her dream 一般 In order to realize her dream she worked hard 特殊 四四 使用过去分词使用过去分词 Because she devoted all her life to studying she succeeded 一般 Devoted to studying she finally made it 特殊 I was inspired by her words and made up my mind to hold on 一般 Inspired by her words I made up my mind to hold on 特殊 I failed the exams many times and almost gave up 一般 Having failed the exams in a row I almost gave up 特殊 五五 形容词作状语形容词作状语 I realized the importance of holding on and decided not to give up Aware of the importance of holding on I determined not to give up Finally I arrived at the destination At length I arrived at the destination safe and sound tired but satisfied 六六 使用使用 v ing 1 When he arrived he gave me an e mail 一般 On arriving when arriving he gave me an e mail 特殊 2 进入到重点大学是我一直想要的 Being admitted to a key university is what I am longing for 3 每次看到这样的话语 我都忍不住想起小时候 5 Every time I saw those words I couldn t help recalling my memory when I was young 七七 使用名词性从句使用名词性从句 1 It disappointed everybody that he didn t turn up 一般 The fact that he didn t turn up disappointed everybody 特殊 2 he is surprised that the little girl knows so many things 一般 What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things 特殊 3 他做了他所能做的事帮我摆脱困境 He did what he could to get me out of trouble 4 从那以后 我不停反思我所做的事情 From then on I never stopped reflecting on what I had done 八八 使用定语从句使用定语从句 1 The girl is spoken highly of Her composition was well written 一般 The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of 特殊 2 Honesty to which teachers attach great importance plays a significant part in our daily life 3 There was a time when 4 Thanks to sb without whom I couldn t have got through the hard times 九九 使用状语从句使用状语从句 1 I won t believe what he says 一般 No matter what he says I won t believe 特殊 十十 时间状语时间状语 四个四个 when 一一 就就 Be about to do when it occurred to me that 原因状语 thanks to due to owing to 让步状语 no matter wh although as even if 条件状语 as long as unless only if 结果 伴随状语 thus doing only to do 目的状语 in order to in an attempt to do 十一十一 使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气 6 1 The ship didn t sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain 一般 But for the efforts of the captain the ship would have sunk with all on board 特殊 But for the fact that had it not been for the fact that 2 It is high time that sb should do 十二十二 使用倒装句型使用倒装句型 强调句型强调句型 8 个个 NO 1 Though I m weak I ll make the effort 一般 Weak as I am I ll make the effort 特殊 2 He finds English is difficult to learn 一般 So difficult does he find it to learn English 特殊 3 I have never had such an unforgettable experience in my life 一般 Never have I had a more unforgettable experience in my life 特殊 4 His hard work makes a difference 一般 It is his hard work that makes a difference 特殊 十三 插入语插入语 To One s n delight disappointment surprise relief To make matters worse what s worse What s more in addition In the long run term From now then on since then Meanwhile therefore whereas As a consequence at length In a word in a nutshell to sum up fortunately from where I stand As a matter of fact believe it or not To put it in another way in other words 例文例文 结合校园事例 写英语作文 Many hands make light work Cooperation is so important that we can never 7 emphasize the importance of it too much 无须写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 除诗歌外 文体不限 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 词数不少于 120 左右 Union is strength Whenever you re faced with difficulties or in a dilemma cooperation plays a significant part in getting you out of trouble There was a time when I was so proud that I overlooked my peers refusing to work together with them Therefore there was no doubt that I was left alone suffering from loneliness and failure Fortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation From then on I learned to help each other and turn to my friends for help whenever I had difficulty in finishing a task on my own Surely cooperation made a difference Now I am getting along well with my friends Meanwhile I become more confident My experience has taught me that only if we attach great importance to cooperation can we go beyond ourselves As the saying goes United we stand Divided we fall 常用习语常用习语 1 Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧 2 God helps those who help themselves 天助自助者 3 Easier said than done 说起来容易做起来难 4 Where there is a will there is a way 有志者事竟成 5 One false step will make a great difference 失之毫厘 谬之千里 6 Slow and steady wins the race 稳扎稳打无往而不胜 7 A fall into the pit a gain in your wit 吃一堑 长一智 8 Experience is the mother of wisdom 实践出真知 9 All work an