任务型写作指导(广东)ppt课件.ppt

summary Writing Howtowritea Welcome 1 IV 写作 共两节 满分40分 第一节 基础写作 第二节 读写任务 共1小题 满分25分 请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求 写一篇150词左右的英语短文 任务说明 请认真阅读下面的短文 然后完成以下的任务 1 概括短文的内容要点 该部分的词数大约30 50字左右 Leadingin 2 Summary Summaryisashortpassagegivingthemainpointsofanoriginalarticle 摘要 Warmingup 3 Preparationforwritingasummary Findkeywords Findkeysentences Findthemainidea Warmingup 4 任务型写作 归纳大意的写作仔细阅读所给的文段 找出每一个段落的主题句 topicsentence 并用下划线划出 注意首句和首段原则 根据题目的详细要求 审清要写的短文的题材和体裁如 发言 演讲稿 书信 日记 通知 记叙文 说明文或议论文 比较少是议论文 等等 从整体上把握好文章的格式和结构 根据要求和主题以及自己要表达的观点 确立好标题根据找出的每一个段落的主题句 用同义词 短语或句子 通过恰当的关联词或过渡词串写成个句子 30词 5 PassageIHowtochooseacareer1 Atfifteen studentsshouldbetoldwhatcareertopursuebasedontheirschoolperformance 2 Moststudentsareconfusedaboutwhatcareertochoose 3 Theyneedtobetoldwhattodo 4 Whenstudentschooseacareerthemselves theyusuallypickonetheydon tknowmuchabout 5 Whentheygetajob theydiscovertheydon tlikeit thenalltheireducationandtrainingiswasted 6 Ifcareerswereassignedinsteadofchosen societywouldalwayshavetherightnumberofworkers 7 Unemploymentwoulddecreaseandjobsatisfactionwouldbehigher 8 Andtaxpayerswouldknowthatmoneygoingtoeducationwasbeingwellspent 6 Howtochooseacareer1 Atfifteen studentsshouldbetoldwhatcareertopursuebasedontheirschoolperformance 2 Moststudentsareconfusedaboutwhatcareertochoose 3 Theyneedtobetoldwhattodo 4 Whenstudentschooseacareerthemselves theyusuallypickonetheydon tknowmuchabout 5 Whentheygetajob theydiscovertheydon tlikeit thenalltheireducationandtrainingiswasted 6 Ifcareerswereassignedinsteadofchosen societywouldalwayshavetherightnumberofworkers 7 Unemploymentwoulddecreaseandjobsatisfactionwouldbehigher 8 Andtaxpayerswouldknowthatmoneygoingtoeducationwasbeingwellspent 7 Task SummaryAtfifteen studentsshouldknowwhatcareertheywillhaveinthefuturebasedontheirschoolperformance Theyneedinstructions Societypayswhenyoungpeoplechoosethewrongcareer 30words 8 Task Writeasummaryofpassage Let shaveatry Readthepassage andwriteasummary Groupwork 9 TaskTwo Recently studentsinourclasshavehadadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring 30 ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile Theythinkspaceistoofarawayfromusandourdailylife Andthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanbeusedtosolvetheearth sproblemsuchasstarvationandpollution Ontheotherhand 70 thinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit Weusesatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast Also spaceresearchwillenableustofindnewsourcestosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearth What smore withfurtherspaceresearch wemaysolvethepopulationproblembymovingtootherplanetsoneday 10 TaskTwo 1Recently studentsinourclasshavehadadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring 230 ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile 3Theythinkspaceistoofarawayfromusandourdailylife 4Andthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanbeusedtosolvetheearth sproblemsuchasstarvationandpollution 5Ontheotherhand 70 thinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit 6Weusesatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast 7Also spaceresearchwillenableustofindnewsourcestosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearth 8What smore withfurtherspaceresearch wemaysolvethepopulationproblembymovingtootherplanetsoneday 11 TaskTwo Part Part Part Threeparts Howmanypartscanwegroupthepassageinto SentenceOne SentencesTwo Four SentencesFive Eight 12 section Recently studentsinourclasshavehadadiscussiononwhetherspaceisworthexploring section 30 ofusthinkspaceexplorationisnotworthwhile Theythinkspaceistoofarawayfromusandourdailylife Andthemoneyspentonspaceexplorationcanbeusedtosolvetheearth sproblemsuchasstarvationandpollution What Asurveyonwhether Result Disagreement TaskTwo Whatdoesthewriterwanttotellusineachpart 13 TaskTwo section Ontheotherhand 70 thinkspaceisworthexploringbecausewehavebenefitedalotfromit Weusesatellitesforcommunicationandweatherforecast Also spaceresearchwillenableustofindnewsourcestosolvetheproblemofenergyshortagesontheearth What smore withfurtherspaceresearch wemaysolvethepopulationproblembymovingtootherplanetsoneday Result Agreement 14 TaskTwo Outline because and While because and Asurveyonwhetherspaceisworthexploring What Disagreement Agreement notworthwhile toofaraway ourdailylife awasteofmoney worth benefitalot solveproblemofcommunication weatherforecast energyshortages eventhepopulation 15 TaskTwo Asurvey whetherspaceisworthexploring ofourclass shows30 ofthestudentsthinkitunnecessary becausetheexploringhaslittletodowithourdailylifeanditwillbeawasteofmoney While70 thinkitworthwhilebecauseitbringsusbenefitandhelpstosolvetheproblemofcommunication weatherreport energyshortage andevenpopulationproblem 64words Summary 16 TaskTwo Asurvey whetherspaceisworthexploring ofourclass shows30 ofthestudentsthinkitunnecessary becausetheexploringwhichwastesmoneyhaslittletodowithourdailylife While70 thinkitworthwhilebecauseitbringsusbenefit 42words Summary 17 Whatshouldyoupayattentiontowhenwritingasummary Focusonmainideasandomit 省去 examples specificdetails andminorsupports 2 Mainlyusethewordsandphrasesintheoriginalpassage Donotincludeyourownopinion butbesuretouseourownwords 主要引用原文的词句 不能添加自己的见解 但是要用自己的语言概括 3 Writeitinthethirdperson 第三人称 Tosumup suggestions 18 Changeunnecessaryclausesintophrases2 Changeuselessphrasesintosinglewords3 Changethesentencestructure 结构 4 Changethevoice 语态 ofthesentence5 Usethesynonyms 同义词 Tosumup Aboutthelanguage 19 读写任务型写作模板 标题第一段 第二段 第三段 概括所给短文内容要点 约30字 过渡词引出主题句 自己的观点 理由 约105字 总结句 约15字 20 标题标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式 根据所写短文的内容 概括出中心思想然后加以提炼 拟定标题 如果没有要求 可以不写 Istimemorevaluablethanmoney OnSmokingHowtomakefriends HappinessIswatchingTVagoodthing Myviewofmoney time pollutionMyattitudetowardbuildingacarfactory 21 第一段 概括所给短文内容要点注意 利用原文中所给的语言材料 用自己的话来写 概括后的文章意思要通顺 行文要连贯 写作具体方法和要求 第一段概括要做到开门见山 例如 Accordingtothepassage weknow Thisarticleismainlyabout Thewriterstatesthat 2 第一段要做到有层次感 必要时概括段中运用firstly secondly lastly 或 but so 等来列出原文作者观点或内容 3 第一段概括要抓住要点 语言精练 22 Thewritertellsusthattheparentsshouldalsodosomethingabouteducation Tostartwith parentsshouldprovidefriendlyatmosphere Next parentsshouldhelptheirchildrenbecomemoreindependentandresponsible Parents HelpIsImportant 23 第二段 过渡词引出主题句 自己的观点 理由开头用语 Idoagreewiththeauthor Insomeway Iagreewith but Everycoinhastwosides Itisrightinthat but Thisopinionsoundsrightbutishardlypractical Itisdefinitelynotlikethat Asamatteroffact Inmyopinion Frommypersonalpointofview AsfarasI mconcerned 24 第三段 最后一段 总结句开头用语 Inconclusion Inshort Ingeneral Inaword Inbelief Onthewhole Allinall 25 Examples 1 Allinall thedevelopmentofchildrenisnotonlytheresponsibilityoftheirparents butalsotheresponsibilityofthewholesociety 2 Inaword smokingharmsyourselvesaswellasyourneighbors soitshouldbestrictlyforbidden 3 Inconclusion wevaluemoneybutcan tputmoneyaboveeverythingelse 26 读写任务型写作方法总结 27 写作具体方法和要求 第一段概括要做到开门见山 例如 Accordingtothepassage weknow Thisarticleismainlyabout Thewriterstatesth