考研备考辅导考研英语写作真题命题解析

考研英语写作真题命题解析一、Part A： Directions:Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 0 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address. ( points)命题解析继辞职+道歉信、请求信和大纲样题订购信之后，应用文考查的仍然是公务信函之一：建议信。笔者编著的考研英语高分写作第87页有关于图书馆服务的公务信函，第95页第五部分为“建议信”，考生应该感觉比较好写。建议信在国内的四级考试中曾经考查过两次，分别是6月建议朋友度假及1月建议朋友选专业。考研写作命题每年均寻求创新，也没例外。往年小作文题目皆由情景交代+三点提纲组成，情景交代可以改写放在第一段，三点提纲改写放在第二段。但没有情景交代，只有一点笼统提纲：建议大学图书馆改进服务。考生自由发挥的余地更大，不会造成太大的障碍。只要不跑题，可以随意发挥，只要是改进图书馆服务的建议均可。根据教育部公布的大纲解析，考研应用文不需写信封、日期、地址，只写称呼、正文、落款三种格式即可。由于是公务信函，称呼可写“Dear Sir or Madam，”或“To Whom It May Concern，”均可，根据大纲解析，注意后面使用英式英语中的逗号，不要使用美式英语中的冒号。书写格式使用缩进式，正文段间不空行，首行缩进4-5个字母并对齐。大部分考生首段可以进行自我介绍；说明写作目的：建议改进服务。第二段需针对图书馆的服务问题提出二至三点具体建议，不要只是空发议论。由于是针对机构的建议信，尾段可以表示感谢、期待回信。落款应写在稿纸中间偏后的位置，写成两行。首行是结尾客套：“Yours sincerely，”即可；次行签名应写“Li Ming”，不要写上自己的真实姓名。注意事项建议信不是投诉信，观点应该合情合理，注意礼貌当先。首段介绍自己不要罗嗦，说明目的并注意语气；主体段提出具体建议，首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则容易变成投诉信。经常与对方进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则变成议论文。尾段总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。有些考生可能投诉内容写的较多，也不要过于忧虑。阅卷老师重点考查的还是语言水平，只要语言基本正确，应该可以拿到基本的及格分数。高分作文Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here is quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having class, so they cant come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Ming二、Part B：Directions:Write an essay of 0-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1)describe the drawing briefly,2)explain its extended meaning, and then3)support your view with an example/examplesYou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)考研英语写作真题之图画命题解析大作文题目较抽象，很多考生叫苦不迭，全国平均分8.分。考研英语高分写作一书第三章专门讲解考研写作的难点：图画作文。91-的来，考研写作一般是中性话题，不是当年最热门的话题，也不是冷僻话题。考查了国内最热门的话题：偶像崇拜问题。考研写作命题再次回归中性话题：自信与挑战，但是话题中隐含了的热门话题：德国世界杯。关于自信与挑战的范文，请参见考研英语高分写作第8页范文“建立自信”及5页范文“积极面对竞争”。养老足球赛，崇拜足球明星“贝克汉姆”，“点球大战”，考研写作命题连续三年陷入“足球怪圈”。加之图画中跑道上的运动员，考研图画作文已经连续四年与体育相关，确实是一个有趣的现象。图画中是一幅点球决战的场面，使人联想起6月烽烟四起的德国世界杯战场，无数点球大赛惊心动魄。面对点球这一巨大的挑战与困难，守门员想到的是球门如此之大，自身如此渺小，自然悲从中来；而球员想到的却是球门如此之小，门将如此神武，不免噤若寒蝉。面对挑战，双方想到的都是困难重重，缺乏自信。这是一幅反面现象的图画，考前很多传言认为会考正面观点的题目，谣言不攻自破。很多考生害怕自己因跑题而导致低分，其实不虑。考研写作的第二大黄金原则是：语言第一位，结构第二位，内容第三位。阅卷老师最重视的是语言功底，而非逻辑构思；考研写作是语言考试，而非思维考试。在考场上短暂的时间中，考生普遍认为此题偏难，但切勿浪费太多时间进行构思。考研写作的观点并无正确与错误之分，只要不跑题，相关即可。以考研写作题目为例，根据教育部公布的英语大纲，写成正面观点、反面现象均可，正面观点可写人们对于足球的热衷，对于追求的执着；反面现象可写偶像崇拜、盲目追星。两种写法均不扣分。作文也不例外，写成自信、挑战、人生态度、不同角度均可，只要没有跑题太远。关键是语言基本正确、丰富多变；结构清晰、逻辑严谨。注意事项从98-，考研历图画作文考过八次，其中98、五年是一图写作，2000、三年是两图写作。命题独出心裁，一图写作中暗含两图对比。根据教育部公布的大纲解析，大作文四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。根据今年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。可将大图总体描述一句，然后将两幅小图分别描述各一句即可。第二段意义阐释可以分析这个问题背景、事实、反方观点、原因或后果；进行因果、分类、定义解释、统计事实、正反论证均可。由于第三点提纲是举例论证，第二段应对问题进行分析评论，不宜举例。论证自信、挑战、面对困难、人生态度、同一事物不同角度均可，关键是考查考生的语言表达和结构清晰，而非内容、观点或思维。第三段应为举例论证，根据提纲，举出一至两个例子均可。不要流于记叙，应有主题句和小结，写成夹叙夹议的段落。提纲中并未要求提出建议措施，不提也可。高分作文As we can see from the picture, a football match is going on. On guarding the door, the left man seems to be keeping a “huge door” that is easy and inevitable for a goal, while the right person hesitates to kick the ball with an illusion about the “huge door keeper”. It is obvious that both of them exaggerate the difficulties in front of them.This photo does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now. The young always give up because the problem is beyond their ability to cope with. Superficially, it seems to be somewhat reasonable, but when weighing in the mind, we find there is an apparent tendency underlying this phenomenon: the lack of confidence. Firstly, it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. We can do nothing but face them. Secondly, attitude is the key point to take the first step. Assume bravery and confidence to solve the problem, you will find the question is not as “huge” as you imagine. Take us for example, the entrance exam for graduate students even seems to a horrible monster before us. Some people give up, some persist. So, with confidence a