百强校中考英语二轮题型练习19：材料作文.doc

百强校中考英语二轮题型练习19：材料作文学校:_姓名：_班级：_考号：_评卷人得分一、材料作文1（题文）书面表达假如你要竞选你班的体育委员，请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括：1自己喜欢体育，身体健康；2擅长球类运动，尤其是足球和篮球；3可以传授运动技艺，助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。注意：1词数：80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3演讲内容中不得出现真实的学校和个人名字；4演讲的开头已给出，不计入总词数。I want to be the PE monitor. _2初级写作： 你校将开设一些特色课程，请你根据下表中的提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介 绍这些课程及开设理由，并提出你建议增设的课程以及你的理由要求：1不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；2语句通顺、语意连贯；3.100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数学校特色课程开设理由足球俱乐部强身健体、鼓励合作模型制作走进科学、了解科学你建议的课程你的理由Students in our school are free to choose some special afterschool courses according to their interests 3书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查，并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。项目内容你对英语的认识1. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言；2. 英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化；你目前的英语水平1. 能用英语与同学进行简单的交流；2. 喜欢演讲，去年在校演讲比赛中获奖；你英语学习中存在的问题1. 不能正确地运用语法规则；2. 写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己；你对英语教学的建议 (考试自己发挥，至少一点)要求：1. 词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。I am Li Hua. I wish our school will consider my advice.4书面表达请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。Hi, At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let other kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school: what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like why you like the theme what activity/activities you can organize for the theme Looking forward to hearing from you. Sam Southland注意：1对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. _5书面表达目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下表内容写一篇短文。赞成者的观点1. 能够学得更好，上更好的高中；2. 避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。反对者的观点1.学生需要时间休息；2. 太多压力不利于发展。你的观点1. 2. 注意：1文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）3文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes atweekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that 6书面表达86.请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。（1）上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。（2）李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。（3）乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。（4）老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的。（5）你觉得参考词汇：果皮peel 垃圾桶dustbin 发布post 表扬praise要求：（1）词数：80-100个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. _7现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多；为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。内容包括：1. 吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；2. 多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方；3. 养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。注意：1.词数 80 词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. _8“你养我长大，我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。1给我生命，一直照顾我成长；2努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；3拥有爱心，教我学会4今天，我要为您(自主发挥，至少两点)注意事项：1词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.9短文写作78.“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang Xuhua the Father ofChinas Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点：1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止；4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。写作要求：1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：核潜艇 nuke; 国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal ones identityHuang Xuhua the Father of Chinas NukesLast Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video aboutHuang Xuhua the father of Chinas nukes. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds.10假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Chinese CultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPast and presentTime:_Places: tea farm, tea houseActivities:1. tea processing2. a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic piecesandtraditional instrumentsTime:_Places: music room, school hallActivities:1. take musical instrument classes2. attend a folk music concertHello, friends. Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, Id like to introduce _Hope you will have a good time.试卷第7页，总7页本卷由系统自动生成，请仔细校对后使用，答案仅供参考。参考答案1I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. Im really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But Im really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!【解析】这是一篇要求为了竞选你班的体育委员来介绍自己。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。2Students in our school are free to choose some special afterschool courses according to their interests They like the courses because they can enrich their lives Here is some informationIf you are a sports fan， a football club would be a great choice It can not only make you strong and healthy， but also offer you a good chance to make friends and encourage teamwork For those who are interested in science， modelmaking courses would be pretty fun Students can get to know more about science In my opinion， a music course would be really popular Lots of students are suffering from the stress of studying It is relaxing for them to play musical instruments or just listen to some songs Besides， it can make life colorfulSo why not join us in these amazing courses or clubs？【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我们校这些特色课程及开设理由，并提出我的建议增设的课程以及我的理由。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Students in our school are，It can not，Students can，So why not？It is relaxing for them to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们学校开设这些特色课程的理由，接下来介绍我建议增色的课程，最后表达我的理由。此处be free to do sth, according to, offer sb sth, know about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English. I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us understand different cultures in the world. English can also help us improve our communication skills. And speaking more English can improve our confidence.At present, I can make simple communications with my classmates in English. I also like making speeches. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. And I believe that I should be able to speak English fluently when I go to a Western country.However, I have some problems in learning English. I cant use the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I cant express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more difficult words.At last, I have some suggestions for English teaching as well. I think teachers should communicate with us in English when they are in class.I wish our school will consider my advice.【解析】【详解】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给内容，把各要点有条理的表达出来。注意一些常见句式的应用，注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中help sb. do sth，at present, make simple communications with, be able to, in class, However, and, at last等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还使用倒装句、宾语从句、并列句、时间状语从句等丰富的句型，大大增加了信息的容量，情态动词运用精准，使文章增色不少，值得学习。4I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking for our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoyed nice food.First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end.I hope our Culture Week will be a great success!【解析】【详解】写作要求对学校文化周的主题、活动内容等进行讨论、分享。从三个方面展开叙述：你喜欢什么文化周主题？你为什么喜欢这个主题？你可以为主题组织什么活动？要求将自己喜欢的主题，喜欢的原因及为此安排的活动叙述清楚，并适当发挥。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。5Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that taking afterschool classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. Whats more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games.However, others think students need time to rest and relax. Afterschool classes can cause a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their development.In my opinion, if necessary, we can take afterschool classes, but it cant take up too much time. We should first rest well at weekends and on holidays.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如middle school students，all kinds of，afterschool classes，at weekends，on holidays，get into，avoid doing，too much time，watching TV，play computer games，be good for，a lot of，in my opinion，last forever等。而Some people think that taking afterschool classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school./ However, others think students need time to rest and relax.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday, Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phones and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Hua and encouraged others to learn from him.I think Li Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throw litter in public places.【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语，为文章增色不少，如take a bus；put into ；take photos of； encourage to do sth;；learn from等； and ;so 和固定句型It is +形容词+to do sth等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。7Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, its helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Dont read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如more and more，National Eye Care Day，every year，as we all know，try our best，be good for，such as，do more eye exercises，be helpful to，look far away，from time to time，make sure，have a good eye habit，in bed，in a word等。而First,/ Second,/ Finally,等语句的运用，不仅使习作思路清晰，层次分明；而且丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。8You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love.You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today is Fathers Day. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results.I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如raise me up，in your life，take care of ，all the time，patient enough to help me，and encourage me，in order to，live a pleasant life，work hard，from morning to evening，full of love，in need，in the past，get better results等。而In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. / You are also a man who has a heart full of love./ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.等多种非谓语动词结构和从句句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。9Huang Xuhua the Father of Chinas NukesLast Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video aboutHuang Xuhua the father of Chinas nukes.He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(And now he doesnt stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.We were all inspired by his heroic deeds【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。根据要点提示，写一篇人物介绍。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般过去时态来写，人称为第三人称。所给出的写作要点比较具体，并给出了作文的开头和结尾，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作中要用到的重点词组有：in order to为了, give up放弃, try to do sth.设法做某事, concentrate on doing sth.专心做某事 used to do sth过去常常做某事, be unknown for不为人所知。10Hello, friends. Ive