中考英语写作训练1：写人记叙文.doc

写记叙文体裁特点记叙文就是记载、叙述我们在生活中看到、听到、经历过、接触过的一些人物和事件的文章。记叙人物和事件，必须掌握四个要素，即时间、地点、人物、事件（起因，发展，结果）。技巧点拨写人的记叙文，是通过对人物思想性格的刻画来表现中心思想，也就是说写人要写“魂”。写人时，首先要确定文章的中心，然后再选择典型时间来写。一般要注意下面四点：1.角度要新。要尽量尝试从新的角度去表现人物。2.角度小。角度选择得小一些，小中见大，效果更好。3.角度要集中。应设法找到特定的角度，便于突出人物的特点。4.角度要典型。高明的画家总是在“一鳞一爪”的描绘中，再现“龙”的风采。写人的作文也是如此，作者要通过对人物的某角度的典型描写，来反映人物的全貌。写作指南刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。他在10岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴的梦想。经过用脚刻苦训练钢琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”（Chinas Got Talent）的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英文短文。要求：1.简要描述刘伟的经历；2.谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示；3.词数80个左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Liu Wei，an armless piano player,has a very special experience 1.文章体裁：写人的记叙文2.主体时态：一般过去时3.中心人称：第三人称4.写作要点：（1）刘伟的经历：lost his arm;never give up his dream;practice with his feet;realized his dream（2）启示：be brave;belive our dream will come true by working hard;we wont fail unless we give up our hope.（1）“四”个确定Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience.He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10,but he didnt give up his dream of being a pianist.He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in “Chinas Got Talent”.As a student,Ive learnt a lot from his story.We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life,but we should believe that our dreams will come true by working hard.No matter how hard life is ,we wont fail unless we give up our hope.（3）连句成文思路呈现（2）拟定提纲介绍人物简介过去经历实现梦想an armless piano playerWhen he was ten,he.but,he realized his dream in .启示When we meet difficulties,we should .思路训练假设你喜欢的老师是Mr.Wang 或者Ms.Wang，请根据下面的提示，以My Favorite Teacher为题目，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.必须包括（1）desciption;（2）friendship;（3）the best quality三个方面的内容，括号内的提示可以任意选择也可以适当发挥；2文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名3.词数80100个（文章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数）My favorite teacher is Ms.Wang 1“四”个确定1.文章体裁： 2.主体时态： 3.中心人物： 4.写作要点：按要求描写老师的外貌，品质及与你们的友谊即：(1)外貌： (2)友情： (3)品质： 2拟定提纲1.开篇点题： 2.描写外貌： 3.描写友谊： 4.描写品质： 5.总结全文： 3连句成文 思路训练答案1 1.写人的记叙文；2.一般现在时；3.第三人称；4.（1）age,look,clothes,etc.;（2）her class,how to help you,etc.;（3）kind,warm-hearted,strict,helpful,etc.2 1.My favorite teacher isShe teaches us; 2.She is years old.She is (tall/short)with hair.She often wears;3.Her class is When I,she always;4.She is warm-hearted.She is;5.I think she isI should3My Favorite TeacherMy favorite teacher is Ms.Wang .She teaches us English.She is a 36-year-old woman.And she is tall and has long straight hair.And she often wears black pants and a white shirt.We all like listening to her because her classes are very interesting an creative.She is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble,she always tries her best to help us .we 提升训练请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你的好朋友Li Lei。要点如下：1.他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；2.他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；3我准备送他一个以表达感谢；4.我对他的祝福和希望；注意：1.词数80100个，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。2.短文需包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。We are graduating from school soon.I will miss to many good friends.especially my best friendLi Lei.提升训练范文We are graducating from school soon.I will miss so many good friends.especially my best friendsLi Lei.Li Lei is a top student .He is outgoing and hard-working.He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others.We get on very well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems .Im so proud of him .I care so much about him that I want to do something meaningful