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herearesomewordsandphrasesthatcanhelpyoumakeacontrast but however while onthecontrary incontrast ontheotherhand mr andmrs leeoftenhaddifferentopinions lastmonth theyplannedtospendtheirholidayatthebeach mrs leewantedtogothereintheircar mr lee however mrs leepackedfourbigsuitcases incontrast mr lee onthedaytheyleft mrs leegotupearly while whentheyarrivedattheairport mrs leewantedto butmr lee finally butmr leemissedtheplane insistedon goingtherebyplane putonlyafewshirtsinabag mr leestayedinbed until9o clock getontheplaneatonce getonitright beforeittookoff mrs leewentonthetrip overthepasttwentyyearsorso greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife takemyfamilyforexample myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast butnowwecalllongdistanceathome andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation butnowwewatchthenewsandotherprogramsontv anotherchangeisinthehousingconditions whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree roomapartment inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience changesinourlife 2004 outline ababa topicsentence support1contactingothersinthepastnowsupport2gettinginformationoncenowsupport3anotherchangeisinthehousingconditionswhentheygotmarriedtwentyyearsago nowconclusion greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife contactedothersmainlybysendingthemletters wecalllongdistanceathome listenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation wewatchthenewsandotherprogramsontv livedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture wehavemovedintoabignewthree roomapartment changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience 接受建议买得起同意容许参加美丽相信而且责备勇敢变化 枯燥的毕业选择收集学院公司电脑控制鼓励创造发展奉献 不同的讨论教育努力雇佣足够进入提高重要爱好习惯将来 acceptadviceaffordagreeallowattendbeautifulbelievebesidesblamebravechange boringgraduatechoosecollectcollegecompanycomputercontrolencouragecreatedevelopdevote differentdiscusseducationeffortemployenoughenterimproveimportanthobbyhabitfuture 表达对比和变化的经典句型 1过去父母们主要通过写信彼此联系 2但是现在我们可以在家打长途电话 3过去我们甚至在周末还要上课 写没完没了的作业 4现在我不再熬夜 大约10点睡觉 5在过去的20多年里 我们的生活发生了很大的变化 6我很高兴告诉你自从减负我们生活的变化 7总之 自从学校减负以来 有了很大的变化 8总之 过去20多年的变化使我们的生活更舒服方便 9到2008 北京将成为一个美丽 现代 国际化的大都市 inthepastmyparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingletters butnowwecalllongdistanceathome weusedtohavetoattendclassesevenatweekendsanddoendlesshomeworkaswell inolongerstayuplate onthecontrary igotobedat10pm inthepast20years greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife i mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasbeenreduced inaword thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload inshort changesinourlifeinthepast20yearshavebroughtuscomfortandconvenience by2008 beijingwillbecomeabeautiful modernandinternationalcity theoldhousesinthecentralpartofthecitywillbeturnedintonewshoppingcenters change improve become turninto ab changeinmyvillagegreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyvillage tenyearsago thesmallandlowhousesofmyvillagelayonthenorthofalake theyproducedmuchwaste asaresult thelakewasseriouslypolluted tothewestofthevillagewasasandyfield whichwasthesourceofmuchdustwheneverwindwasblowing worsestill abrickyardonthesouthwestsideofthelakeusedupagreatdealofgoodsoil nowthepoorhouseshavebeenreplacedbygreentreesandthebrickyardbytallbuildings thesandyfieldthatthevillagersusedtoploughhasbeencoveredwithfruittrees onthelake nowcleanandclear thevillagersoftenspendtheirsparetimeboatingandfishing inaword myvillagehasbecomeamodernandgreenone firstofallhecanpersuadethebusdrivertoallowhimtogetoffsothathecanwalkoutoftheheavytrafficjamtotakeanotherbusorataxi orhecangetoffandaskanassistantinanearbyshoptolendhimabike sinceitisanimportantdayforthehighschoolgraduates dialing110andgettinghelpfromthepoliceisoneofthechoicesaswell totheeast west south northofinfrontofbehind oppositearound across 1 thereisaman madelotuspond themainbuilding 2 themainbuilding thereismeetinghall 3 themeetinghallisthelibrary 4 thereisalawn themainbuilding 5 treesareplanted thelawn 6 alsobehindthemainbuilding thelawn thereisatalllaboratorybuilding infrontof tothenorthof opposite behind around across 老教学楼 原操场 新操场 老教学楼 图书馆 新教学楼 2001 假设你是李华在一所中学读书 最近收到美国朋友smith先生的来信 希望了解学校变化情况 给他写回信介绍变化 三年前 现在 dearmrsmith iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandiamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool youareright quiteafewchangeshavetakenplace ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding ontheotherside wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding ourlibrary initthereareallkindsofbooks newspapersandmagazines theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday bestwishesyours lihua 60 的同学认为1不应收门票2公园是公众休闲的地方3如收票 需键大门 围墙 会影响城市形象 40 的同学认为1应收门票 但票价不宜高2支付园林工人工资3购新花木 nemt2002你校正在组织讨论 公园要不要收门票 请根据下表所提供的信息 给报社写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 deareditor i mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks deareditor i mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks opinionsaredividedonthequestion 60 ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway what smore itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity ontheotherhand 40 thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees theysuggest however feesshouldbechargedlow 1 60 ofthestudentsareagainst fortheideaof 2 40 think believe 3 twothirdsofthestudentsagree disagreetothisidea twothirdsofthestudentsagree disagreethat 4 theother20 haveneverthoughtaboutitordon tcareabit 5 inmyopinion 表达同意或不同意的句型 请你就下表的信息 给编辑写一封信 客观地介绍讨论情况 然后表述自己的看法或建议 参加讨论的学生有4o人 男生20人 女生20人 40 的同学燃放鞭炮是很好的民间传统 增加节日气氛 20 的同学没有考虑过 无所谓 40 的同学燃放鞭炮造成空气污染 造成对人体和财产的伤害 setofffirecrackerstraditionproperty deareditor i mwritingtotellyouaboutourdiscussionwehadontheafternoonoflastwednesdayaboutthegoodandbadsidesofsettingofffirecrackersduringthespringfestival homework 38 19a38 38b38 18b38 12b moststudents afewstudentsgoonline surfinternetasmuchaspossibleinone ssparetime befreeconvenient communicategain knowledgemake colourfullivesoutsideclassatimelimitinsteadofbeabsentfromschool dearmary i mgladtoreceiveyourletteragain youwanttoknowsomethingaboutwhatisgoingoninourschool inshort greatchangeshavetakenplacesinceourschoolbegantocarryouttheresearch basedlearning inthepast theteachersalmosttookupalltheperiod writingontheblackboard explainingthepoints andansweringthequestionsraisedbythemselves westudentsaretheslavesofstudy butnow we vetakenupmostoftheperiod discussingthequestionsraisedbytheteachersorourselves exchangingourideas orsolvingtheproblems wearenowthemastersofstudy afterclass weenjoydifferentkindsofactivitiesinsteadofdoingendlesshomework wegotothelibrarytoreadbooks havesportsontheplaygroundandsurftheinternetforvariouskindsofinformation howhappywearenow welcometoourschool bestwishes yourstruly dearmary i mgladtoreceiveyourletteragain youwanttoknowsomethingaboutwhatisgoingoninourschool inthepast theteacherscontrolledthewholeclassallthetime thereisnotimeforustothinkorstudyfreely what smore wehadsomuchhomeworkeverynightthatwecouldn tgotobeduntilmidnight wewerereallytheslavesofstudy toourdelight greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourclass wecandiscussquestions exchangeideasandworkoutquestionsbyourselves webecomethemasterofstudy wehavenotonlyinterestinglessonsbutalsowonderfulactivitiesafterclass doingsportsontheplayground readingbooksinthelibraryandsurfinginternet howhappywearenow welcometoourschool 杨波涛 beforewebeganresearch basedlearning teacherswerethecenteroftheclass theygaveusatalkallthroughtheclass andwewereforcedtostudy butnowwehaveplayedanimportantpartinclass wecandiscusssomequestions exchangeopinionsandsolvetheproblemsbyourselves inthepast theonlythingweshoulddowastofinishourhomeworkafterclass onthecontrary wenowhavemanyinterestingthingstodo forexample surfingonthenet playingontheplayground readingbooksinthelibraryandsoon we vebecomethemasterinsteadoftheslavesofthestudy 周宇 iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife before wehadmanyclasseseveryday ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool iwenttobedat11 30intheevening ihadnotimetoplay iwasverytired nowicanvisitmuseums icanlearncomputeranddrawing intheevening icanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchtv igotobedat10 00now 12points deardick hownicetohearfromyouagain iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife before wehadmanyclasseseveryday ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool iwenttobedat11 30intheevening ihadnotimetoplay iwasverytired nowicanvisitmuseums icanlearncomputeranddrawing intheevening icanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchtv igotobedat10 00now 75 14分 2001年高考书面表达假设你是李华 你的澳大利亚朋友dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担 来信询问有关情况 请你根据下表提供的信息 写一封回信 谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化 注意 1 词数100左右2 开头已为你写好生词 减轻学习负担 reducelearningload deardick hownicetohearfromyouagain 满分作文i mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylife learningduringthedaywasverysimple havingclassesanddoinghomeworkwas weshoulddo intheevening we hadalotofhomeworktodo wecould gotobed 11 30 reducingthelearningload mylifehasbecome interesting i visitmuseumsandcomputerrooms drawpictures intheevening i havetimetowatchtvandreadnewspapers i stayuplate igot