2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit3Onthemove单元写作练习外研版必修第二册.docx

单元写作写作五步成文(应用文)2018全国卷书面表达假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1学校的体育场馆；2主要的运动项目；3你喜欢的项目。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。步骤一：审题构思分析透彻是前提一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文(介绍学校的体育运动情况)。2确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一、三人称。3确定时态：以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一段：表达心情。第二段：介绍学校体育运动(体育场，开展的运动，自己喜欢的项目及原因)。第三段：客套语。 步骤二：精挑细选核心词汇想周全1hear_from 收到的来信2ask._about 询问的情况3build_up 建成4become_a_landmark 成为地标5a_wide_range_of_sports 许多体育项目6enjoy_great_popularity 很受欢迎7be_interested_in 对感兴趣8give_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges给我迎接挑战的力量 步骤三：遣词造句由词扩句雏形现1你在上一封信中询问我们学校体育运动的情况。(主谓宾状)You_asked_me_in_your_last_letter_about_the_physical_exercise_in_our_school.2下面的信息可能会给你一个粗略的概况。(主谓间宾直宾)The_following_information_may_give_you_a_rough_sketch.3一个大型新的体育场建成了。(被动语态)A_big_new_stadium_has_been_built_up.4它成为我们学校的新地标。(主系表)It_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school._5此外，随着体育场的建立，可以开展许多体育运动。(被动语态)Moreover,_with_the_stadium_set_up,_a_wide_range_of_sports_events_are_able_to_be_held.6乒乓球、足球和赛跑很受欢迎。(主谓宾)Pingpong,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.7我对篮球感兴趣。(主系表)Im_interested_in_basketball.8它给了我迎接生活中挑战的力量。(主谓宾状)It_has_been_giving_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges_in_my_life. 步骤四：斟酌打磨句式升级造亮点1用and把第1、2句升级为并列句You_asked_me_in_your_last_letter_about_the_physical_exercise_in_our_school_and_the_following_information_may_give_you_a_rough_sketch.2用which把第3、4句升级为含定语从句的复合句A_big_new_stadium_has_been_built_up,_which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.3用of which把第5、6句升级为含非限制性定语从句的复合句Moreover,_with_the_stadium_set_up,_a_wide_range_of_sports_events_are_able_to_be_held,_of_which_pingpong,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.4用since把第7、8句升级为含原因状语从句的复合句Im_interested_in_basketball_since_it_has_been_giving_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges_in_my_life. 步骤五：连句成文逻辑衔接连成篇(可能会用到to begin with, moreover, as for me, all in all等词语)Dear Peter，I am very delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a big new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which pingpong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im interested in basketball since it has been giving me strength to con