Teachingplanofwritingpractice(2)

Teaching plan of writing practice （2）Teaching aims and demands1. Improve the students writing ability.2. Get the students to learn about the skills and strategies of writing. 3. Train the students ability to cooperate with others. Teaching important pointsTrain the students writing ability.Learn to use writing strategies.Teaching difficult points How to write a good composition.How to get the students to master writing strategies.Teaching aidsPPTTeaching proceduresI. Warming upII. Lead-inIII. PresentationMaterial1作文的步骤及技巧审定写查审：认真审题，仔细阅读题目所给内容和答题要求等，搞清题中所提供的所有信息：时间，地点等。定：确定好：1）体裁，格式。2）人称，时态。3）主要句型，关键短语，文章要点及其顺序。4）短文框架，应确保文章层次分明，布局合理，如记叙文，可按事件发生的先后来安排，有的脉络是“尝试失败成功”，有的则是“无心突变奇遇”写：在第二步的基础上，组词成句，将已经排列好的要点按顺序在大的框架中灵活巧妙地意译出来，写作技巧有：1）尽量多用简单句，少用复合句，合理使用非谓语动词，介词短语等可以使句子结构简化的手段，适当使用并列连词及关联词，如so, but, however, sothat, besides等能够起呈转起合作用的词来连接相邻的句子，使文章浑然一体，结构紧凑，前后贯通，逻辑性强。2）适当发挥可起到画龙点睛的作用，但首句不宜发挥，结尾最好发挥。3）具体数字必要时可模糊，除非有必要才写清楚。4）在开头和结尾多花工夫，力争准确无误。5）在动词上做文章，尤其注意时态，语态，语气，搭配等。6）采用变通手法，灵活表达，力戒同类现象多次反复出现。7）量力而行，规范表达。查：通览全文，争取在习惯上修辞上更好些，检查单词的拼写，大小写和标点符号，这些都是语言准确性的一个方面，评卷时参考力度很大。Material 2注意事项： 1）书写规范，卷面整洁，印象分占10分，有加分现象。 2）字数必须达到要求，太多或太少都不当，大于或少于规定字数较多者均酌情扣分，一般扣2分。 3）应尽最大努力避免出现过多或太明显的错误，对关键词和常见词的错误扣分幅度较大。Material 3考生存在的问题1) 卷面欠整洁，涂得乱七八糟. 2) 语言不够得体，如给朋友写信，宜亲切随和，不宜生硬冷漠。3）受母语影响，出现了许多汉语式英语，或者按题所给的内容逐字译成英语，死板且缺乏文气。4）搭配错误，成分残缺，断句不当。5）语言基本意识淡薄（如名词的类别意识、动词的屈折意识等），低级错误较多。6) 抓不住文章要点，或要点不全，标题设计不当。7) 时态前后不一致，关键词错得较多。8）忽略大小写，乱用逗号，随意点点9）短文的框架结构安排不当。IV. Consolidation Step 1 Write a composition using the writing skills and strategies above. 某英语报以“Where does your time go”为题向高中生征文。请你以应征者的身份写一篇短文谈谈你的时间去哪了. Step 2 Check your composition with your deskmates. Step 3 Discussion Step 4 One possible version:Where does your time go? I always feel busy on my weekdays . However, apart from my regular school hours, I still can spare some time to do things I like. I spend most of my time doing homework or reviewing lessons. I have about one hour to do sports or take a walk every day. Usually after meals, I surf the Internet or do some reading or listen to music to relax myself. But sometimes I spend too much time watching Korean TV plays or playing computer games, which has wasted a lot of my precious time. Now Im well aware that time is life. Everyone is equal in terms of time. Time lost cannot be recalled. As Im young, I should make better use of time to gain more knowledge and skill. I believe Ill not feel regretful when I review what Ive done in the future.V. Assign