2014中考英语高分策略之写作

2014 中考英语高分策略之写作 一 书面表达命题特点 一 书面表达命题特点 1 紧扣 课程标准 对考生书面表达的要求 2 以有指导的写作为主 便于考生在短时间内构思成文 3 突出试题的交际性 考查学生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力 4 增强试题的使用性 所选话题贴近学生学 习生活 为学生所熟悉 5 易于表达 学生有话可写并且能够写 6 要求考生能够发表自己的观点和感想 留给 学生足够的写作空间 二 书面表达的答题技巧 二 书面表达的答题技巧 行文前 1 认真审题 抓住要点 2 确定体裁 注意格式 3 草拟提纲 理清思路 行文中 1 语言规范 把握时态 2 多用简单句 慎用长句 3 巧用连词 行文连贯 4 拼写正确 书写规范 卷面整洁 三 近三 近 5 5 年河南中考书面表达年河南中考书面表达 2009 记叙文 全命题作文 A person I will never forget 2010 议论文 半命题作文 is fun 2011 夹叙夹议 材料作文 根据无臂钢琴演奏者刘伟的故事写一篇励志短文 2012 议论文 提纲类作文 人们了解历史的手段 看历史剧 读史书 并发表自己的观点 2013 夹叙夹议 全命题作文 What makes me a good friend 4 4 备考建议备考建议 1 首先告诉学生英语书面表达是 10 句话作文 克服畏惧心理 2 让学生了解书面表达的要求和评分标准 只要表达内容完整 无语言语法错误 就是好作文 所以尽可 能使用简单句 适当使用熟悉的复合句 3 英语作文不同于汉语作文 没有可自我创造的部分 可以有更灵活的更符合英美习惯的表达 所以宁可 千篇一律 但不能根据汉语臆想来胡编乱造以求超越他人 4 平时利用课本材料指导学生进行不同题材的写作 每周至少进行一次 每篇作文让学生至少写两遍 5 考试时认真审题 明确要求 确定题材 也可以给学生列出高分满分作文的要求 1 干净整洁 2 内容完整 无语言错误 无错便是功 3 分段 三段式或两段 4 有一两个复杂句式 5 5 书面表达注意事项书面表达注意事项 1 无 过 便是 功 不要为了追求 一鸣惊人 而运用生冷词汇 句型等 对这些一知半解的东西用的不得当 结果适得其反 使文章生硬 不协调 甚至错误百出 所以要使用有把握的词语 避免不必要的失分 要尽量套用一些已学句 型 避免写出没有把握的句子 写句子是要注意灵活表达 不钻 牛角尖 遇到一些不便直译的生词 可采取 迂回 战术 绕着弯写 假如你不会写 勤奋 你可以写 not lazy 你若不会写 特长 可以用 be good at 或者 do well in 来表达 2 正确为先 流畅为好 文采为妙 只写短句或简单句 写出的文章过于幼稚 空洞乏味 要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去 如 定语从句 宾语从句 主语从句 非谓语动词和比较等句型 关键时用上一两个 特别是对关联词的使用 如 so that both and not only but also 等 会使你的文章结构紧密 层次鲜明 条理清楚 不同凡响 更有文 采 3 注重链接与连贯 a 内容上的连贯 文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的 就各段而言 其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句 进行 不能说与主题句无关的东西 b 表达上的连贯 文章的段落之间 段落中各句子之间要有一定的衔接 衔接的三种方法 一是内容上的连贯 二是使用代 词 三是使用关联词 如 Go into the park Go forward Cross the bridge Turn right After you enter the park walk straight on till you come to a bridge Cross the bridge and turn right 加上 after till and 等过渡词 使句意连贯 六 六步作文法 一审二圈三定四写五改六抄六 六步作文法 一审二圈三定四写五改六抄 写作流程写作流程 一审题型 记叙文 议论文 夹叙夹议 二圈要点 核心 要求 提示词 三定基调 时态 人称 段落顺序 开头 结尾 四写全文 选词 短语 句型 五改错病 要点 字数 人称 段落顺序 主谓一致 六重抄写 字迹工整 满分作文特点 主旨清 要点全 句子顺 语法准 有亮点 书写整满分作文特点 主旨清 要点全 句子顺 语法准 有亮点 书写整 七 议论文七 议论文 议论文的常用过渡句 议论文的常用过渡句 Different people have different ideas about it It has both advantages and disadvantages However other people think differently However it also has disadvantages 常用连接词 because so and Besides However but in a word in my opinion first second third finally next after that 等 够用即可 不应过多地记忆 以免加重学生的负担 议论文可能会用到的复杂句式 It s necessary for sb to do sth Not only but also So that On the one had on the other hand 议论文模板 1 Should we Well different people have diffferent ideas about it 2 some people think it is necessary for us to On the one hand it can make us It can also make us What s more we can by 3 However other people don t think so if we we may So it is not good for us to 4 In my opinion we should shouldn t but 列出现象得论点 三正两反得结论 八 统计类作文八 统计类作文 八 九年级课本都有统计类课文材料 在复习时强化这一题材的写作 写统计类作文 开头一般都是 Last week we had a discussion about And here are the results 统计类作文容易出现的汉语式表达是 There are 30 students eat no breakfast 30 of students eat no breakfast 统计类作文模板 第一段 Last week we did a survey about and here are the results 第二段 50 of the students choose to because 30 of the students think so they would like to Another 30 of the students prefer to 第三段 As for me I like so I think is the best choice 九 叙事九 叙事 议论议论 如 2011 年中招考试作文 根据无臂钢琴演奏者刘伟的故事写一篇励志短文 主人公的经历是叙事 启 示是议论 叙事 议论也成为夹叙夹议 最容易出错的是时态 所 以让学生把握好这种问题的时态很重要 叙事和议论部 分各站的比列也要弄清楚 可以制成下面的口诀 让学生一下子对这一题材的文章有个整体布局的把握 夹叙夹议 叙事 5 6 句 议论 2 3 句 叙事用过去 议论现在时 叙事叙事 议论范文议论范文 LiuWei an armless piano player has a very special experience He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10 but he didn t give up his dream of becoming a pianist He tried to practise playing the piano with his feet Finally he realized his dream in China s Got Talent As a student I have learnt a lot from his story We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard No matter how hard life is we won t fail unless we give up our hope 1010 预测预测 20142014 书面表达书面表达 一 请以 After class Activities 为题目 请你根据以下提示 写一篇英文稿件 80 词左右的短文 1 你校开展课外活动的情况 2 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处 3 为同学选择课外活动提出建议 4 为学校开展课外活动提出建议 注意 文中不得提及人名 校名及地名 短文开头已为你写好 不计入总词数 After class Activities Nowadays after class activities are becoming more and more popular in schools 范文 After class Activities Nowadays after class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools In our school there are various kinds of activities for example arts and sports We enjoy them very much Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge they also free me from the heavy work of study Here I have some suggestions To students you d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you to schools they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework Dear friends please actively take part in after class activities which will not only make your school life colorful but also improve you learning 解析 在写作时 注意把握好时态 应该以现在时态和过去时态为中心 以第一人称为主 词数严格控制在 80 120 之间 文中可穿插使用一些表示逻辑关系的连词 副词 介词短语 句型等 如 if when but for example I m afraid besides 做到书写工整 卷面整洁 在有把握的情况下 可以使用一些高级词汇和 句式 来为自己的书面表达增光添彩 二 三年的初中生活马上要结束了 回顾这三年你最大的收获是什么 你最难忘的瞬间是什么 经过是怎样的 请以 My Junior School Life 为题写一篇 80 词左右的短文来描述一下你的初中生活 答案 说明检测第六套听力第三节内容 P148 或者是 My Junior School Life My school life is meaningful I have learnt a lot of useful knowledge and skills which can help me deal with problems in my daily life My teachers are reallygreat They have taught me how to b e independent My classmates are friendly and helpful We often hold interesting activities aft er school I enjoy myself indeed and our friendship will last forever I will graduate from my junior school soon I think I will always remember the life here MyMy JuniorJunior SchoolSchool LifeLife 第二篇范文 第二篇范文 How time flies My colorful middle school life is nearly ending Here is what I think of about myself In the past I was proud of myself because I got on well with my classmates and my grades were good 用一般过去时写出过去的学习生活情况 Now I have many interests such as reading books playing sports and so on In this way I ve got more knowledge and improved my life 用表示现在的几种时态写出现在的学习生活情况 As for the future I ve two dreams One is to be a teacher and the other is to be a volunteer Helping others is my greatest happiness 用一般将来时写出自己的梦想 Although I have made much progress I ll try my best to do better Believing myself is the key to success 未来寄语 三 假设你叫李华 请给你的美国笔友 Paul 分享你的初中生活 1 简单介绍基本情况 课程 作息 课外活动等 2 讲述你初中生活中最精彩的事情 3 你的收获或感想 4 询问对方的初中生活 Dear Paul Thank you for your last letter I m glad to tell you something about my school life On study I m good at Chinese and English mathematics is my weakness Mr Li is my math teacher He often helps me with my patience With his help I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates He is always very kind to every student As an experienced teacher respect and love all of his students I have a lot of interests Swimming reading and movies are my favorite the color is too busy with my study life In addition I am easy going easy to make friends with others Friendship is an important part of my life This is my middle school life How about you Li hua 四 最近你班同学就 音乐是否有助于学习 这一话题展开讨论 请你就以下提示 用英文介绍讨论结果 并简要 介绍你自己的学习习惯 1 赞成人数 60 原因至少两点 2 反对人数 40 原因至少两点 3 你的学习习惯 要求 1 字数 80 左右 2 结构完整 可适当增加细节 Last week we had a discussion about if music is helpful to learning And here are the results 60 of the students choose to agree this idea because they think that music not only can make them relax but also can make them pay more attention to something and improve their memories But 40 of the students disagree They think listening to the music is wasting the time what s more we have so much homework to do every day So they would like to study hard rather than listen to music As for me I like music so I think listening to music when I am tired is the best choice 五 假如你叫张明 你校要举办一次主题为 How to get along with Friends 的英语演讲比赛 请你用英语写一 篇演讲稿 要点如下 1 尊重并信任朋友 2 常与朋友聊天 3 换位思考问题 要求 1 词数 80 左右 2 适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 参考短语 换位思考 put your feet in his their shoes Friends is an important part of my life To me sometimes they are like a mirror while they are a n effective medicine at times All in all I feel we should cherish the friendships with our friends at anytime While how to get along with friends may be not an easy matter I think three factors listed as follows are very significant Firstly trust your friends trust is a key point in every emotional relationships only if you build trust each other your friendships will be permanent Secondly learn to share joys and sorrows keep a sentence in your mind that is A friend in need is a friend indeed Thirdly treat your friends like your family member this way can make your friend feel that he occupies an important position in your heart Every emotion should be conducted by two sides including friendship learn to how to get along with your friends will keep your friendships consolidated and ever lasting 六 假设你叫张明 你们全班同学在 五一节 放假期间开展了 体验一天低碳生活 的活动 请你根据以下 内容提示 写一篇 80 词左右英文短文 介绍同学们这一天的体验活动 短文的开头已为你写好 不记入总词数 1 早上骑自行车去公园锻炼 不让家人开车送 2 下午在家做作业时打开窗户 没有开灯 晚上也没开空调 3 用自己的水杯喝水 拒绝用一次性纸杯 A Low carbon Day The students in our class took part in an activity of Experience a Low carbon Day during the Labor Day vacation 范文 A Low carbon Day The students in our class took part in an activity of Experience a Low carbon Day during the Labor Day vacation As we know at the last Copenhagen conference in Denmark politicians and activists are fighting for making bigger cuts in carbon emission We are all looking for a big shift to have a greener world In the morning we went to the park by bus instead of going by car which means choosing a low carbon transportation At noon when we dined out in a restaurant we refused to use the disposable chopsticks served there Instead we each took with us a lunch box in which there was a pair of chopsticks and a spoon Besides to avoid the damage the free plastic bags caused to the environment when we went shopping at a supermarket In the afternoon we didn t use plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones We didn t come home until very late in the evening Being extremely hot at night our neighbours had to turn on the air conditioners but we used electrical fans to cool ourselves down I think what we did on that day was meaningful which helped us to form a good habit We should also call on the people around us to do something for low carbon life Only in this way will the earth be a good place to live on Thus it s time for us to develop low carbon habits in our daily life 七 2013 年 4 月 20 日 我国四川省雅安市芦山县 county 县 发生强烈地震 造成严重人员伤亡和财产损失 你校组织赈灾活动 希望每人献出一份爱心 捐献一件学习用品 假如你捐献了一个心爱书包 或铅笔盒 图 书等 请根据下列提示写一封信给这位不知名的灾区同学 1 了解灾区情况 表示同情 2 你珍爱这件学习用品的原因 3 鼓励灾区同学重建家园并提出自己的建议 注意 1 词数 不少于 80 个 信的开头已给出 不计入总词数 2 可根据内容要点适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息 4 生词提示 一副圆规 a pair of compasses Dear friend When we learned on TV the terrible earthquake happened in Lushan country Yashan of Sichuan on April20 2013 Many peaple were killed and injured We are really worried It s said that many houses were ruined I d like to send you a beautiful bag which were a present given by my sister on my birthday I hope it will be helpful to your study As youself don t lose heart and be strong minded Because the peaple all over the country are standing by you And please keep in touch with me and I will try my best to help you besides the government is trying to help the people in the disaster hit areas rebuild their homes I believe the day will come soon when you overcome all the difficulties and live a new life Hope your reply ealy Yours truly Li Ming 八 人们在生活中面临各种各样的挑战 请说一说人们为什么喜欢挑战和有哪些新的挑战有待人们探索 注意 1 适当展开想象 语意连贯 结构完整 2 词数不少于 80 不包括文章的开头 For thousands of years people have accepted challenges in different fields 范文 For thousands of years people have accepted challenges in different fields There are not only physical challenges but also social and intellectual challenges Some people risk their lives in playing sports to see how well they can do Others try to make and invent something to make life easier Whatever they are people enjoy challenges 九 一个好的学生应该具有许多优秀品质 你认为哪个或哪两个是最重要的呢 为什么 请分析原因 并结合自己 的生活实际 写下你的感悟 要求 1 词数 80 左右 2 题目自拟 3 文中不出现真实的学生姓名 注意 1 文章连贯 条理清楚 详略得当 2 分析原因 结合实际 写出真情实感 Being passionate 易怒的 热烈的 honest and hard working a good student is always listening this words I strongly believe that honesty is of the most importance among dozens of good qualities There is a proverb that goes Honesty is the best policy and it seems as true as it was when first coined The most important element in human relationships whether business or personal is trust Here is one of my secrets I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores Having known the real fact from teachers they praised and encouraged me showing their deep love Later days my conscience swallowed me growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit I gave it up and chose to be frank Wow It is better to stick to the truth From then on I have kept the following in my minds If it is not true don t say it If it is not right don t do it Honesty is not only the best policy but also a principle which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life 十 假设你是李华 准备参加学校举办的主题为 健康成长 的英语作文比赛 请按要求写一 篇短文 主要内容包括 1 乐观的人生态度 2 努力学习 3 参加体育锻炼 注意 1 词数 80 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头已经写好 We all want to grow up happily and healthily and for this goal we must do several things We all want to grow up happily and healthily and for this goal we must do several things Firstly we should develop a good attitude to life Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times We should be brave in front of difficulties Secondly we must study hard because knowledge is power If we have the power we can help to build our country and enjoy life better In order to study well we need to do sports so that we can keep fit We can go running play ball games or simply take a walk after a day s study If we do those things well we will be able to grow up happily and healthily 十一 写作内容 根据以上数据 写一篇短文 包括以下内容 1 调查时间 调查问题 以及调查对象 像方面的差异 2 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异 3 父母 在男女生偶像中的排序差异 4 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的 5 你的偶像及理由 例题导写 1 认真审题 理清要点 第一点写作内容 调查时间 调查问题以及调查对象 是在表格以外的写作引入说明 部分找到具体信息 第二至四写作点中 要求找出男女生数据的 差异 写作时要一语中的 第五点写作内容 则让考生自由表达观点 2 第五点写作内容 给予考生很大的发挥空间 也是体现考生写作水平的很好机会 考生尽量避免使用 I like Jay Chow because he is handsome 等语言简单 观点肤浅的句子 而应该运用高级语句 争取高分 如 My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination 或 The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will 参考范文 Last week we did a survey among 2 600 students on who is your idol The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols while 48 of the boys figure sports stars As the data shows parents ranks the second for the girls but the fourth for the boys However the percentage of the boys choosing great figures is the same as that of the girls As for myself Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life 十二 假定你叫张华 班里从外地转来一名同学李明 他一时无法融入新的班集体中 感到很苦恼 请根据下列要点 用英语给他写封 80 词左右的信 帮他分析原因 给他提出建议 陈述你帮助他的具体打算 Dear Li Ming My name is Zhang Hua I m one of your classmates I m writing you this letter to tell you something about the new environment you re in It seems that you feel uncomfortable now since you ve just entered a new environemnt and you need time to get used to it and I m willing to help you To analyze the reason why you feel uneasy could be that you still need some time And maybe you re a little shy to communicate with others I think that you can talk with people around you and be brave to ask them questions that you don t know I m sure that this will help and you will get used to this new place soon Looking forward to your reply Best wishes Zhang Hua 十三 爱心俱乐部 Helping Hands Club 在招收新会员 你想加入该俱乐部 请根据下列提示的内容 用英语写一封 自荐信 姓名 王林 性别 男 本人特点 身体健康 学习刻苦 乐于助人 与同学友好相处 爱心表现 帮助同学复习功课 路上帮助老人过马路 公共汽车上让座给有孩子的妇女 有时在公园捡垃圾 加入的目的 1 2 要求 1 表达清楚 语句通顺 意思连贯 2 要点须包括所提示的信息 但不得使用真实姓名和校名等 3 表格中 加入目的 一栏内容由考生自拟 4 词数 80 左右 Dear Chairman I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 3 I d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club My name is Wang Ling I m hard working and I m in good health I often help others And I m friendly to classmates When someone is in trouble I ll go and help him or her I usually help the old people to cross the road They often say thanks to me In the bus I ll stand up and give the seats to the lady with a baby Every Satuarday I ll go to center park to clean it up I want to join this club because I want to help more people I will be glad if I am received I am waiting for your answer yours Wang Lin 十四 今天 你校举办了 感恩行动日 thanks giving campaign day 活动 请你根据以下活动安排 用英语写一篇 短文 介绍你所参加的活动及你的感想 并将短文投到你校校报发表 时间活动内容上午为老师做一件事 制作感恩卡 thank you card 送给老师 下午 3 O0 4 O0 演讲比赛 读 一封写给父母的感恩信 晚上为父母做一件事 帮助父母做家务 要求 1 词数 80 左右 首句已给出 不计人总词数 2 文中不要出现任何真实姓名 3 要点完整 层次清楚 语法正确 上下文连贯 4 你的感想 自己设想要点 A Thanks giving Campaign Day Today we had a thanks giving campaign day