高考英语专题复习 书面表达 (ppt).ppt

高三复习 记叙文写作 近年高考书面表达透析 topic howtodowellinnarrativewriting sixelements 5ws 1h threeparts eightsentences 2007湖南卷 假设你是王平 李华是你的同窗好友 请根据下列要点 用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言 要点 1 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象 2 用一到两个相关的事例进行描述 3 你对李华表示美好的祝愿 注意 1 内容积极向上 语意连贯 结构完整 词数120左右 2 不能写成诗歌形式 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称 真题分析 本书面表达题是文字提示 因此学生在动笔前先要审阅提示 如 文章的体裁 记叙文 人称 第一和二人称 时态 以过去时和一般现在时为主 表述李华在你心目中的印象时用一般现在时 关联词 when still later while without till等 破题分析 写作指导 开头 somepossibleexpressions ifeelverysadthatweshallsaygoodbyetoeachother youaretheverypersonwhogivesmeahandwhennecessary youarethemostconsideratepersonwhoknowsexactlywhatineed atthetimeforustosaygoodbye ifeelverygratefultoyouforyourgreathelp it stimetosaygoodbye i llvaluethetimewhenwestudytogether it stimetorecallthosebeautifuldayswespendtogether 写作指导 正文 somepossibleexpressions onedayinspringafterschool itbegantorainsuddenlywhenwewereonourwayhome ididn ttakemyumbrellawithme butyouofferedtohelpme asaresult yougotyourselfallwet thenextday yourmothercalledourheadteacherandsaidthatyouhadcaughtabadcold stillrememberthatnighttwoyearsago whenisuddenlyfellill itwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital youtookgoodcareofmewhileiwashavinganinjection later youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons withoutyourhelp iwouldhavefailedintheexamination 写作指导 结尾 somepossibleexpressions ifeelverygladthatihaveagoodfriendlike ihopewe llkeepintouchwitheachotherallthetime ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever iwishyouabrightfuture istillhavehundredsofstoriestosharewithyou istillhavethousandsofblessingsforyou mayallyourdreamscometrue mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse dearlihua it stimetosaygoodbye it stimetorecallthosebeautifuldayswehavespenttogether youaretheverypersonwhogivesmeahandwhennecessary youarethemostconsideratepersonwhoknowsexactlywhatineed stillrememberthatnighttwoyearsago whenisuddenlyfellill itwasyouwhocarriedmeonyourbacktoanearbyhospital youtookgoodcareofmewhileiwashavinganinjection later youmanagedtohelpmewithmylessons withoutyourhelp iwouldhavefailedintheexamination istillhavehundredsofstoriestosharewithyou istillhavethousandsofblessingsforyou mayallyourdreamscometrue mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse yours wangping 范文 操练 2008年元月下旬 全国下了一场几十年未遇的大雪 假设你是某英语报社的记者 请你用英语向国外朋友介绍你在永州的所见所闻 1 简要介绍这场大雪的情况 2 举例说明造成的影响和人们采取的措施 3 最后写出你的感受 注意 1 词数 120左右 2 参考词汇 目的地 destination停开 outofservice 本书面表达题是文字提示 根据上面介绍的方法先要审阅提示 如 文章的体裁 人称 时态 关联词 破题分析 记叙文 第一和三人称 以过去时态为主 表述你的感受时可用一般现在时 besides notonly butalso asaresult therefore assoonas等 范文 aheavysnowinthelatejanuaryof2008 yongzhousawadisasterofsnowthathasneverhappenedinseveraldecades itlastedforalongtime greatlyaffectingpeople slife asaresult manyvehiclesweretrappedontheroads therefore peoplewereforcedtoheadfortheirdestinationsonfoot notonlywerealltheflightscancelledbutalsothetrainswereoutofservice thecitygovernmentcalledonallthecitizensandsoldierstotakepartintheactivitiesofcleaningtheroadscoveredbysnow besides thecitygovernmenttookallkindsofeffectivemeasurestorescuethepeopletrappedinthesnowtoensurethateverythingreturnedtonormalassoonaspossible experiencingsuchaheavysnow ifirmlybelievethatunited wearestrong divided weareweak 审试题 以切中题意 圈要点 防止遗漏要点 注短语 为写作做好准备 定基调 定出时态 人称 顺序 开头 正文 结尾 写全文 一鼓作气 一气呵成 改病句 认真检查 改正错误 应试策略 theend wishy