上海中考英语作文专题指导.docx

上海中考英语作文专题指导一、中考英语作文写作模式“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主；三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如on one hand, on the other hand; whats more; however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析1. 时态错误2. 时间状语错误3. 名词单复数错误4. 动词误用5. 语态错误6 词性误用7. 介词误用8 某些搭配和惯用法误用F 中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A. 中考英语热门写作话题1. 关于学习Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago)How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day .) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar .)_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2. 关于兴趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) What is your interest? Why do you like it so much?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 3. 关于写事Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 4. 关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for summer holiday”. （以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Give at least two points._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 5. 关于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My good friend”. （以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Who is your good friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 6. 关于写人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My English teacher”. （以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Who is your English teacher? Do you like him or her? Why do you like him or her? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 7. 关于英语Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I changed my ways of learning English”. （以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) How did you learn English in the past? Why do you change your ways of learning English? How do you learn English now?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 8. 关于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An unforgettable trip”. (以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Where did you go? What did you do during that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 9. 关于动物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite animal”. （以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 10. 关于网上购物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Online shopping is changing the way of our life”. （以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online shopping._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 11. 关于学科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite subject”. （以“我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考) Whats your favourite subject? Why do you like it best? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 12. 关于变化Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Changes in myself”. （以“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题可供参考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? (Give at least 2 examples) What do you think of the changes?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 13. 关于节日Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The Lantern Festival”. （以“元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容供参考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ B. 提示性作文每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现。请根据下图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章。【要求】1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；2. 介绍Tom，谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径；3. 文章不少于90词；4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2015年中考英语总复习专项训练题（六）参考范文A. 1.How to learn English wellEnglish is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways:Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class. Secondly, I like speaking English with my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. Its important to improve my spoken English.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.2.My interestI have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a music lover. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the afternoon. I often run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble and worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body. In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.3. Unforgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help Ive made great progress. But Im a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning a “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me