核按钮高考英语一轮复习 专题一 怎样使用高级词汇写出好句子考点突破课件 新人教版必修1.ppt

专题一怎样使用高级词汇写出好句子 高考英语书面表达评分标准鼓励考生使用高级词汇 但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难 古怪的词汇 而是使用一些表意准确 形象生动 语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇 在使用时 应遵循以下原则 高级但不造作 多变但不离谱 复杂但不晦涩 我们可以尝试如下方法 一 词性需多样化在写作时 考生们用得较多的是动词 其实在表达相同意义时 变换着使用同意义的名词 形容词 介词 短语 等句型结构 只要使用得体 就能产生十分明显的表达效果 例如 1 theprofitofourcompanyhasincreasedsharply 也可表达为 ourcompanyhasexperiencedasharpincreaseinitsprofit ourcompanyhasasharpincreaseinitsprofit theprofitofourcompanyisonasharpincrease 2 ourproductsaleshavedecreasedby10 也可表达为 ourproductsaleshaveundergoneaslightdecrease ourproductsalesareonthedeclineby10 二 同义词多样化在写作中我们应尽量避免重复使用同一单词或短语来表达同一意思 必要时应恰当地使用同义词 组 来进行替换 因为表达方式过于单一 不免有黔驴技穷之嫌 而丰富的表达方式则可反映出我们较高的英语应用能力和较大的课外阅读量 比如 在介绍自己或某人的兴趣与爱好时 不仅可说 ilike 或 i minterestedin 还可用enjoy prefer beinto fondof crazyabout absorbedin addictedto onfirefor takepleasurein haveastrongdesirefor show display aninterestin goinfor haveapreferencefor haveanappetitefor等词和短语 在表达赞成或反对观点时 可使用befor against not agreewith not believesth 或approve disapproveof doing sth 而seesth 可用catchsightofsth 替换 usesth 可用makeuseof makethebestofsth 替换 例如 1 beforeiwasacollegestudent iconsiderediteasytobeacollegestudent atthattime iwaseagertobeacollegestudent iimaginedtheinterestinglifeofacollegestudent 也可表达为 beforeienteredcollege iconsiderediteasytobeacollegestudent atthattime iwaseagertobeoneofthem iimaginedtheinterestinglifeontheuniversitycampus 2 asaresulttheplanwasafailure 也可表达为 theplanturned worked cameouttobeafailure 三 遣词贴切细致遣词造句的贴切细致 体现了写作者对于一个单词的内在意义 包括其褒贬义 感情色彩等 的体味与运用 比如 农民 peasant一词有 粗俗 与 无知 的意味 带有贬义色彩 而farmer则不然 再如 dumplingisthemostimportantfoodforthespringfestival anditisanimportantthingforustopaynewyearcallstoourgoodrelativesandfriends 也可表达为 dumplingisthetypicalfoodforthespringfestival anditisatraditionforustopaynewyearcallstoourcloserelativesandfriends 在写作中 应避免过多使用thing good bad important wonderful等抽象的词 因为这些词的词义非常宽泛 易造成语意模糊 试比较下列两组句子 1 thankyouforspendingthetimewithus thankyouforsharingthetimewithus 2 beingwarm heartedisthemostimportantthingforeveryone beingwarm heartedisthemostimportantvirtueforeveryone 四 造句独辟蹊径句意表达中 主体词汇的选择要尽可能做到超越平凡 独辟蹊径 例如 起程回家 我们可不说 gohome 而说 setoffforhome 或 headhome 取得很大进步 可以说 makegreatprogress 也可以说 makemajorprogress 像这样使用他人所不常用之词 在表达上就独树一帜 稍显优势 当然 这种遣词造句的技巧只有在平时多浏览原味的英文材料 方可集腋成裘 下面试析画线部分被替换后的句意效果 1 itwillbeveryinteresting alotoffun 2 thebookisalmostfinished justabout 3 thiswordhasseveralmeanings acoupleof 4 thatisadifficultjob challenging 5 helearnedabouteverythingatlast eventually 6 ishouldthankyoufortakingsomuchtroubletohelpme amparticularly trulygratefulto 7 thewayhelooksattheworldisverypractical views 8 thenoisenearlymadememad drove 五 恰当运用修辞在写作中若能准确地运用各种英语修辞手法 就能使句意表达得更形象生动 富有韵致 例如 1 thepeople srepublicofchinawasfoundedin1949 theyear1949sawthefoundingofthepeople srepublicofchina 拟人 2 i mtoobusynow i masbusyasabeeatpresent 比喻 3 ireceivedalotoflettersthismorning ireceivedafloodoflettersthismorning 夸张 1 请用适当的词或短语替换句中画线部分 ourcompanyneedssalesstaffverymuch itcanbeverycoldthiswinterinwuhan asyouknow ilikeplayinggolfbest therearemanyinternationalstudentsinourcollege thepupilshavealotofhomeworktodoeveryday key 1 badly bitterly myfavoritesportis ourcollegebringstogether tonsof endless thesmallvillageisatthefootofthemountains visitorshaveenjoyedthedeliciousitalianfood tryingasmanykindsoflocalsnacksaspossible wewereclearthatthecircledancetoldthebeesaboutthelocationofthefeedingplace asweallknow mrjoneslikesvariousactivities includingmusic sportsaswellascomputergames napoleonwasverymuchsurprisedatthetwoanswers helookedatthetallman eitheryouaremad oriam hedeclared key islocated lies varieties itwasevident isfondof hasgreatinterestin astonished 2 请用更贴切的短语替换句中的画线部分 并写在句后的横线上 becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow assoonashearrivedhome hefoundallthewindowsopen wehaven tseeneachothersincefiveyearsago hehasrecentlypublishedabookwhichdealswithlungcancer thepresidentsaidhedecidedtotalktomeontheconditionwhenwecanseeeachother 2 thanksto owingtothegoodweather atthenewsofhisdeath onhisarrival itis sincewelastmet anewly publishedbook tohaveaface to facetalkwithme key inrecentyears tensofthousandsof tryingtheirbest attending lastbutnotleast however liveby besides thecostsaremuchhigher inspiteofthesefacts 3 下面是一篇学生习作 请将画线部分内容用较高级词汇进行替换 sincesomeyearsago studyingabroadhasbeenpopular many chinesemiddleschoolstudentshavegonetoforeigncountriestostudy manypeoplearedoingwhattheycan togoabroad therearemanyadvantagesingoingto schoolsabroad first studentswhostudyabroadcanmadefriendswithpeopleofdifferentcultures second wecanlearnmuchmoreadvancedknowledgeofscienceandtechnologyfromforeigncountries third wecanlearnforeignlanguagesmorequickly butontheotherside therearesomedisadvantages mosto