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改错改错 1 The bar chart illustrates that the trend of call types in the united kingdom for 8 years from 1995 to 2002 2 The bar chart compares the figures in terms of minutes spent on telephone calls splitted into three types 3 The bar chart gives information about telephone calls It is in three types Local National International and Mobile call minutes from year 1995 to 2002 in UK 4 The graph compares the total using time of 3 call types in the UK over a 7 year period from 1995 5 The bar chart presents the amount of phone calls in billion of minutes make in the UK over a period of seven years into the categories of local national international and mobile phone calls ANSWERS FROM SIMON The main problem seems to be that people are making the sentence too difficult If you read my introduction at the bottom of the lesson it s easier and clearer than the students sentences Just keep your introduction as simple as possible Here are the problems 1 The main problem is the use of the word that Just write The bar chart illustrates the amount of time the trend etc 2 The main mistake is the word splitted The past and past participle are split and split 3 The main problem is the phrase It is in three types Local I don t know what the word it refers to 4 The phrase the total using time of 3 call types isn t right 5 Problems with make and into the categories Posted by Simon Friday February 19 2016 at 11 27 FROM SIMON continued Here are my suggestions 1 The bar chart illustrates trends in different types of phone call in the United Kingdom over 8 years from 1995 to 2002 2 The bar chart compares figures for UK phone calls in terms of minutes spent on three types of call between1995 and 2002 3 The bar chart gives information about three types of telephone call namely local national international and mobile calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002 4 The chart compares the total number of minutes of three types of phone call made in the UK over a 7 year period from 1995 5 The bar chart shows the amount of time spent on three types of phone call in billions of minutes in the UK over a period of seven years 有关电话的短语 amount of time the time spent on in terms of throughout the period the period shown a dramatic increase in increased steadily reached a peak the figure for the rise in Collocations related to the phone calls topic local calls national calls international calls fixed line landline calls mobile calls overall usage user minutes 填空 Use these words at in on to for by 1 the amount of time spent people in the UK three different types of phone call 2 calls made via local fixed lines were the most popular type terms of overall usage 3 the figures all three types of phone call increased 4 the amount of time spent local calls using landlines had reached a peak 90 billion minutes 5 the rise the other two types of phone call continued 6 the figure mobiles rose around 45 billion minutes by on 2 in 3 for 4 on at 5 in 6 for to 练习题 The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 Here s my suggested outline for a 4 paragraph report 1 Introduction rewrite the question statement in your own words 2 Overview point out which category was highest in each year which was lowest and which saw the biggest changes 3 Details compare the 3 categories in 1995 then say what happened up until 1999 4 Details notice what happened to local calls from 1999 onwards and contrast this with the other 2 categories Finish with a comparison of the figures in 2002 开头段 The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002 It is clear that calls made via local fixed lines were the most popular type in terms of overall usage throughout the period shown The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes Here s my full answer for the phone calls bar chart in this lesson The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002 It is clear that calls made via local fixed lines were the most popular type in terms of overall usage throughout the period shown The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes In 1995 people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls By contrast mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes Over the following four years the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily By 1999 the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes Subsequently the figure for this category fell but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued In 2002 the number of minutes of national international landline calls passed 60 billion while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes Don t use these phrases Can you see what s wrong with the phrases below Try to explain the problem with each phrase and suggest a better alternative 1 The bar chart displays the percentage of 2 A glance at the bar chart provided reveals 3 From an overall perspective it is clear from the evidence that 4 Looking at the pie chart it is noticed that 5 As can be seen the figures show that 练习题 练习题 Living alone in England by age and gender 2011 6 7 Number of bedrooms in one person households England 2011 8 Introduction Here s the question statement again The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person households And here s my introduction The two charts give information about single occupant households in England in the year 2011 The bar chart compares figures for occupants age and gender and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes Overview summary paragraph Overall females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single occupant home was two Here s my full report for the living alone charts from this lesson The two charts give information about single occupant households in England in the year 2011 The bar chart compares figures for occupants age and gender and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes Overall females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single occupant home was two A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female Women made up around 72 of single occupants aged 75 to 84 and 76 of those aged 85 or over By contrast among younger adults the figures for males were higher For example in the 35 49 age category men accounted for nearly 65 of people living alone In the same year 35 4 of one person households in England had two bedrooms while one bedroom and three bedroom homes accounted for 28 and 29 8 of the total Under 7 of single occupant homes had four or more bedrooms 练习题 Fill each gap with one word 1 the amount of money spent coffee 2 sales of coffee up in 2004 3 the UK saw by the highest levels of spending 4 revenue bananas was highest in the UK 15 million 5 the year 2004 dramatic increases the money spent on 2 went 3 far 4 from at 5 saw in 练习题练习题 IELTS Writing