作文范文背诵(一)

作文范文背诵(一) Directions:For thispart,you areallowed30minutes towrite ashort passageentitled Shouldparents send their kids to art classes?You shouldwrite atleast150words followingthe outlinegiven below:现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;1.对这种做法有人表示支持;2.有人并不赞成;3.我认为套用模板一【审题】分析题目，此作文属于对比选择类文章，并且题目中已经给出提纲，考生只需要按照提纲写出支持的理由、反对的理由、我的观点。 但最好在前面加上一个引言段。 引言可以是简单的对全文观点的总结，也可以是相关争议的背景介绍。 支持送孩子学艺术的理由不外乎成就艺术天才和培养兴趣爱好;反对的理由不外乎孩子压力过大和顺其自然等。 结尾段总结自己的观点，具备实力的考生还要写出点新意，运用闪光词汇。 【思路一】第一段指出现象，以及相关争议的背景介绍;第二段支持送孩子学艺术的理由;第三段反对送孩子学艺术的理由;第四段“我”的观点。 【范文一】Should ParentsSend theirKids toArt Classes? (1)Children arethe futureof thenation, (2)the pearlin their parentseyes.Hoping that their kids can beethe creamof thecrop amongothers,more andmore parentssend their kids tovarious artclasses tolet themlearn more.However,people hold different opinionstoward thisphenomenon. (3) (4)Some individualsmaintain that attending classes is aimedto broaden theirkidshorizon andenrich theirknowledge inthatthekinds canget acquaintedwith peersfrom differentfamily background. (5)In the class,exposed toa bigfamily theywill learnhow tocooperate witheach otherand howto develop a harmonious relationship withhis herclassmates,which isabsolutely essentialwhen childrengrow up.There aresome peoplewho holddifferent opinions.They arguethat becausesome kidsput ina largeamount oftime inthe class,they evencant setaside time to staytogether with theirparentsand sharetheir feeling,good orbad,withtheirfamily members. (6)As faras Iam concerned,just asevery coinhas twosides,it istrue tothe phenomenondiscussed above.If childrencan displaytheir potentialand they are interestedin whatthey aredoing, (7)then parents are expectedto providethe childrena chanceto give a full play of their ability.But iftheyaredisgusted attheclass,parentsaresupposed tosupport theirkidstobe engagedin otheractivities.【点评】范文点评 (1)开门见山对相关争议的背景做简单介绍。 (2)the pearlin theirparentseyes掌上明珠，语言地道。 (3)Some individualsmaintain that引出支持孩子学艺术的理由。 (4)使用亮点词汇broadentheirkidshorizon andenrich theirknowledge，developaharmoniousrelationshipwith。 (5)There aresome peoplewho holddifferent opinions.引出反对孩子学艺术的理由。 (6)使用As faras Iam concerned引出自己的观点。 (7)giveafull playof theirability“充分发挥才能”套用模板二【思路二】第一段对送孩子学艺术，人们观点不一;有人赞成，有人反对，而我认为最适合的才是最好的;第二段我支持送孩子学艺术的理由;第三段我不赞成的做法及理由;重申个人观点。 【范文二】Should ParentsSend theirKids toArt Classes? (1)There isno denyingthe factthat ithas beea prevailingtrend for parents tosendthe children to art trainingclasses ofall kinds.Different peopleholddifferentviews.Some contendthatattendingartclassescan helpnurture childrens interestand taptheir potentialsin suchart asmusic,painting anddancing.However,others thinkforcing themto goto artclasses mayonly restricttheir freedomand affecttheir healthygrowth. (2)Considering oneafter another,I believethat bothsides havesomething right. (3)For ohing,it mustbe admittedthat goingtoartclassesisand effectivemeans tofind outand give fullplay to childrens talentin art.For another,by attendingart classed,thechildrencan have an all-round developmentby acquiringknowledge andskills whichare nottaught intheir schools.Whats more,it isconducive totheir sounddevelopment.kidscanalso makea lotof friendsthere,thus theirmunication skillsmay alsobe sharpened. (5)However,Every coinhas twosides.These courseswould bring about heavy burdens tostudents andthus opposeto thispractice.In addition,the studentsmight nothave adequatetimetotake restand reflecton whatthey havelearned inschool.Therefore, (6)it isnot advisableforparentsto deprivetheir childrenoftheright tochoose tolearn whatthey trulylike.Remember,the fittestis thebest.【点评】范文点评 (1)使用句型There isno denyingthe facttha引出现象，概括不同人的观点，最后表明自己的立场。 (2)使用Considering oneafter another引出自己的观点。 (3)使用For ohing,For another,Whats more,来扩展文章，从而使观点层次清晰，论证有力。 (4)givefullplaytochildrens talent，haveanall-round deve