2005年6月四级作文.doc

1. 大学英语四级写作评分标准四级考试作文部分要求考生在30分钟之内写出一篇不少于120词的短文。从近几年实考看，四、六级均采用同样的作文题，题型多为提纲式作文，即给出一个英文标题下面用汉语给出三段（或两段）的提纲，即要求写的中心内容。 （一） 评分 、CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 、大学英语四级作文题采用总体评分（Global Scoring）方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 、从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 、避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 （二） 评分标准 1、本题满分为15分。 2、阅卷标准共五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优劣于该分数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。 4、评分标准：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重的错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺。连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分 5、字数不足的应酌情扣分：累计字数CET4CET6扣分999911011918089100109270799099360698089550597079749699 注：（1）如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数。 （2）只写一段者：04分；只写两段者：09分。（指规定三段的作文） 6、为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准。现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。2. 英语四级作文的写作步骤及技巧 一、审题 明确体裁。写作之前一定要明确要写的是什么文体，是议论文（分为“Topic题型”和A&B又称“正反观点题”）、应用文（主要是书信）、图表文或其它文体。这样才会按照该文体的基本规律展开内容，并体现出该文体应有的特征。如，2009年6月的题目：Free Admission to Museums，要求：1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2.也会带来一些问题；3.你的看法。这就要求考生清楚第一段要写的是提出问题博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 第二段描述问题介绍博物馆免费对外开放会带来一些问题；第三段你的观点你是如何看待这个问题的。 二、确定主题句 审完题后， 接下来我们就要思考该如何写这一问题了。首先就是要确定正确的写作思路。第一步就是要写主题句。放在文章的开头让阅卷老师一目了然，突出重点，同时主题句也是确保作文不偏题的前提。写主题句的方法就是把题目中的中文提纲译成英语，再加以修饰拓展。如上题中的主题句译为：An increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad.纲要译为：1.The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture，knowledge and history with every average person in our society. 2.Free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. 3.As a university student， I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. 三、结构条理要清晰 写一篇作文，还需树立一个框架，结构完整清晰，详略得当。条理清晰，对于议论文来说，正反面要讲清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清晰，对于描述文来说，谁干什么事要讲清楚。我们可以用firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastly；to begin with，then，furthermore，finally；on the one hand，on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）等副词，它们可以使文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，老师阅读的时间很短，想得高分就必须吸引老师的眼球。 四、卷面工整 作为作文这种主观题来讲， 考生与阅卷老师是彼此互动、相互影响的。一个考生可以做的，首先是通过卷面给阅卷老师下意识地传达这个信息。用笔的颜色、粗细，整齐划一的格式（段首或一律顶格或一律空两格），明了的段落感（每段空一行），清晰的字数感（一行以十字为宜），工整的字迹都会给任何阅读者留下深刻的良好印象， 从而使考生先发制人、取得先机。 五、需要注意的一些问题 1、合理安排时间 建议考生用大概5分钟时间先审题，理清写作思路，写下重点句子，打好文章的大概框架。接下来用20分钟左右的时间来写文章。写完文章后， 考生还应用25分钟时间来检查文章。考生应检查以下几个方面。（1）大小写及单词的拼写是否正确；（2）搭配正确用词贴切；（3）语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三“一致”；（4）段落间及句子间衔接自然流畅，逻辑性强。 2、增加文章的闪光点 为了让作文得更好的分数， 考生应该在文章中运用一些技巧如短语、并列句、转折句、从句、理由词汇、路线句型、插入语、被动语态、提问法及谚语总结法等闪光点，可以让阅卷老师知道考生所能掌握的语言级别。比如，短语优先，如果老师发现亮点精彩的短语， 那么考生的文章定会得高分。如：I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. 又如：I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样表达也更准确。另外，在句子层面上，需要长短句有机结合，不要从头到尾都是简单句， 可以多变句式， 如并列句：Not only the fur coat is soft，but it is also warm. 转折句：The coat was thin，but it was warm.等。这些语言的运用会使文章大放光彩。 六、提高英语写作的应试技巧 1.通过背诵提高写作在平时考生应该多背诵好的范文， 考试时就可以套用好的句型，写作时就游刃有余。2.通过仿写和改写提高写作仿写是提高英语写作能力行之有效的方法， 在模仿写作中，格式、构思、表达方式等都可模仿，但要注意创新变通，语句要通顺，符合英语表达习惯。 七、可以套用的常用句型 1.开篇（1）Recently the problem has been brought into focus.（2）Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.（3）Recently the issue has aroused great concern among （4）With the rapid development of，比较（1）The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.（2）The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.（3）Evidently， it has both negative and positive effects.（4）People used to think， but things are different now.3.批驳（1）Contrary to what is widely accepted， I maintain that （2）Some people say， but it does not hold that. 4举例（1）A good case in point is （3）As an illustration， we may take（3）Such examples might be given easily.（4）is often cited as an example.5.结尾（1）From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that （2）It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop（3）It is necessary that steps should be taken to（4）To solve the abovementioned problem， we must（5）In summary，if we continue to ignore the abovementioned issue， more problems will crop up. 八、结语 总的来说，英语写作中技巧的应用对广大考生提高英语写作水平起着重要作用，但是只谈技巧，不付诸实践，只是纸上谈兵。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒，写作练成非一日之功。考生平时应多读多练，坚持不懈，熟能生巧，才能在考试中提高写作质量考出好成绩。考试仅仅是一个过程，更重要的是储备的重要性。3.具体操作老师评分主要是进行GLOBALREADING，也就是进行整体给分，不是仔细推敲给分。1大家拿到作文题目之后，先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构，一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构：说明文，议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的，利弊类型的，原因结果类型的，解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词，求职求学信，邀请信，感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构，这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题，也不会因为写跑题而失分。考试就到考试大2开始写作文时一定要段落清楚，有明显的开头，主体和结论部分。也就是大家要学会分段落，不要象记流水帐一样，一段到底，这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。同时在文章写作过程中，一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词，这样的话可以使文章很自然，流畅。比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先，其次，再次这样的连接词，或者一方面，另一方面，等这样的词。这些都是很容易引起老师的注意，可以得分的地方。3写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇，这样也可以提高老师的印象。但不是说你用的词很多，而写出的句子结构，语法错误太多。这样也会很糟糕的。因此大家一定要注意，如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候，你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词，还有一定要确保句子的正确性，尽量避免语法结构的错误。即使你使用的简单句，但是写的很清楚，没任何错误，也可以得到不错的分数。4 注意文章的长度安排，短的作文一定是不可以的，也就是字数要达到要求。但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意，写的时候要长度适中，确保写出的句子错误很少，即使观点只是很一般，没什么新的地方。也能得到相对好的分数。5 卷面一定要整洁，字一定要写的漂亮，这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的 ，所以大家也要主要平时HANDWRITING的练习。How should Parents Help Children to Be independent? 1、目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2、为了孩子独立，父母应该 How should parents help children to be independent?Nowadays, theres an increasing number of household in China that has an only one child. Most of parents love and care for children so much that children has less chances to deal with problems by themselves. Consequently, children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack of ability to solve problems independently, which is bad for their growing.There are some effective ways for parents to help their children be independent. To start with, parents should give their children more chances to experience the world and life around them. Thus their children can enhance the capability to overcome the difficulties and handle problems independently. In addition, parents should offer enough assistance when their children need some instructions and advices. In this way, they depend on their parents in a right way and can solve problems independently when they face the same one next time. Last but not least, parents should allow their children to make decisions independently. Children would improve the ability to deal with the problems they are confronted with in their life.From the above discussion, I strongly believe that parent should help their children be independent by instructing them in a proper way rather than planning and considering everything for them. Its children who decide their future and fate, so it would be beneficial for them to live independently with some proper instructions of their parents.来源:考试大-英语四级考试作文范文高分版It is nothing unusual to find overprotective parents who help their children in all aspects of life. The question is, are they sure their heart loaded with love will bring good to their children? Lets look at the real situation of the second-rich generation. Some of them, rather than becoming the second-strong generation, becomes the defeated generation which is notorious for their life focused on consumption rather than creation.Because of the changes of education in history, most Chinese parents, though successfully accumulate wealth, dont know much about the right value they should pass on to the new generation. They have tried all that they can to be good parents while neglecting the core value they should address, which is INDEPENDENCE.How should parents help children to be independent?They should give their children the freedom to make choices for themselves. Children cannot be happy if they dont have control over their life, which in daily life, means they make choices for themselves, like, what to eat, what to wear, what career to do, what kind of spouse they are going to marry. Some parents may be open-minded enough to let their children to make these tiny decisions about food and clothes, but when it comes to the big ones, they are too anxious to let their children have a try. They used to be young and they made mistakes and now it is their sons and daughters turn to be youngthe deep love and care is so intense that it becomes even suffocating-they are reluctant to give their children opportunities to start to be responsible for their own lives. 【考试通 - 大学英语四六级考试(CET)指南】2010年下半年大学英语四级考试将在12月18日09:0011:20举行，为了帮助大家有效的报考复习，收集整理了相关信息供大家参考，希望对大家有所帮助，同时祝大家顺利通过考试！ 全国大学英语四级考试流程及考生注意事项为了保证大学英语四级考试安全、顺利的进行，请各位考生熟悉以下流程和注意事项：1、 英语四级考试8：45考生进入考场所有考生一律携带身份证、学生证和准考证进入考场。证件不全者，不得参加考试。考生进入考场后，调试耳机。2、 英语四级考试9：00迟到考生不得入场，监考员发答题卡1和卡2考生用且只能用黑色字迹签字笔在答题卡上填写姓名、准考证号，用2B铅笔涂黑相应的信息点；暂不填写答题卡2上试卷代号一栏；考生不得提前答题，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理。3、 英语四级考试9：10考试正式开始，开始做试题第一部分考生做试题第一部分“写作”，务必用黑色字迹签字笔答题。4、 英语四级考试9：35监考员发试题册考生不得提前翻阅或改变试卷位置，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理。5、 英语四级考试9：40开始做试题的第二部分英语四级写作部分考试结束；考生打开试题册，开始做试题的第二部分“快速阅读理解”。6、 英语四级考试9：55收答题卡1收卷期间考生不得答题，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理。7、英语四级考试10：00听力考试正式开始。8、英语四级听力考试结束后，开始做试题的第四部分英语四级听力考试结束后，请立即摘下耳机，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理；考生开始做试题的第四部分。9、英语四级11：20考试结束英语四级考试结束，考生立即停止答题，不离开座位，待监考教师收齐试卷、清点考试材料无误并同意考生离场后，考生方可退场。10、考生不得提前退场和交卷英语四级考试过程中，考生不得提前退场，包括提前交卷，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理。11、考生进入考场需携带2B铅笔和黑色签字笔，不得携带其它材料考生进入考场不得携带的材料如书本、纸张、书包、录音器材、电子记事本和通讯工具（含BP机、对讲机和手机等）均不得带入考场，否则按违规违纪处理，并报省教育考试院处理。12、本次考试的题型分为六部分，第一部分作文的题目在答题卡1上，其余五部分的题目在试题册上；考试材料包括：试题册、答题卡1和答题卡2该文章转载自无忧考网：privateTutoring1。 为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍2家教的利与弊3我的看法 Arecentinvestigationshowsthatabout80percentofstudentshaveprivatetutors.Suchapopularpracticeindicatesthatpeopleareattachinggreaterimportancetoeducation.Manyparents,forvariousreasonsmissedthechanceofobtainingagoodeducation.Whentheirchildrenmeetwithdifficultiesinstudy,theyarehelpless.Privatetutoringistheonlysolution.Asprivatetutoringisusuallyone-to-one,theteacherknowsthestrongpointsaswel1astheweakpointsofthestudentsclearly. However,privatetutoringhasitsowndisadvantages;foronething,ittakesupsomuchofthestudentstimethattheycanhardlyfindenoughtimeforrestandentertainment,whichareessentialfortheirphysicalandmentalhealth.Foranother,someteachers,busy“shuttling”fromonefamilytoanother,tendtoneglecttheirregularteachingduties.Whatsmore,someteachersareeagertohelpstudentsdowellinthetest,offeringtheso-ca11edtipsfortest-takingratherthanhelpthemacquirewhatismoremeaningful.Generallyspeaking,itsdisadvantagesoutweighitsadvantages.Greateremphasisshouldbelaidonclassroomteachingandpractice,ontheimprovementofteachingqualityandonthetappingofthestudentspotentials.Onlyinthiswaycanwegenerationbehealthilybroughtup.Craze for Civil Service Examinations1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员2. 引起此现象的原因3. 你的看法本文来源:考试大网Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that cant be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as its also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a as well stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as other comforts of life, its quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish萧条的 world economy.Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproa