英语作文如何得高分.doc

英语作文如何得高分 我们经常犯的错误:1. 写作强调的是内容连贯，句子通顺，语言流畅，并且句子与句子之间能够用恰当的关联词衔接起来，并不要求写出多复杂的句子。但有些考生理解为只有句子长了，所用的从句多了才更纯正，所以使用各种从句分词等，致使文章言不达意，错误百出，效果适得其反2. 语法不正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。语法错误主要有:句子错误:句子没有主语;句子没有谓语;乱用be动词;句句之间没有连接词.原因: 基本句法即S+V没有搞清楚.词序错误:修饰语错位。例如：He very likes dancing. 时态错误: 动词时态的错误是高考英语书面表达中最常见的错误之一,也是考生运用语言的能力的显著标志之一。如2002关于公园收不收门票的讨论的介绍，陈述讨论的语句通常用一般现在时：Sixty of the students of our school think it is unnecessary to charge an entrance fee. They think that不少考生表达为Some people thought that 自编英语: 常常发生在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明 例如： There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on 内容表达错误这种错误一般说来是审题不清所致。如2003年的书面表达，正确内容是：Ive found a flat for you. Its a small one of 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The house is near No 11 bus stop on Fang Cao Street and the school is at the next stop.有不少考生表达为:“Ive found a flat of 25 square kilometers. Its in No.11 Fang Cao Street.” 句句间缺少衔接 过渡不平稳He worked hard. He failed the exam. (He worked hard. However, he failed the exam.) 习惯用语使用错误in my spare time 表达成 at my spare time; lose heart 表达为lose his heart单词运用错误写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有：a.将vi.用成vt.如:come the city/return the place b.将adj.用成vt.如:Please present on time. Dont absent! c.将u.n.用成c.n.如:a good news/many informationsd.将adj./adv.使用错误.如:in the recently years/study hardly; e.将prep.用成v.如:Many overpasses arounded the city. The road throughed the city. f.将名词的单/复数使用不当。如：There are lots of high building. / Most of the people have private car. 句中building应改为buildings；句中car应改为cars。g.句子的主谓不一致:如:A large number of beautiful buildings has been built. 句中has应改正为have。h.常用词拼写错误:如:beautiful写成beautful; believe写成belive; money写成monenyi.在叙事文中通常会运用一般过去时态,所以就出现了动词的过去式,尤其是不规则动词的过去式的拼写错误很普遍的现象。如：visitted/ hurted/ writed/. j.不定冠词的使用错误:如:send a e-mail to you(an)/ Even a overpass has been built(an)/ He graduated from an university.(a) k.虚词错误：冠词的漏用和误用, 如：My father is worker. 缺必要的连结词或连结词多余, 如：He likes swimming, I like climbing. 不间断句子，即几个句子连在一起，看起来似乎是一个句子 There are many ways we get to know the outside world.先看一下要求: 下面我们来看一下如何做1. 掌握基本句法. 2. 掌握基本词法 同上3. 使用高级词汇和高级句式 高级词汇 供参考表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second, oncenow, on the one handon the other hand, someothers, 表因果关系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last, 表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, 表进行举例说明: for instance, for example, like, such as, 表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary.第五档（很好）：1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。2. 覆盖所有的内容要点。3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5. 能有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。本文将探讨3 4 5先看一个2006年高考英语作文范例全国一Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.(使用非谓语动词)Our library is the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and (and 连接句子)our classroom building is right(使用适当的副词) behind it. The library is big. When you get inside(使用从句), you will see many shelves full of books(使用形容词短语作定语) on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to(高级词汇) the rule, every student can borrow up to(高级词汇) 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.We all like our library very much.(收尾)湖南Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most(使用从句). Though he is 34(使用从句),he looks very young for his age(高级词汇). And hes one of the most popular teachers in our school.Compared with other teachers(高级词汇) ,Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting(使用非谓语动词) .In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So ,instead of(高级词汇) giving us answers immediately ,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions(使用从句). With his help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of “why”he leads us to! (高级句式)He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.(收尾)浙江卷Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book(使用非谓语动词) in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story(高级句式). Besides(高级词汇), the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow(使用非谓语动词).Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information(高级词汇) from the original. Meanwhile(高级词汇), the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally(高级词汇), I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it