大学英语四六级写作部分十天快速提高秘诀-一1.doc

大学英语四六级写作部分十天快速提高秘诀 一、真题2007年12月：Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed1.有的人认为应该有回报2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报3.我的看法二、秘诀1、大纲标准记心头-有的放矢；2、技法套路勤操练-他为己用；3、有头有尾有内容-合法舞弊；4、开头结尾妙语连-一见钟情；5、妙语长句相结合-多多益善；6、行文过渡少而精-适可而止；7、谚语名言增文采-少用慎用；8、标点句型莫乱用-按需分配；9、篇幅长短预先定-心中有数；10、清晰流畅整行头-圆体连笔。Writing is somewhere between cheating and creating.Write CheatClumsy Cheating AuthorBrilliant Cheating Writer附注：最新最热的话题及预测题1. 如何助残2. 女大学生就业难的原因3. 节能倡议4. 奥运会志愿者招聘书5. 节约型社会还是消费型社会6. 你理想中的大学1. 认真审题；分类处理例：一篇典型利弊两分法的议论文Increased College Enrollment1). 近年来大学入学率逐年上升2). 大学扩招的益处及潜在问题3). 我对大学扩招的看法2. 头脑风暴；充实例子第一段引入主题：高校扩招。第二段分析高校扩招的益处：缓解了父母和高中生们的心理压力；提高全国教育水平；培养更多有专长的人才。第三段扩招造成的一些问题：造成大学里师资和教学设施短缺；使就业市场竞争更加激烈。第四段阐述我的观点。3. 调动词藻；丰富句型enrollment expansion；admitting more students into universities Recent years has witnessed a steady increase in college enrollment.High-school students welcome the practice, for they would have better chance of receiving higher education.With a growing number of students enrolled, a tough issue most universities face is inadequate teaching staff and facilities.However, one can never equate a college degree with a better job or future.4 卷面整洁；细致检查In recent years, there is a steady increase in college enrollment. To many high-school students, its definitely good news， for they would have better chance of receiving higher education.You dont have to look very far to find out the advantages of the increased college enrollment. For one thing, it lessens the worries of both high school graduates and their parents. Besides，increased college enrollment can contribute to raise the educational level of our nation. Whats more, increased college enrollment can provide more students with specialized knowledge, thus serving our development in a positive way.On the other hand, we can not deny that there are some potential problems about increased college enrollment. To begin with, with the increased number of students, the shortage of teaching staff and facilities becomes clearly seen. Worst of all, increased college enrollment leads to increased competition in the job market. Its not an easy task to tell whether the tendency should be encouraged. As to me, its laudable to grant more students higher education. But a college degree is by no means a guarantee for a better job or future. To cast a promising career, we need a lot more abilities which we can not learn from college.(四)临阵磨枪：1.开头的写法：万事开头难，写作文也是如此，但文章的开头很重要。常用的方法有以下几种：(1) 背景法：说明事件发生的时间、地点、情景等背景。例如：I was once spending the summer holiday in a small seaside village in the South of China. It was a beautiful and quiet place. People do not usually go there.(2) 人物法：交代文章所要描述的主要人物或有关人物。例如：Once upon a time, there was an old honest man named Hans. . He lived in a tiny cottage all alone, and every day he worked in his garden. . .(3) 主题句法：提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明或论述的主题。(4) 问题法：用提问的方式来引出文章的内容，以引起读者的注意力。例如： What is the nature of the scientific attitude? What is the harmfulness of fake commodities?(5) 惊语法：用令人感到惊奇的句子开头，激起读者的兴趣。例如：A 39-story building in construction collapsed in the city yesterday.(6) 故事法：以讲故事的形式作为文章的开头，在此基础上展开文章。多用语记叙文，也可用语议论文。例如在A Day to Remember, The Man I Respected Most这样的文章中就可以用这样的方法开头。(7) 数据法：引用已经被证实的数字来引起话题。例如， Smoking一文可以这样开头：It is reported that 1.5 billion people in the world smoke.(8) 引语法：引用名人名言或常见习语、谚语等作为文章的开头。例如：Rome was not built in a day. A little learning is a dangerous thing. Every coin has two sides. A friend in need is a friend indeed. etc.(9) 定义法：常见于对标题下定义，然后通过举例、逻辑推理等方法加以详细说明。例如： A true good student is one who possesses good morality, sound health, perfect knowledge and various abilities.2. 正文的写法(1) 演绎法：(deductive organization)从一般到个别。把带普遍性和概括性的句子放在段首，段落中其他的句子就是对主题句的具体化，是对主题句的具体说明。(2) 归纳法：(inductive organization)从特殊到一般。具体、个别的事例出发，总结出一般的规律。3.结尾的写法(1) 简要评价或作结论：文章的最后几句概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。例如：In short, we can say that science to human being is like food to our bodies. Science frees us from the bandage of Nature. Science itself is innocent, but sometimes man has misused it.(2) 重复主题句： 回到文章的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定或强调的效果。(3) 用反问句结尾：虽然形式是疑问句，但意义是肯定的，具有很明显的强调作用，能引起读者的思考。例如：If there were no homework on weekends, students would come to school on Monday well refreshed and willing to work. Isnt that both beneficial to students and teachers?(4) 提出展望或希望：对未来提出展望或希望，号召读者为此而行动。例如：Dear fellows, lets unite as one to fight for the prosperity of our motherland. Lets shoulder our responsibilities and fight for the happiness of the whole world.(5) 引用名人名言、谚语、常用习语结尾。例如： Early to bed and early to rise makesa person healthy, wealthy and wise.4.写作必备句型1. It is indisputable that(无可争辩)there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure. 2 No one can deny the fact (没有人能否认)that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.3. In fact, we have to admit the fact (我们必须承认)that the quality of life is as important as life itself. 4. This view is now being questioned by more and more people. (正受到越来越多人的质疑) 5. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years. (近些年引起了广泛关注)6. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem. (但是它也存在它的问题)7. There is a general debate on the campus today(校园里进行着广泛的争论)over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job. 8. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire (根据最近的一项调查，越来越多的人表达了一种强烈愿望)to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family. 9. There is a growing tendency (呈增长的势头)for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.10. Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts. (然而他们也不可避免的带来了一些负面影响)11. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it. (这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免)12. In conclusion, we must take into account this problem rationally(我们应理智考虑这一问题)and place more emphases on peasants lives. Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price. (任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价)13. Many people seem to overlook the basic fact(许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实) the major function of clothing is to keep us warm and comfortable.14. The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. / One of the great early writers wrote that: (著名作家萧伯纳曾说过) This view has been shared now by more and more people.15. As for me, Im in favor of the opinion(我同意这一观点)that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons: (理由如下)16. Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, (但必须承认)shortage of funds is still one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face(学生们面临的最大问题之一) because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day. 17. In view of such serious situation(考虑到这些严重的状况), environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before. 18. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion(通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论)that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages(远大于缺点) and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 19. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced(通过以上讨论，我完全相信)that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing. 20. Although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. (尽管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点)It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school. II、社会热点话题写作逻辑结构Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;(2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);(3) 本段总结(可以省略)。Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。四级作文试题2000年1月Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。How I Finance My College Education第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.第二段分写：In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.Whats more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。Personally/ As far as Im concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.Therefore /So /Hence,.使文章富有表现力的手段：1、使用有难度的词汇;2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子;3、使用被动语态;4、使用倒装句;(not only. but also.;only.)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。绿化我们的城市第一段：近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。普通版Recently, with the development of businesses and industries, more and more trees have disappeared in big cities. We have tried our best to prevent people from cutting trees. But, it is important to realize to make our cities green.润色版In contemporary society, while our industries and businesses have experienced a(n) rapid/ fast/ amazing/ marked/ fantastic development, the number of trees in many large cities has declined/ decreased/ reduced sharply/ dramatically. Although remarkable efforts have been exerted to prevent more trees from being cut, the realization of making cities greener is still of great importance.注：区分industry 和 industrial绿化我们的城市(续)第二段：绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一，绿化城市能够净化空气。科学研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二，它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木，我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后，绿化城市能够带来大量木材，这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。普通版There are many advantages in making cities greener. First, it makes our air clean. Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities. With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature. Finally, it will bring us a lot of timber. And this is an effective way to solve the problem of lack of natural resources.润色版What benefits can the program of making cities greener bring to us? First, the air will be cleaner. Scientific experiments have already proved that trees can reduce air pollution by producing a lot of oxygen. This will improve the quality of the urban environment. Second, our cities will look more beautiful. Just imagine the city which is full of trees and flowers. What an attractive garden it is! Whats more, by making cities greener, we can provide our industry with timber the precious natural resources.绿化我们的城市(续)第三段：绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力，人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献，还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。普通版Making cities greener requires peoples efforts all over the country. And people should not only realize that it is important to make cities greener for its contribution to urban environment, but also plant trees and protect them from being used in business.润色版Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness; it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers.(Making cities greener requires the whole nations efforts. And not only should most people gain the awareness of the significant contribution of making cities greener to urban environment, but also make a commitment to the protection of more trees against business.)句型变化A. (1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2) There are many trees along the streets. (3) There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5) There are willow trees on the one side. (6) There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7) There are many flowers on them.B. (1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener. (2) Green trees line the streets. (3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. (4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5) On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.1. There be.1) a. There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.b. Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.2) a. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.b. Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.2. If1) a. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.b. Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.2) a. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.b. The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.3) a. If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.b. Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.3. In order to1) a. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.b. An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.2) a. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.b. New efforts will bring .4. More and more1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.社会热点话题写作练习：Jobs for Graduates1) 大学生难找工作2) 原因很多3) 解决的办法With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?第二段细节论证分析原因：1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned.2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to .3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in . mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors .Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as .国家制定法律法规个人接受教育 III、图表题(table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph)图表题的写作逻辑结构：Paragraph I:(1)概括描述图表：趋势描写;(2)具体描述图表：必要数据支持(细节性)。Paragraph II:(1)提出自己理由和观点(本段主题句);(2)细节性分论点(主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两点)。Paragraph III:(1)预测未来和提出解决方法;(2)总结全文和表达作者自己观点【标题】Changes in Peoples DietDirections: Write a three-paragraph composition to:1. State the changes in peoples diet in the past five years.2. Give possible reasons for the changes.3. Draw your own conclusion.You should quote as few figures as possible.【短文】Changes in Peoples DietIn the past five years there have been many changes in peoples diet. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is now playing a less imp