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QvhuiComprehensive Summary draft 2Liyingmei22/10/2011We Have to Pay- Attached to Technology and Paying a PriceAswith the development of high technology, our life really changed. We must say that high technology is bringing us some problems which are emerging gradually. Just as Matt Richtel says “The resulting distractions can have deadly consequencethese urges can inflict nicks and cuts on creativity and deep thought, interrupting work and family life” (para 10). Of course, we are paying a price for that.Nora Volkow, director of the National Institute of Drug Abuse and one of the worlds leading brain scientists asserts that “The technology is rewiring our brains”(para 13). That means, our brain is changing little by little to adapt to taking in sorts of information in the era when we overuse the digital service, as Matt Richtel writes “the consumption of media, as varied as e-mail and TV, has exploded. In 2008, people consumed three times as much information each day as they did in 1960” (para 16), for entertainment or for work. We seem to acquire more, actually, the ability to create and to thoughtthinking deep is dropping. What is worse, “heavy multitaskers actually have more trouble focusing and shutting out irrelevant information, scientists say, and they experience more stress” (para 11).Sometimes family life is disturbingdisturbed by the heavy use of technology, Mr. Campbells family members mentioned in the essay, are always on their devices even when they are on a vacation, communication between family is rare缺少连接词:so. Not only communication among family members, but also people isare ignored,改为句号 Mr. Nass at Stanford thinks the ultimate risk of heavy technology use is that it diminishes empathy by limiting how much people engage with one another, even in he same room. To sum up, though technology brings us convenience in many aspects, on the other hand, we are really paying back for it. Something must be done, as the essay implies, the way we become more human is by paying attention to each other. 语言:9分注意动词形式;分句之间要用连接词连接 否则直接用句号划分。Work cited1 Matt Richtel. Attached to T

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