英语四级作文高分模板_文档剖析.doc

现象型的，加讨论，第一段通用The past few years have witnessed the emergence of a widespread phenomenon,that is,-这里写主题，就是题目中的-。This issue no doubt,has been brought into public concern immediately.Among the media,we can find bulk of relevent discussion.Obviously this is a topic that most people are not only interested in,but also hold opinion about.It is no wonder that some of the folks(人）tend to hold the view that 观点。However,a significant proportion of folks take the attitude that-观点As any coin has two sides,the above issue can also be approaches from a different perspective.Therefore it is quite normal for people to hold rather opposite opinion.However,it is my firm belief that_自己的观点。根据不同的情况第二三段得变换，第一段是通用的，第二段 要是说某种东西的特点，或陈述是，则It is no wonder that an overwhelming majority of folks point out that_will _sooner or later because_has various advantages over(要是有比较的时候加上OVER).To start with,_.whats more,_.the last but not the least,_.要是让提建议时Therefore,it is high time that some application approaches shoule be imposed by authorities and universities. To began with,_.whats more,_.the last but not the least,_.当这句为第二段时， 说的是政府和学校应提的措施，第三段就该说我们该怎么做的了，自己写点我们大学生应该做的，这句记下来，灵活运用however,one point should be kept in mind that wo should take sensitive use of them,always being the master of them.要是前两段是讨论的或什么的。第三段让提建议则Considering the current issue,we should call for some immediate approaches imposed by the authorities(universities).Or put it in another way,our goverment of various levels must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper order and justice.Besides,as a college student,wo should also be aware that any prompt solution is of benefit to all.Therefore,it is the duty of ordinary people to actively participate in the action.考试时多用些高频词汇，举例子就别用forexample了，用as an illustration，或a case in point is。many用a multitude of /a sea of /an overwhelming of /a significant proportion of ,think 的时候用hold the view that /take the attitude that/point out that一些中间加的好句子Despite all these weakness,it has a variety of strengths.(加入自已要说的话,notes Dr._随便写个人名，a 47-year-old sociology professor at Tsinghua University.)(自己一定要创造条件写上，可以论据充分）（在举例子的时候写）In exactly the ame way 同样的_has been widely adopted by people,and survey suggest that many more folks are thinking of following their lead. 大学英语四六级考试万能作文模板在CET4/6试题中，有两个拉分最厉害的部分，一是听力题，一是作文题。，跟汉语作文的起承转合类似，英语作文其实也有固定模式， 第一惊的是：我们中国真是高手如林，多么复杂、困难的问题，都能够迎刃而解，实在佩服之极。第二惊的是：八股文这朵中国传统文化的奇葩，在凋谢了一百多年之后，竟然又在中华大地上重新含苞怒放，真是可喜可贺。 这五个模板，在结构上大同小异，掌握一种即可，所以我从中挑选了一个最简单、最实用的，稍加修改，给各位介绍一下。这个模板的中文大意是：在某种场合，发生某种现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现象的三个原因，并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法。总的来说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，您只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。 Nowadays, there are more and more 某种现象 in 某种场合. It is estimated that 相关数据. Why have there been so many 某种现象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is 原因一. Besides, 原因二. The third one is 原因三. To sum up, the main cause of 某种现象 is due to 最主要原因. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, 解决办法一. On the other hand, 解决办法二. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of 某种现象. 为便于读者理解，我特意用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。 Nowadays, there are more and more ghost writers / 枪手 in Chinas examinations / 中国的考场. It is estimated that 5 examinees are ghost writers / 5的应试者是枪手. Why have there been so many ghost writers / 枪手? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is hirers ignorance / 雇主无知. Besides, hirers indolence / 雇主懒惰. The third one is hirers obtusity / 雇主迟钝. To sum up, the main cause of ghost writers / 枪手 is due to hirers low IQ / 雇主智商低. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, flagellation / 鞭打. On the other hand, decapitation / 斩首. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of ghost writers / 枪手. 、 大学英语四六级考试万能作文试题模版（I）说明原因型模块（一） Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ). To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .注释：（1）用具体数据说明XX现象（2）原因一（3）原因二（4）原因三（5）指出主要原因（6）解决建议一（7）解决建议二 Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their childrens unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned). Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they dont spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .第二篇：（I）说明原因型模块（2） In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ). The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) . Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ). The impact of Television In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children. The factors for (parents worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with somany programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millionsof children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on childrens bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply .（I）说明原因型模块（3） Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX . It is clear that (1 ). If you (2 ), as a result, your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you (3). Failure will be followingwith you .It turns out that all your plan falls through . No one can deny another fact that (4) .You donnt have to lookvery far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (5). It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6). With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7).注释：1 ： XX的第一个优点2： 支持XX的做法3：不支持XX的做法4：XX的第二个优点5：举例证明优点二6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：The importance of self-confidenceCurrently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable thanself-confidence. It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in ones abilities ). If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary, if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through .No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed). You donnt have to lookvery far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and self-confidence,the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound influence upon ( the achievement of ones ambitions ). With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).（I）说明原因型模块（4） For most of us today, (1). From above ,we can find that the reasons why (2) are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3). Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore ,(7).注释：（1）人们针对XX的态度和举措（2）归纳现状（3）第一个原因（4）第二个原因（5）第三个原因（6）重申造成现状的最重要原因（7）我的建议我写的模块（）的相应的作文，仅供参考 pollution Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. Lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. Therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.) From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows. the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. For example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land). Second, (the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly). The third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. Everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that its high time that more effective measures should be taken . Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. Moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. Lets make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).（I）说明原因型模块（5） These days we often hear that ( 1 ). It is common that ( 2 ). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).For another,( 4 ). What is more, since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ). To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as ( 7 ) to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future . (1)提出论题（2）说明现状（3）理由一（4）理由二（5）理由三（6）理由三引起的后果（7）解决方法 模块（5）的相应的作文 pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment). It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.) For another, (the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since (the industrial revolution), it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources) to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future . CET-4写作中拓展主题句的有效途径 大学英语四级考试中的短文写作部分是考核学生用英语进行书面表达的能力,也就是语言的运用能力, 但不是自由作文, 而是有控制的作文,即对作文的每一部分内容有较明确的要求,用各种明确的方式如提纲、图表、关键词等加以规定.而提纲常用中文给出,学生需自拟主题句,因此,对主题句常有以下要求:(1)意义完整:主题句必须是一个意义完整、符合语法结构的句子;(2)表意清晰:主题句不能包含两种或两种以上的意义,要易于识别、确认;(3)避免笼统而抽象的概述.如:The book is interesting in content. 比The book is interesting. 更好些.(4)不宜采用问句的形式,像Is it worthwhile to go after fashion? 不宜作为主题句.主题句是作者思维的起点、切题的准绳、阐述的对象,拓展好主题句关系到文章的成败.本文就如何拓展主题句从语言形式上和内容上加以阐述. 一、语言形式上1. 平行结构的运用平行结构作为一种使句子变得紧凑而错落有致的写作方式,有以下功效:句式优美、表达清晰、重点突出,使用尽可能少的词传达了尽可能多的信息.例如:主题句为Video games are a kind of entertainment. 利用平行结构拓展为: They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond quickly, stimulate their imagination in electronics. 不难看出,此处内容丰富具体、行文流畅,有极强的说服力.2. 句式灵活多变若文中的简单句出现得太多,就会显得单调、含混、不生动.要写出生动而鲜明的句子,可通过乔姆斯基的转化生成语法中的嵌入方式来实现.一个简单句,嵌入定语、状语、补语后,变得生动有趣.如: Books telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading. 读起来比Books are worth reading. 更耐人寻味,是由于前一个句子中的主语前加了一个复杂的定语.再如:Harry stood at the edge of the path, watching the cars running. 这是一个简单句后附上了伴随状语,使句子更加生动.在拓展主题句时,注意适时地变换句式,是一种有效的写作策略,同时能使文章产生意想不到的文学效果.3. 使用符合英美人表达习惯的习语能将诸如attach great importance to, leave a deep impression on, in due course, get the jump on等习语运用到文章中,反映了作者一定的语言功底和较高的英语表达水平.4. 连接手段的补充准确地使用一些signal words,总能让松散的拓展句自然地衔接起来,而且整个段落层次分明、前后连贯.常用于表示因果关系的连词有:so, hence, thus, therefore, as a result等.常用于表示递进关系的连词有:besides, moreover, furthermore, additionally等.常用于表示转折关系的连词有: however, nevertheless, but, yet, on the other hand等.常用于表示对比关系的表达方式有:Some prefer.others long for.;We can compare A with B.;.have something in common; Each has its positive and negative aspects.等.常用于举例说明的表达方式有:A simple example is.;Take.as an example.;An illustration will make the point clear.; First, consider the case of.常用于总结全文的表达方式有:in a word, to sum up, in short, thus, the reason why we must.; On account of this we find that.; From this point of view.二、内容上1. 化抽象的概述为细节的描述抽象的概述总会给人言之无物的感觉,若再进行具体的描述,文章内容顿时充实起来,变得有血有肉,不再枯燥乏味,似乎有生命力了.例如:Music is everywhere. 这是一个内容抽象的主题句,我们找到切入点后,可在everywhere上做文章,于是接下来可拓展为:We can hear it in restaurants, airports, hospitals, supermarkets and many other public places. 再如:People can acquire skills through recreation. 这也是个概述,若充实以下内容就丰富多了,即: They can learn to fish, paint, plant flowers and do paper cutting. 另外,这里的learn to正好与acquire相对应.2. 从不同角度选材选材时应考虑到段落的单一性和完整性,单一性即一个中心思想,完整性就是要避免支离破碎或内容仅局限在某一狭窄的范围内.材料要做到涵盖面广,而且愈典型愈好,但也不能凭空编造,应以事实为基础,这样一来,就避免了片面性或谬误.例如:主题句为Science and technology benefits human being much. (科学技术给人类带来益处),在展开此主题句的过程中,可从农业、医学、电讯业等不同角度来补充材料,行文如下:Science makes it possible for a nation to ensure food and clothing(农业方面), science can make people live longer(医学方面), and its science that makes it a small world(通讯方面).当然,提高写作水平非一日之功,要注意平时不断地积累,尽可能增加语言的输入量,才能厚积薄发,写作时才能得心应手;这样,假以时日,自然而然就提高了用英语流畅地表达思想的能力. 写作绝招1 开头万能公式一：名人名言 有人问了，我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？，很好办：编！原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？经典句型：A proberb says, You are only young once. （适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that.2 开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9 of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78都是假的。Travel by Bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：A recent statistics shows that . 写作绝招结尾万能公式：1 结尾万能公式一：如此结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个总而言之之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难显而见之，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！更多过渡短语：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that., Therefore, we can find that.2 结尾万能公式二：如此建议如果说如此结论是结尾最没用的废话，那么如此建议应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 写作绝招写作的七项基本原则：一、 长 短 句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！ 强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 主 题 句原则 国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成群龙无首之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Wit