英语四六级考试作文评分标准及各级别范文.doc

英语四六级考试作文评分标准四六级作文采用总体评分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。我们要从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达，要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。也就是说，在真正实际批改中，如果你出现i is, you am等现象，或者一个单词少了一个字母这些情况我们是不会太在意的，如果语言的错误 导致了我们不能够使用英语的思维来理解，那么分数就高不上去了。阅卷的标准分为5等，2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。另有标准样卷，我们参照样卷对大家的作文进行评分，首先人们和哪个档次的样卷接近，则上下浮动1分。2分标准：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子都有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分标准：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分标准：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分标准: 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分标准：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 2007SECTION A Nowadays the Internet has become part of peoples life, and millions of young people have made friends online.Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?A wonderful world appears before you when you click the mouse on Internet .The benefits of it have abviously made our daily life more colourful ,amazing and excity .There is also the fact that millions of young people shave made friends online .However ,in my view,its better and wiser to make friends in real life .Admittedly ,Internet provides us with a convenient and world-wide platform on which we can make friends .However,in most cases ,you dont know who you are talking with ,You have no idea of his or her background,occupation and other factors helping you judge whether he or she is a reliable person for you to make friends with .Chances are that you may be cheated by someone who takes advantages on your warmth and hospitality .Furthermore ,it is believed that if one spends too much time making friends online ,he may gradnerlly lose the ability to communicate make friends in real life .As all that he does is typing ,he loses the chance to speak to others .As a result ,he may set impersonal and boring.As stated above .if you want to get sociable and considering the safety,its better and wiser to make friends in real life.Score 14Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays ,with the developments of the technology ,the Internet has become part of peoples life ,and millions of young people have made friends online ,In my humble opinion ,make friends is a good thing for everyone ,but make friends online is not wise thing .Make friends online is very dangerous ,you dont know what kind person your friend is ,and you even dont know his /her real age ,career ,especially wyen a online friend ask you for help .He/She borrow money from you ,maybe he/she is a cheat .Whats more ,when you and your online friends falling love with each other ,and you met her /him,you find he /she is not like your imagination .It would bring some extra trouble to you ,it really not neccesary ,and its not like in real life .Another disadvantage of it is you sill addict in your friends tald and you waste your time to chat with your real friends ,classmates and your good teachers .In conclusion ,make friends online is really unwise ,Its dangerous ,bad and waste you time ,let us just use internet learn some useful information and love your every friends around you ! Score 6Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Making friends online is more and more popular ,in modrn times .People think that making friends online is interesting and exciting .But I dont think so ,I think it is not wise to make friend online .There are some reasons hited as follows:At the beginning ,making friends online is a quite dangerous thing .That is to say the friends you will make is a stranger .You just know the incredictable informations about him or her .He may cheat you and do some more unbenificail thing to yo .Another hand ,making friends online is a impractical thing .Such as a students duty is learning .He should spent much time in studying rather than the others .Sometimes if he meets the delamma ,he will ask help for his surrounding friend not the friends online ,The last not the least ,it takes people too much time to waste if hed like making friend online .Through the above ,I support that people can make a friend closed to you .Maybe to that is much safer and more pratical .That you make friend online is not wise and comfortable .So I hope that people can choose his own way not idle the fashion online. Score 5Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays ,it is popular to make friends online .Many people think that it is wise to make friends online while other people disagree on it .Like a coin has two sides ,making friends online has its advantages and disadvantages .Firstly ,Making friends online can help you know all kinds of people who come from different places easily and quickly .If you are unhappy ,you can tell the real reason to your web-friends who can help you out of the trouble .However ,there is a big disadvantage in that you dont know you friends are good or bad .I have heard several examples .That many girls especially young university girls were cheated by the soft and sweet words .Having come to the conclusion ,we should not believe one man easily online .It is necessary for us to keep our minds clearly and think considerately .Making friends online is not wrong by itself ,but depends on your decision .If your web-friends are of great value to you ,you can try making friends with them ,hasty conclusion will result in failure .Believe it ! Score 5Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Internet ,as one of the most important inventious of the twentieth century has greatly changed our life .Nowadays ,more and more young people have many friends online ,which ,as far as I am concerned ,has more benefit than negative effects.Firstly ,Internet enlarges our circle of friends considerably .No other way of communication enable us to make friends all around the world as easily as Internet does .As long as we can speak English or other languages, we are able to chat with American ,Japanese as well as Europe people ,and therefore ,to broaden our views by exposing ourselves to various cultures and experience .Apart from that, we tend to be more honest and straightforward when we make online friends than in real life .Some in the cyber space ,we cannot see others faces ,we do not have to worry about the negative results brought by direct communication .For instance ,we are free to air our opinion on same sensitive of the society ,and share our little secrets with online friends with ease .In this way ,online friendship gives rise to more openness and less stress or pressure at the same time .While many people argue that making friends online is not stable or even dangerous .I posit that embracing this technological innovation by becoming a true netizen is definitely a wise choice . Score 8Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Young people ,as a vigorous generation ,are more easily to accept new things such as making friends online .Although Im one of them ,I dont favour making friends online for at least there reasons .First ,the Internet ,since its been created ,exists a drawback .Young people who chat on the Internet have little chance to meet the real person .In other words ,the person they communicate with isnt trustful .He or she may pretend to be a college teacher or a manager with the purpose of deceiving .Sometimes ,they even turn to be a murderer or killer .Communicating with those people ,young people probably would become more rebellious or even become a murderer themselves .Second ,making friends online might result in lacking communications with friends in real life .Young people need to pay a large amount of time studying .so if they spend too much time with friends on the Internet ,they dont have many opportunities to meet other friends .Though its undeniable that young people seek to make online friends in part due to their feeling of isolation .we still should encourage them to make friends with people around them .Surely that making friends either online or in real life ,is a personal choose .However ,young people should be guided for they cant effectively distinguish good from evil.Score 11Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays the Internet has become part of our life ,as it provides us libraries of millions of flower ,scientists working around the clock forever and friends all over the world .So millions of young people have make friends online .However ,with so much news about online crime .people assume that anyone on the other present a danger .But for my part , I wonder that do we really nee sot be so wary when making a friend online ?Good people those who are warmhearted ,friendly ,and share similar interests with us ,are figures as popular as bad ones who may have some dirty thought of people ,and make use of you at the slightest opportunity. The truth is probably somewhere between the two extremes .So in my opinion ,it is not wise to say all people online are credulous and we should know some proper suggestions when making friends online .First of all ,we should choose the correct ways of looking for friends .Big ,well-informed and well-known websites are absolutely safer than some private ,and wastful information websites ,Next ,when we find someone who would like to talk to and has sane hobby with us ,do not make a hurry meeting for each other .Try to spend more time chatting online ,maybe having the video-chatting .Last but not the least ,if both of you finally decide to go out and meet somewhere ,do let your parents or at least your friend know .Remeber to choose a public place instead of some hobby ones.As it is the time we took internet as part of our life ,making friends online is reasonable .But keep an eye open and use the proper way can also us when we do. Score 91Women in the Modern World英语四级作文提纲： 1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today._2. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. _3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. _例1（得分：2分）Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Long age, women only did something in the kitchen or at home. Now many of them have serious jobs to serve for people. What men can do so can women. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Today in the family, the wife often lots her husband to do something at home bat ago, only women did something. Men are foned of doing something at home. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened. In the factory the women to as much as the men, but they are paid less than the men. Some people have not completely realized the liberation of women. 东方教育点评：条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有错误，有的甚至影响理解。具体问题剖析如下：（1）缺乏逻辑，东一句西一句，没有围绕中心论述，如第一段就没有展开论述妇女社会角色的转变，说得太笼统而缺乏说服力。 （2）用汉语思维，句子有明显的汉语痕迹，如“What men can do so can women.”，应改为“Women can do what men can do”。 （3）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如“Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened”，应改为“The case that husband hits his wife often happens. ” （4）拼写错误很多，大部分句子均有错误。 例2（得分：5分）Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. There are many scientist slso. They event new things to improve our life. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion thing with her husband, do what she wants to do. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. We also should realize, women likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased. 东方教育点评：基本切题。但表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。具体问题剖析：（1）各段围绕中心句论述不深入，没有说服力。 （2）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如第一段几个句子之间可以用一些“besides”、“on the other hand”、“furthermore”、“in addition”等。 （3）语言错误较多，很多句子不通顺，如“In today, many women have a work.”应改为“Today, many women get a job.”(滥用介词)；“In ancient, womens position in family is pity”中pity应改为pitiful（词形误用）等有多处错误。例3（得分：8分） Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Many Women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For an example. Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own job. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do house works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company. 东方教育点评：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。具体问题剖析：（1）论证不够深入，缺少事例，缺少说服力。 （2）文字缺连贯、且显累赘，如第二段可以把各句再改得简练一点并且有适当的转承词。（3）语言错误相当多，如“For an example”，“Some women are not secrtary in the office, instead, they become manager of a company.”应改为“Some women are on longer secretaries in the office, instead, they become managers of the companies.”（单复数） 例4（得分：11分）Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champions such as Chinese womens Volleyball Team. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wives are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places. Women are considered being “thing” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves. 东方教育点评：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，用词比较准确，但有少量语言错误，如“Also in some places. Women are considered being “thing” belong to men”，应改为“Also in some places，women are considered being the “things”that belong to men” 例5（得分：14分）Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In Many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each ther. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. Thats really the problems we should solve immediately. 东方教育点评：切题。论证充分，有说服力，论证手段丰富（举例、正反）表达思想清楚，语言流畅，词汇丰富，连贯性好。用词准确，仅有个别小错误22003年6月考试四级作文题：An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：1、车祸发生的时间及地点；2、你所见到的车祸情况；3、你对车祸原因的分析。例1 （2分段）At 9:00, Jan. 20, 2003, I eye-witness a traffic accident in Dongfang Street. I see that a（an） old people is hitted (hit)by a car. In my opinion, the rapid driver is the main reason, but the old people also has his error.东方教育点评：（1）字数明显不够，尽管都点题了，但只有三句话。 （2）有语法错误。2 pointsIt was the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1. Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other os put sown. Mary people come here, and they sent to two chidren who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arrived in the Accident place. My opiopmtoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误例2（5分段）In my opinion, the driver of Benz auto should be blamed on(for) the traffic accident. It was his drun