（试题 试卷 真题）专题31 图画类或话题作文（第01期）-2015年中考英语试题分项版解析汇编（解析版）

1、【2015年安徽省初中毕业学业考试英语试题】书面表达（共1小题，满分25分）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。 点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱 任性（Renxing）：随心所欲 秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的 土豪（Tuhao）：很富有 。注意：1. 词数80-100； 2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名； 4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples. _All the best! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in China. Here are some example.One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping order before others. But now its widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich. You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning , youll know more about our language and culture.All the best!YoursLi Hua写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.，宾语从句; you mean that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.等。【考点定位】话题作文。2、【广州市2015年初中毕业生学业考试英语】书面表达（共1题，满分15分） 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. 注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。【答案】Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information. If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it. For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making、It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.、Besides, you can learn more about teamwork、For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。【考点定位】话题类作文。3、【湖北省武汉市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（本大题15分） 你是一名中学生，想成为国际动物救助中心“International Animal Helpers”（IAH）的一名志愿者，请你用英文写一封自荐信。内容要点如下：1. 能参加周末活动；2. 从家乘地铁到“中心”约十分钟；3. 喜爱动物，愿意帮助他们；4. 懂一点医学知识；5. 补充一两点个人信息和想法。来源:Zxxk.Com注意：1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2. 词数：60803. 不得逐条翻译，内容要连贯得体；4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：subway n. 地铁 volunteer n. 志愿者 medical adj. 医学的 Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Li Ming, _Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Li Ming, I think volunteering is of great significance to our society, which can enrich our experience as well as improve our ability. Now I can participate in the weekend activities, so I have enough time to help International Animal Helpers . It is about ten minutes by subway to the center from my home I love animals and Im willing to help them . I understand a little medical knowledge. Im good at getting along well with others. Im willing to help others and can bear sufferings. I hope you can give me a chance, thank you very much!Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Li Ming【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and以及固定短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。【考点定位】话题作文。4、【江西省2015年中等学校招生考试英语试题卷】书面表达（15分） 英文有句谚语 “East, west, homes best.” 某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。 内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系， 并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。21*cnjy*com 提示： 1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数不少于80， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。East, west, homes best_【答案】There is an old saying, “East, west, homes best.” I live in a house in the countryside. Theres a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a washroom in it. Therere some trees and flowers around my house. The air is really clean. And I often hear birds singing.Therere four people in my family. Theyre my parents, my sister and I. Were helpful and friendly. And we always get on well with each other.Im happy I have a good family. I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work. Ill study harder so that I can make more money in the future. With our effort, Im sure my home will be better and better.写作亮点：本文第1自然段写自己美丽的家园；第2自然段介绍幸福的一家人；第3自然段为建设美丽家园自己的打算与决心。条理清晰，层次清楚。文章语言简洁，表述清楚，既写了“家”，又写了“家人”，同时表明了“家人”建“家”的决心。重点突出，中心明确。【考点定位】考查图表类短文写作。5、【四川省成都市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（计 15 分）请根据以下交通事故因素（factors）统计图表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 为题，用英语写一篇简短的分析报告，向学校英语报投 稿。注意：1. 报告需逐条陈述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主 要内容。（至少 5 点）2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。（至少 2 点）3. 词数：100 词左右，所给标题不计入总词数。 【答案】One possible version：Major Causes of Traffic Accidents Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, its important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports: According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, its quite clear that the first one is holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%. In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了交通安全事故频发，接下来介绍两个表格，表格一：驾驶员因素 85%，交通因素 5%，环境因素 10%。，表格二：超速 50%，酒驾 15%，疲劳驾驶 25%，不系安全带 25%。最后表达自己的观点：要有交通安全意识，要遵守交通规则。此处as a result, in my opinion, keep in mind, at the same time, try ones best to do sth, the+形容词比较级， the +形容词比较级等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。【考点定位】图表作文。6、【四川省宜宾市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达(共计15分)初中生活即将结束，6月6日下午，你班的班长方华组织了一次毕业聚会：话友谊、忆过去、签名留言、拍照记念。请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次即会的过程。注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称。2.至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容，可以适当发挥。3.首句已给出，不计入总词数。词数80词以上。来源:学,科,网4.参考词汇：签名sign ones name, 班长monitor, 心形的heart-shapedAs the junior life is ending, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it. _【答案】As the junior life is ending, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it.At the beginning, we talked about friendship. It is a human instinct to make friends. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys. Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. Everyone needs friendship. No one can sail the ocean of life single handed. We need help from and also give help to others. We cant forget the happy time that weve spent with our classmates and teachers. At school, we are busy with our studies. After class, we joined some clubs at school. In this way, weve got more knowledge and improved our life. We learn how to face difficulties, and we also learn how to get on well with friends. Our school life is meaningful and colorful. In a word, it is unforgettable, isnt it?Next, everyone wrote down one of the most memorable things on the paper . And put them together to form a heart - shaped essay pattern. Then we signed our names for each other. Finally, we took a picture of a group photo in front of the teaching building. We had a wonderful time.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。我们首先要认真读图，充分理解图画所表达的内容，弄清图中的人物在干什么，弄清图画背景与人物之间的联系，弄清事情发生的经过。其次在读图之后，要根据图画表达的主要内容，理出表达的要点。列出要点时要注意分清主次，不能看到图中有什么就认为什么要写。看图作文时只描述图画内容是不可取的，应充分展开想像使图画活起来。理出要点之后，就可以根据要点拟定提纲,即把整个图画中要表达的内容先用一句话写下来。再依据已经写出来的话语扩写成一篇短文。扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥，紧扣图画的内容，进行适当叙述，连贯通顺即可。写好文章之后应通读全文进行检查。在检查时，应着重看短文是否扣住图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏。同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等。写作亮点：该文语句通顺，段落清晰。不仅表达了图画的内容，而且适当发挥拓展了内容。文章多处使用固定短语如In this way及句型如In a word, it is unforgettable, isnt it?为文章增色不少。【考点定位】看图作文。7、【2015浙江省杭州市中考英语试题】书面表达（共1题，满分15分）根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature3018HotelThings to doFoodIn my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday. 【答案】In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“asas”等。在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。【考点定位】图表作文8、【浙江省嘉兴市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）76.文明社会，从我做起。请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。注意：（1）短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。 （2）必须谈谈你对此事的看法。 （3）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （4）词数：80100.短文首句 仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 短文首句：Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin. 参考词汇：果皮 skin，踩在上摔倒 slip on（slipped，slipped），救护车ambulance _ _【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. When we were walking around,we saw a boy eat a banana and throw the skin on the ground. Just as we were going to pick it up, a man slipped on the skin. He was badly hurt and couldnt move. We called 120. Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital.It was really bad of the boy to do that! We must say no to this bad behaviour. Everyone should care about his daily behaviour and follow the social rules so that the world will he a better place. (93 words)Possible versions 2The story in the pictures shows a boysbad behaviour. One day, a boy went to the park for a walk. He ate a banana and threw the skin on the ground. A moment later, he came back. Without noticing the skin, he slipped on it. He was hurt so badly that he couldnt move. Someone passed by and called 120. Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital nearby.【解析】试题分析：这是一个看图作文的题目。主题是环保，这个主题很普遍，学生写起来也会比较得心应手。图片相对来说非常简单，第一幅图是一个小男孩吃着一根香蕉；第二幅图中，男孩把吃剩的香蕉皮随手扔到了路上；第三幅图是空白的；第四幅图是一辆疾驰的救护车。因为图片内容简单，第三幅图更是没有什么内容，所以对考生想象力的发挥有较高的要求，相对来说，考生发挥的空间也更大。考生需要注意的是要确定事件的发生背景，故事要用一般过去时叙述。写作亮点：第一篇参考文章设置的场景比较具体，时间地点都交待的很清楚。并且文章以第一人称叙述，在叙事中加入了“I”这个角色，使故事更加生动可感。在故事最后还发表了自己的观点。叙述议论结合，使主题更加鲜明。另外文章中像Just as、be going to、pick up 、so that 等亮点词组的运用也使文章增色不少，使文章表达起来更加流畅，议论也更加有力。第二篇参考文章则只是客观叙述，按照题目要求把图片的内容叙述清楚，运用第三人称，适当的发挥想象，把四副图片连成一个完整的故事，也表达了文章环保的主题。本文胜在叙事简练，语言简洁有力。【考点定位】图画作文。9、【浙江省宁波市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（共1小题；满分20分） 最近，学校就空中俱乐部的英语学习内容设置做了意向调查（结果见下面图表）。请你帮俱乐部用英语写一篇报告，并谈谈你自己的想法或建议。注意：（1)文中应包含图表所提供的要点，可适当发挥； (2）想法和建议至少两条；文中不能出现真实姓名和校名； （3）词数：80一100（短文开头不计人总词数，考生可以选择使用）。 Recently weve made a survey of school sky English club.【答案】Recently weve made a survey of sky English club. Here are the results. We find that fifty-one percent of the students want to practice their spoken English by using Internet. Twenty-five percent like watching English movies,which can make their holiday life better. Eighteen percent would like to read more English classics because they are interested in them. Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as good manners and western festivals.As far as I know, its very helpful to improve English by learning songs. Ma