英语写作五步作文法

精品文库 English writing -A Letter of acknowledgement咸阳市乾县一中 胡亚群Teaching Aims1. To learn how to write Thank-you letters.2. To master the skills of practical writing.3. To have the awareness of giving thanks in the future life.Teaching Important Point Help the students to write a passage of giving thanks.Teaching Difficult PointHow to enable the students to write the passage well by instruction?Teaching ProcedureStep1 Revision and leading inIntroduction and discussion感谢信开头段常用句式和套话I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for.I am writing to express my thanks for.I am writing to show my sincere appreciation for.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for.I feel deeply indebted to you and I really dont know how to thank you enough for your help.感谢信结尾段常用句式和套话I must thank you again for your generous help.I am most grateful for your selfless donation.My true gratitude is beyond the words description.I feel most obliged to thank you once more.Please accept my gratitude, now and always.Step2 Pre-writing【题目要求】假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：1. 感谢Kelly的帮助，你在交流活动中的收获很大；2. 难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；3. 感谢她送你的英文词典。注意:1. 适当增加细节使行文连贯。2. 全文100词左右。第一步：细审题、三确定1.确定体裁：本文为 文。2.确定人称: 本文的主要人称应为第 人称为主，第 人称为辅。3.确定时态：本文主要时态应以 时态为主， 时态为辅。第二步：拟要点，列提纲开头：写信的目的主体：美好回忆、交流收获、表示感谢结尾：表示欢迎第三步：依提纲、准翻译开头：写信目的 要点一：感谢你在我待在英国期间对我的巨大的帮助。 During my stay in England.主体：美好回忆，交流收获、表示感谢 要点二：上周，我参加了文化交流周，在你们国家，我玩得很开心。 Last week, I the Cultural Exchange Week .I in your country.要点三：因为我参观了城市博物馆和一些名胜，所以我对英国的社会、文化和历史有了更好的了解。 the English society, culture and history because we visited the city museum and some places of interest. 要点四：能住在你家我很幸运。I was so lucky that I 要点五：在这里我尤其要感谢你作为礼物送给我的词典Here I especially thank you for 要点六：学好英语对我很有帮助To learn English well 结尾：表示欢迎要点七：有空欢迎你来中国！ when you are free.第四步：句升级，求靓丽句式升级一：用定语从句改写要点三的句子句式升级二：用enough改写要点四的句子句式升级三：用it作形式主语改写要点六的句子句式升级四：用convenient改写要点七的句子Stept 3 Writing第五步：巧连接，顺成文Dear Kelly, I have been back home (safe) from England. I am writing to thank you for (you) great help my stay in England.Last week, I (participate) in the Cultural Exchange Week and I enjoyed myself In your country. We visited the city museum and some (place) of interest , made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. Whats more, I was (luck) enough to stay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together.Here I (especial) thank you for the dictionary you offered me a gift. Its a great help for me (learn) English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.I