2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit1TeenagelifeSectionⅤWriting教学案新人教版必修第一册.doc

Section 写作园地 |应用文写作建议信对应写作新题型大突破P5本单元的写作任务是应用文类别中的“建议信”。建议信是就某件事情向收信人提出建议或给出忠告。有可能是写给个人的，也有可能是写给某个机构或组织的。而高考英语试题中书面表达一般都要求写私人信件，私人信件是指亲朋好友或同事之间的来往信件，通常包括五部分，即信头、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。一、基本结构1开头(beginning)开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。2主体(body)对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and suggestions)。3结尾(ending)呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。二、注意事项1写作文体：建议信属于应用文，但高考中一般都会给出书信的格式。2主体时态：文章通常以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，也可以根据需要适当使用其他时态。3主体人称：由于是给对方提建议，所以人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。一、开头常用语1Thank you very much for your letter!来信已收到，甚为感谢！2I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。3Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on .很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。4Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.这里是对你有帮助的一些建议。二、正文常用语1I suggest you do . 我建议你做2I think you should . 我认为你应该3Im sure you will . 我认为你会4As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should . 就我而言/在我看来，你应该三、结尾常用语1Thanks for reading my letter. I do hope you will consider my suggestions.谢谢你看我的信。我希望你会考虑我的建议。2I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处得很好。3I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Susan在交友方面有些困难。请根据下面提示给她写一封信。1要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真朋友；3友谊需要时间和投入。注意：1.词数100左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Susan， Yours，Li Hua精彩范文Dear Susan，I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.To begin with, why not be a friend first if you want to make friends? In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Last but not least, it would be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends. It is wellknown to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua总评本文作者经过精巧的构思，设计了写作的切入点，能够用简洁明快的语言囊括试题中要求表达的所有信息。语言表达灵活，不是单纯地罗列题干所要求的几个注意事项。内容连贯自然，条理清楚，结构清晰，灵活地使用了连接词和过渡语；语言诚恳而且正式，完全符合信件的格式。全文体现了作者较强的语言运用能力。亮点呈现(1)灵活准确地使用大量短语：have trouble in doing sth. “做某事有麻烦(困难)”；take ones advice “采纳某人的建议”；to begin with “首先，起初”； in addition “另外，除此之外”；last but not least “最后，但同样重要的”；put ones heart into “全身心地投入”，这体现了作者深厚的语言功底。(2)Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 此谚语运用地道、准确。(3)第二段多处使用if引导的条件状语从句，使句式结构复杂多变。(2019湖北四地七校联考)假如你是