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writingpractice transformation teacingaims enablestudentstolearnandmasterthegoodstructureofapassageandhowtopolishyourcomposition writingstrategies transforming standards polishing writingpractice writingpractice transformation 李兴民 东营市第一中学07级4班 teacingaims enablestudentstolearnandmasterthegoodstructureofapassageandhowtopolishyourcomposition writingstrategies transforming standards polishing writingpractice revision starsentences 1 从这张表格中我们可以看到 在过去的几年里 北京发生了巨大的变化 2 我们对野生动物保护加以高度重视的时候到了 3 孩子参加有偿劳动的一个优点是这种实践可以培养小孩的独立性 自主性和责任感 4 我坚决主张把教育放在第一位 因为科学技术决定了我们能否赶超那些发达国家 5 多数风俗习惯都产生了巨大的改变的原因是它们大多与封建迷信有关 与现代社会格格不入 6 目前 去国外旅游在青年人中间已成为一个普遍现象 1 ascanbeseenfromthistable greatchangeshavetakenplaceinbeijinginthepastseveralyears 2 itishightimethatwelaidgreatemphasisonthewildlifeprotection 3 anadvantageofchildren sparticipatinginsomepaidworkisthatthispracticecancultivatetheirindependence self deteminationandsenseofresponsibility 4 istronlysuggestthatthefirstpriorityshouldbegiventoeducationbecausescienceandtechnologywilldeterminewhetherwecancatchupwiththosedevelopedcountries 5 thereasonwhyalargenumberofcustomshavealteredagreatdealisthatmostofthemareconnectedwithsomesuperstitiousbeliefs andtheycannotfitinthisworldwithhighly developedtechnology 6 nowadays travellingabroadhasbecomeawidespreadphenomenonamongyoungpeople 要求 描述漫画内容 结合生活实际分析这一现象 并发表一下自己的观点和看法 词数 120左右 homework thecartoonisasocialphenomenon thetwowomendon tknoweachothereveniftheyareneighbors why theydont liketogooutafterwork andtheywillstayathomewachingtvorplaycomputergames theyseldomcommunicatewithothers theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemsnodifferentfrompeopletheymeetthemeverydayonthestreet soitisnogoodtous ortooursociety itwillmakepeoplefeelmorelonely it shightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit peoplewholiveinthesamezonecanoftenbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether weshouldaskpeopletobefriendlytoeachother theyshouldsmileandgreeteachother thenoursocietywillbecomemoreharmoniousinthisway thecartoonisasocialphenomenon thetwowomendon tknoweachothereveniftheyareneighbors why theydont liketogooutafterwork andtheywillstayathomewachingtvorplaycomputergames theyseldomcommunicatewithothers theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemsnodifferentfrompeopletheymeetthemeverydayonthestreet soitisnogoodtous ortooursociety itwillmakepeoplefeelmorelonely it shightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit peoplewholiveinthesamezonecanoftenbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether weshouldaskpeopletobefriendlytoeachother theyshouldsmileandgreeteachother thenoursocietywillbecomemoreharmoniousinthisway playing seem in nor at structure requiements logical topicsentencesorconnectingexpressions 2007年江西高考书面表达 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见 请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文 介绍人们的不同观点 并表达自己的看法 赞成 1 广交朋友2 可自由表达思想3 利于外语学习反对 1 浪费时间2 影响学习3 可能上当受骗 1 somestudentsareforthestudents surfingontheinternet 2 others however thinkstudentsshouldnot 3 frommyperspective ithink advancedwords phrasesandcomplicatedsentencestructures requirements natural nospellingmistakes changethefollowingsentencesintobetterforms ontheotherhand dolly sappearancecausedmanypeople sdisagreementsandinfluencedthemediaandpublicimaginationgreatly iliketostayathomeplayingcomputergames andidon tliketogoshopping ireceivemanyloveletterseveryday itworriesmealot shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher 5 aboutstudy youdon tlacktime butyoulackeffort 1 ontheotherhand dolly sappearancecausedmanypeople sdisagreementsandinfluencedthemediaandpublicimaginationgreatly ontheotherhand dolly sappearanceraisedastormofobjectionsandhadagreatimpactonthemediaandpublicimagination 2 iliketostayathomeplayingcomputergames andidon tliketogoshopping 3 ireceivemanyloveletterseveryday itworriesmealot 4 shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher iprefertostayathomeplayingcomputergamesratherthangoshopping whatworriesmealotisthatireceivemanyloveletterseveryday ireceivemanyloveletterseveryday whichworriesmealot followedbymanystudents shewalkedoutofthelab 5 aboutstudy youdon tlacktime butyoulackeffort whenitcomestostudy whatyoulackisn ttimebuteffort speakingofstudy itistimenoteffortthatyoulack properlinkingwords requirements coherent accurate 1 therehasbeenadiscussionabouttheharmsofanger itisobviousthatweshouldtrytokeepcalmbeforesolvinganyproblems 2 peopletendtolosetempermorefrequentlythaneverbefore 3 itishightimethatwefiguredoutwaystocopewithanger 4 youshouldidentifytherealcauseofyouranger thereasonisthatyouwillbeawareofwhetherthecausedeservesyoutogetangryornotsoastoavoidbeingangrynexttime 5 youmustlistentoadvicefromothers 6 youshouldtrytoknowhowothersdealwiththesamesituation therearemorewayscanbeadopted 7 ilistentomusictoforgetunhapinesswhenbeingangryandtrytokeepagoodmoodtoavoidtheharmsofanger 8 weshouldtrytokeepcalmandavoidbeingangrywhencopingwithanyproblems howtodealwithanger however therefore firstofall secondly that stosay asamatteroffact asforme allinall currently 1 2 3 4 losingweight makingup transformation1 structure topicsetences connectingexpressions 要求 描述漫画内容 结合生活实际分析这一现象 并发表一下自己的观点和看法 词数 120左右 para1fromthecartoonwecansee ascanbeseenfromthecartoon thepictureis para2thecartoonjustreflects indicatesasocialphenomenonthat itistheexactreflectionof para3accordingtowhatwehavetalkedabove it shightimethatwetooksomeeffectivemeasures transformation2 words phrasesandsentencestructures ascanbeseenfromthecartoon twoladieslivingintheoppositeflatsay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachother thetwowomendon tknoweachothereveniftheyareneighbors itistheexactreflectionofinterpersonalrelationshipsinthemodrenworld asweallknow mostpeopleliveinapartments theydont liketogooutafterwork andtheywillstayathomewachingtvorplayingcomputergames theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemnodifferentfrompeopletheymeeteverydayinthestreet soitisnogoodtous nortooursociety itwillmakepeoplefeelmorelonely frommyperspective it shightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit peoplewholiveinthesamezonecanoftenbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether weshouldaskpeopletobefriendlytoeachother theyshouldsmileandgreeteachother thenoursocietywillbecomemoreharmoniousinthisway transformation3 linkingwords ascanbeseenfromthecartoon twoladieslivingintheoppositeflatsay hello whentheyhappentomeeteachother neighborsastheyhavebeenformanyyears theyevendon tknoweachother itistheexactreflectionofinterpersonalrelationshipsinthemodrenworld 1 mostpeopleliveinapartments itappearsthattheywouldratherstayathomewatchingtvorplayingcomputergamesthangooutafterwork theydon thaveanyconnectionsevenwiththeirclosestneighbors whoseemnodifferentfrompeopletheymeeteverydayinthestreet 2 thisphenomenonwhichwillmakepeoplefeelmoreindifferentwillundoubtedlydoharmtousandoursociet
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