writing复习公开课

PresentedbyHelenJan 2015 WritingTips 请根据以下提示 并结合事例 用英语写一篇短文 Beinghappydoesn tmeanthateverythingisperfect Itmeansthatyou vedecidedtolookbeyondtheimpefections 注意 1 无需写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 2 除诗歌外 文体不限 3 内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例 4 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 5 词数 不少于120词 如引用提示语则不计入总字数 Writingtasklastweek figureoutthetheme 审题 chooseasuitableexample payattentiontostructure tenses languageexpressions 语言表达 Howtowritewell figureoutthetheme Keywordsofthequotedsentence Analysethekeywords Thetheme beginning 请根据以下提示 并结合事例 用英语写一篇短文 Beinghappydoesn tmeanthateverythingisperfect Itmeansthatyou vedecidedtolookbeyondtheimpefections 注意 1 无需写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 2 除诗歌外 文体不限 3 内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例 4 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 5 词数 不少于120词 如引用提示语则不计入总字数 Let shaveatry Analysis Whatmakesyouhappyindailylife Caneverythingbeperfect Ifno why Whathelpsuslookbeyondtheimperfections highscores besuccessful comeacrossanoldfriend receiveagift secretlovegetsresponse etc nothingcanbeperfect upsanddowns imperfectionmakesupacolorfulworld etc differentaspects positiveattitude broadeyesight broadmind ect Thetheme Nothingisperfectinthisworld Tobehappy weneedaposotiveattitude Thetheme Nothingisperfectinthisworld Tobehappy weneedaposotiveattitude Beginnning Polish润色 chooseexamples Keeptopoint convincing 令人信服的 novelty 新颖 A请根据以下提示 结合你校园生活中的一个事例 就与人合作这一话题 用英语写一篇短文 Workingingroupsatschoolisanopportunitytolearnaboutteamwork Teamworkshowsushowotherpeople srolesfitthepurposeofthegroup anditteachestobepatientandhowtorespondtodifferentpeople theme theimportanceofteamworkatscholl practice 2011 examplechoice A classroomcleaningB postermakingwithclassmatesC doingaphysicsprojecttogetherD studyinghardtolearnEnglishE helpingtheoldF groupdiscussionatclass ABCF B请根据以下提示 并结合具体事例 用英语写一篇短文 Smallthingsmakeabigdifference Thesmallthingswedocanmakeusaresponsible 负责任的 memberofthesociety theme makingacontributiontosocietybydoingsmallthings practice 2014 examplechoice A leadingalow carbonlife 低碳生活 toprotectourearthB makingprogressgraduallyinsudybyworkinghardeverydayC doingvolunteeringworkD donatongblood 献血 tohelpthoseinneedE helpingmotherdothehouseworktomakeherhappy example 7 8sentences theme 2 3sentences restatethetheme 重申主题句2 3sentences structure opening body conclusion Structureandtenses threeparagraphs Para1 Para2 Para3 presenttense pasttense presenttense 请根据以下提示 并结合事例 用英语写一篇短文 Beinghappydoesn tmeanthateverythingisperfect Itmeansthatyou vedecidedtolookbeyondtheimpefections 注意 1 无需写标题 不得照抄英语提示语 2 除诗歌外 文体不限 3 内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例 4 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 5 词数 不少于120词 如引用提示语则不计入总字数 Writingtasklastweek Body appreciation 美文欣赏 conclusion appreciation 美文欣赏 Onepossibleversion Yearsofschoollifehastaughtmealotofthings ofwhichteamworkisthemostimportantforme Infact Ididn trealizeitsimportanceuntilIwaschosenmonitorofmyclassinmyseniormiddleschool Atfirst Ididmostofthedutiesmyselfwhileotherstudentscaredlittleaboutclassactivities Asaresult Iwastiredoutanddepressed ThenIturnedtomyteacherandheadvisedmetocooperatewithothers ThusIbegantorecognizethestrengthsofmyclassmatesandhaveeveryonedotheirpartinclass Itisworkinginteamsinsteadofonmyownthathasfreedmeoftroubleandmademyworkmoreefficient OnePossibleVersionItisn thardtogrowupintoaresponsiblememberofsociety IcanwellrememberanincidentthathappenedonarainySundayafternoon Iwasonmywaytothebookstoreandwaswaitingforthegreenlightatacrossingwhenagirlofabouttenwasknockeddownbyapassingcar whichdroveoffquickly AmanimmediatelyrushedtothegirltogiveherfirstaidandIjoinedinwithouthesitation Luckilyshewasnotbadlyinjuredandwesenthertothenearesthospital Comparedwiththeescapeddriver IamproudofwhatIdid Asamemberofthesociety Iamawarethatbeingresponsibleiswhatittakestomakeabettersociety Homework 请根据以下提示 并结合事例 用英语写一篇短