如何提高学生的写作能力 PPT课件

如何有效提高英语写作分数授课人 周敏芝 青年教师片段教学竞赛 Whatmakesagoodcomposition 1 Coveringallpoints2 Language fluent coherent high level3 Beautifulhandwriting 如何有效提高英语写作分数 1 卷面书写的干净整齐2 万能句式的灵活运用 Tip1 Youcan tpaytoomuchattentiontoyourhandwritingwhilewriting Goodhandwriting HighmarksGoodhandwriting Highermarks 20 6 写好字的决窍 1 右倾斜5 2 贴线3 竖线拉直4 圆润 均匀5 间距适中 Tip2 Language fluent coherent high level Sentenceframes Words Beautifythesentences 1 so that TheclimateinKunmingisverymildandmanytouristsareattractedtoenjoyitsbeautifulscenery TheclimateinKunmingissomildthatmanytouristsareattractedtoenjoyitsbeautifulscenery SomildistheclimateinKunmingthatmanytouristsareattractedtoenjoyitsbeautifulscenery 2 Onlywhen if从句 倒装 Whenstudentstakeiteasy theycanperformthebestintheirexamsandenjoythehappinessofstudy Onlywhenstudentstakeiteasycantheyperformthebestintheirexamsandenjoythehappinessofstudy Onlywhen Abigbrokentreefellonahouseanddamagedthehouseseverely Abigbrokentreefellonahouse thusdamagingthehouseseverely 3 非谓语doing done Isawsadnessanddespairfromhisface WhatIsawfromhisfacewassadnessanddespair 4 What从句 What Aleaderismakingaspeech announcingthat acockcanlayeggs whichisobviouslywrong Aleaderismakingaspeech announcingthat acockcanlayeggs anditisobviouslywrong 5 Which定语从句放句尾 Asthesayinggoes Thereisasayingthatgoes Aproverbgoesthat Toerrishuman Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves 6 引用谚语 和汉语一样 英语中也有大量谚语 若能在写作中恰当运用 会给文章增色不少 Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk 常用谚语 1 Timeandtidewaitfornoman 2 Actionsspeaklouderthanwords 3 Hewholaughslastlaughsbest 4 AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy 5 Practicemakesperfect 6 Everycoinhastwosides 7 Wherethereisawill thereisaway 8 Nothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartintoit 9 Afriendinneedisafriendindeed 10 Failureisthemotherofsuccess Conclusion万能句式 1 so that 2 Onlywhen if从句 倒装3 非谓语doing作结果状语4 What从句5 which定语从句放句尾6 引用谚语 美文赏析 美文赏析 Abigtreewassomehowbroken withpartofitfallenonahouse thusdamagingthehouseseverely Facingthedamagedhouse onemanissosadthatheburstintotearswhiletheotherhasmadeaswingwiththefallenpartofthetreeandisenjoyinghimselfwithhisinvention totallyforgettingaboutthedamagedhouse Thisiswhatweseeinthepictures butwhatmessagedotheyconvey AsfarasIamconcerned thepicturesaretryingtotellushowweshouldfacethedifficultiesanddisappointmentsinourlife Whensuchatroublehappens optimisticpeoplewilltrytoseethegoodsideofit whichwillmakethemhealthy efficientandproductive Onthecontrary pessimistswillhardlyhelpthemselvesoutoftrouble Justasthesayinggoes Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves Onlywhenwebelieveinourse