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IHeardaFlyBuzz WhenIDied ByEmilyDickinson MadebyChenjianhuaandShuidianzhen Questions 1 Whenyouaretiredorsad youheardaflybuzz whatfeelingwillyouhave 2 Canyoudescribetheatmospherewhenamandie Youcandescribeitfromthemoviesorthenovels IHeardaFlyBuzz WhenIDied Iheardaflybuzz whenIdied TheStillnessintheRoomWasliketheStillnessintheAir BetweentheHeaves hi vz ofStorm TheEyesaroundhadwrung r themdry AndBreathsweregatheringfirmForthatlastOnsetwhentheKingBewitnessedintheRoom IwilledmyKeepsakessignedawayWhatportionofmebeAssignable andthenitwasThereinterposedaFly WithBlue uncertainstumblingBuzz Betweenthelight andme AndthentheWindowsfailed andthenIcouldnotseetosee 我听到苍蝇的嗡嗡声 当我死时房间里 一片沉寂就像空气突然平静下来 在风暴的间隙注视我的眼睛 泪水已经流尽 我的呼吸正渐渐变紧等待最后的时刻 上帝在房间里现身的时刻 降临我已经分掉了 关于我的所有可以分掉的东西 然后我就看见了一只苍蝇 蓝色的 微妙起伏的嗡嗡声在我 和光 之间然后窗户关闭 然后我眼前漆黑一片 Peoplealwalshavemixedpercetions thoughtsorbeliefsaboutdeath Whenpeoplethinkaboutdeath theymightexperiencefearoranxietyastowhattheafterlifeholdsforthem Withinthepoem Dickinsondescribedapictureofasadmomentwhenshewasdying Herrelationsandfrinendswerestandingaroundherwithasadexpression Shegavethemwhatsheleftwhenshewasawaked Andthenhervoicebecameweaker Andthenshecould tseeanything 非正式随笔主题可以流离 正式严肃题材需严谨 语言是有重量的 这首诗描述的死亡的过程 全诗用的过去式 以死者的口吻诉说死亡 通过颜色声音来描绘出死亡时思维的混乱 而苍蝇声的出现对于死亡这一严肃的话题是很讽刺的 所以也有对神的 亵渎 同时也表现出了对于永生的质疑 Theme thepasttense sporadic sp r d k 分散的capitalizationofnouns figurativelanguage象征性语言 比喻语言 simile metaphor Image theKing theGodofDeath Windows thedoortoheaven Failed herdoubtoftheexitenceofeternalheaven WithBlue uncertainstumblingBuzz intheprocessofdying thesenseofhearingandsightbecomeweakanddim 叙事 Theword fly isverycleverlyusedinthework Ontheonehand itreferstothatinsect ontheotherhand itmayindicate freeflying Beforedeath the fly wasbuzzingaround Ihearit afterdeath itmayleadmetogofarandforever Iamflying Theflyalso