2014514英语写作课林晓韵

英语任务型写作课系列主题句拓展之举例类 试卷点评2014深圳二模2 以约120个词就 如何面对人生的困难或挫折 谈谈你的想法 内容包括 1 你如何看待Patti和她妈妈对待疾病的态度 2 你对人生中的困难或挫折的看法 3 举例说明你是如何对待和处理困难或挫折的 S1 Takingmeasanexample WhenIwasamiddleschoolstudent Iwaspoorinmathandoftenfailedtheexam ButInevergaveupandwiththehelpoftheteachersfinallyIovercamethedifficultiesandmanagedtomakerapidprogressinthisdifficultsubject 点评 S2 Patti sstoryremindsmeofmyunforgettableexperience Lastsummer Ispentasummervacationwithmysister Unfortunately IhadmylegbrokenwhenweplayedattheThemePark ItwastoopainfulthatIcouldn thelpcrying Butmysistercomfortedmeandaccompaniedmetothehospital Withthehelpofmysister Ialsoforgotthepainofmyinjuredlegandatlastitwascured Ireallythankmysister 点评 S3 Actually mywaytodealwiththedifficultiesorobstaclesarevaried WhenImeetwiththem Iwouldtrymyutmosttoconqueritbymyself Ifnotsucceeding Iwouldnevergiveupuntilit ssolved ButifitIreallycan thandleit Iwouldturntomyrelativesforhelp 点评 S4 Takemyexperienceforexample Therewasatimewhenmymathperformancesuffered HoweverhardIworked Imadenoprogress Ifeltextremelyfrustratedformeetingsuchahugeobstacle However Ididn twanttogiveup Ibecamemoredeterminedtolearnit Withgreatdeterminationandpositiveattitudetowardsobstacle Ilearnedmathharderandharderanddidmanyexercises Asaresult Imaderapidprogress Frommyexperience Iamawarethatitispositiveattitudeandgreatdeterminationthathelpmeovercomethosedifficulties 要点3 举例说明你是如何对待和处理困难或挫折的S5 IcanwellrememberhowIdefeatdifficultiesandsetbacksinjuniorschool Onceinaschoolspeechcontestonenvironment IwassonervousthatIforgoteverything ButIdidn tloseheart solastmonthIgotNo1intheschoolspeechcontest whichhasprovedthepowerofpositiveattitudetowardsfailure 要点3 举例说明你是如何对待和处理困难或挫折的IcanwellrememberhowIdefeatdifficultiesandsetbacksinjuniorschool Onceinaschoolspeechcontestonenvironment IwassonervousthatIforgoteverything ButIdidn tloseheart solastmonthIgotNo1intheschoolspeechcontest whichhasprovedthepowerofpositiveattitudetowardsfailure 要点3 举例说明你是如何对待和处理困难或挫折的IcanwellrememberhowIdefeatdifficultiesandsetbacksinjuniorschool Onceinaschoolspeechcontestonenvironment IwassonervousthatIforgoteverything Ilostandfeltverysadthen ButIdidn tloseheart Sincethen Ihavereadlotsofbooksaboutspeechskills andfoundeverychanceIcouldtoimprovemyself seekingtoconquerthenervousness solastmonthIgotNo1intheschoolspeechcontest whichhasprovedthepowerofpositiveattitudetowardsfailure 问题应对 1 学会审题2 学会写例子 1 审题主题 谈谈你对smiling的看法你对微笑的看法讲述一个你或你身边的朋友因微笑而产生好结果的故事呼吁人们用微笑化解矛盾 2 学会写例子 1 除了主题句和总结句 写好突出主题的过程很重要 背景 经过 结果 启发 2 用好信号词讲述父母的关系对孩子的影响的经历 主题 父母关系 Icanwellremembermyexperience Therewasatimewhenmyparentsoftenquarreledwitheachother What sevenworse theyconsidereddivorcing Atthattime myhomewasfilledwithsadnessandtheirrelationshipbecamethelastthingIwouldliketomention Undoubtedly itbecameextremelyhardformetoconcentrateonmystudyandIbecamenottalkative Fortunately laterbycommunicatingwitheachotheroverandoveragain theygainedaharmoniousrelationship whichmademethehappiestgirlintheend 课堂练习 叙述你没有珍惜友谊而后悔的经历 包括时间 地点和起因 叙述你没有珍惜友谊而后悔的经历 包括时间 地点和起因 Whenitcomestofriendship Ialwayscan thelpfeelingregretful Ishouldhaveacceptedmybestfriend Lily sapology WhenIwasinjuniormiddleschoolLilymovedtoanotherschool Iwasverysadforalongtime Iwasn tbraveenoughtoexpressmygratitudetoherforherhelpwithmyEnglishbecauseIdidn thaveagoodrelationshipafterIquarreledwithherbecauseshedidn thelpmeintheEnglishtest Atthattime Ididn tforgiveheralthoughsheapologizedtome Thereisnodoubtthatitwasmyownf