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chapter4choiceofsentencelongandshortsentences shortsentences emphatic clear easytoberememberedliarsshouldhavegoodmemories proverb rollingstonegathersnomoss proverb practicemakesperfect proverb pleasepayconductor signonabus noadmittance sign youbethejudge comparequality brands price advertisement 5 000neededurgently pleasehelp anydonationhumblyreceived willrepayifneedsbenextyear classifiedadvertisement positionofshortsentences 1 whentwooftheworld smostfamousandliteratescientistscollaboratetoproduceabookaimedatexpandingcontemporaryideasaboutthenatureoflivingthings thebookshouldbewellworthreading butthisoneisn t 2 whentwooftheworld smostfamousandliteratescientistscollaboratetoproduceabookaimedatexpandingcontemporaryideasaboutthenatureoflivingthings thebookshouldbewellworthreading butthisoneisn t likewise thefinalshortsentence whichisaquestioninthefollowingexample suggestsgreatemphasis theincreasednumberofjoggers theboomingsalesofexercisebicyclesandotherphysicaltrainingdevices therecordnumberofentrantsinmarathonraces一allclearlyindicatethegrowingbeliefamongamericansthatstrenuous prolongedexerciseisgoodfortheirhealth butisit shortsentences simplicity directnesscaution overusedchoppy immature monotonous choppysentences overuseofshortsentences atleast50 000grizzlybearsrangedfromtexastooregon thatwasbeforethewhitemancame today nomorethan1 000surviveinthelower48states thisistheresultofhunting poaching andencroachmentontheirhabitat inthe1960sthenationalparkserviceissuedadecree theystatedthattheanimalscouldnolongerbefedbythepublic thebearshadlongforagedinolddumpsites thesiteswereabruptlyclosed hotel keepersusedtoputfoodoutforthebears theywerenolongerallowedtodothis thebearsbegantolookforfood theylookedincampgrounds theylookedoutsidetheparksaswell inevitably thegrizzliesbegantobeshot theywouldbeshotjustforshowingup conservationistsmustdeviseasolution thegrizzlywilleventuallydisappear improved beforethewhitemancame atleast50 000grizzlybearsrangedfromtexastooregon today asaresultofhunting poaching andencroachmentontheirhabitat nomorethan1 000surviveinthelower48states inthe1960sthenationalparkservicedecreedthattheanimalscouldnolongerbefedbythepublic olddumpsites wherethebearshadlongforaged wereabruptlyclosed hotel keeperswerenolongerallowedtoputfoodoutforthebears asaresult thebearsbeganlookingforfoodnotonlyincampgroundsbutoutsidetheparksaswell inevitably thegrizzliesbegantobeshotjustforshowingup unlessconservationistscandeviseasolution thegrizzlywillsoondisappear longsentences example1 anypersonwhowithoutlawfulauthorityentersorattemptstoenteranyprisonpropertyorloitersaboutornearorcommunicatesorattemptstocommunicateinanywaywithanyprisonerisliabletoimprisonmentforatermofsixmonthsorapenaltyof 200orboth anypersonwhowishestovisittheprisonerforofficial scientificorsociologicalpurposesmaytakeapplicationtothegovernoroftheprisonunlesshealreadyhaswrittenauthorityfromthecommissionerofcorrectiveservices thepreambletothecharteroftheunitednations example2 wethepeoplesoftheunitednationsdeterminedtosavesucceedinggenerationsfromthescourgeofwar whichtwiceinourlifetimehasbroughtuntoldsorrowtomankind andtoreaffirmfaithinfundamentalhumanrightsinthedignityandworthofthehumanperson intheequalrightsofmenandwomenandofnationslargeandsmall andtoestablishconditionsunderwhichjusticeandrespectfortheobligationsarisingfromtreatiesandothersourcesofinternationallawcanbemaintained andtopromotesocialprogressandbetterstandardsoflifeinlargerfreedom andfortheseends topracticetoleranceandlivetogetherinpeacewithoneanotherasgoodneighbors andtouniteourstrengthtomaintaininternationalpeaceandsecurity andtoensure bytheacceptanceofprinciplesandtheinstitutionofmethods thatarmedforceshallnotbeused saveinthecommoninterest andtoemployinternationalmachineryforthepromotionofeconomicandsocialdvancementofallpeoples haveresolvedtocombineoureffortstoaccomplishtheseaims longsentencesoffercomparablerisksandopportunities theycanbemakethereaderor sometimes thewriterhimselflosetrackofthemainidea withtoomanylongsentences thewritingwillsounddull heavyandlaborious butwhenitisingoodcontrol alongsentencecangatherupandconveythefullmeasureofacomplexthought withallitsdistinctions alternatingshortandlongsentences wecannotdecidewhichisbetterinourwriting alongersentenceorashorterone itdependsonthewriter spurpose itslocationintheparagraph anditsrelationstoothersentencesintheparagraph themosteffectivesentencesarethosethatarethemostdirectintheirmeaning thesmoothestinrhythm andmostappropriateintheiremphasis butaneffectivesentenceshouldnotonlyclearlyconveyanidea itshouldalsopleasethereaderbyitsrhythm itsbalancedparts andthesatisfyingarrangementofitsideas keypoints longsentencesforillustrationandexplanation longsentencesforthesummaryofcriticalpointsorcontrastorforcefulepigrams wearenotsoeasilymisledbyvision mostofthethingsbeforeoureyesareplainlythere notmistakableforotherthingsexceptforillusionscreatedbyprofessionalmagicionsand sometimes thelookofthelightsofdowntownnewyorkagainstaskysoblackastomakeitseemanearviewofeternity oureyesarenoteasytofool refreshingandarresting shortsentences alongsentence climax analysisandcomment manyteacherscangivestudentsinformation veryfewcaninspirestudentstolearn informationisoflittleusetothestudent soonhewillleavecollege thenhewillforgetwhathehasmemorized hemustbeinspiredtolearnonhisown improvedversiona manyteacherscangivestudentsinformation butfewcaninspirethemtolearn whenastudentleavescollege theinformationhehasmemorizedwillbeoflittleuseand
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