雅思经典仿写范文5篇(净版).docx

雅思经典仿写范文5篇(1) Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?首段背景铺垫+核心主题+题目改写+作者观点+原因过渡（5元素，34句话）Along with the advances of society, a growing number of controversies are brought to our attention, one of which is smoking背景铺垫+核心主题. Some people suggest that the government should totally prohibit smoking题目改写. However，I am deeply convinced that it is unwise(for it) to forbid the practice作者观点for the following reasons原因过渡. 二段分论点（1）+34句扩展To start with, taxes from tobacco industry exert conducive effects on a nations economic advances.本段中心句Hardly can anyone deny that they contribute much to the administrations revenuesFor instance, governments in varied countries collect an astronomical amount of capital from smokers to pay for their public utilities such as education and medicare. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the governments incomes, which would play an adverse role in the countrys overall development. 三段分论点（2）+34句扩展In addition, those who strongly approve of the ban ignore smokers rights. 本段中心句That is to say, they attach too much importance to the rights of nonsmokersSmoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. Not only is it a kind of lifestyle, but also a stress reliever，which enables smokers to gain easy access to great delight. Needless to say，for smokers，nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit四段让步论证+12句扩展It is admitted that smoking is, to some extent, detrimental to peoples well-being本段中心句According to a recent survey, the average longevity/life expectancy (span) for smokers is marginally lower than that of non-smokers and the likelihood for them to infect cancer-related diseases is somewhat higher as well.末段削减论证+结论+【分论点重述+升华/展望】（24元素，24句话）However，the harm that smoking does to peoples health is exaggeratedFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that it is irrational for the government to disallow smoking 【for the simple reason that tobacco industry makes much contribution to the governments economy and it produces beneficial influences on relieving smokers psychological tension. Only through reasonable ban of smoking can we expect to maximize our profits from tobacco industry.(2) What do you think? Should old people stay at home or be placed in nursing homes? 首段背景铺垫+核心主题+双方观点+作者观点+过渡套句（5元素，34句话）One of the most pressing problems confronting human beings is the old age boom. 背景铺垫Some people take the view that it should be the childrens responsibility to take good care of their parents in their later years;一部分人的观点 others, whereas, hold an entirely opposite stand, firmly believing that the elderly should be sent to nursing homes to spend the rest of their lives. 另一部分人的观点As far as I am concerned, however, a better way of ensuring that aged parents lead a happy and healthy life is to put them in nursing homes. 作者观点 With regard to the issue, I would like to illustrate my argument as follows. 过渡套句二段分论点（1）+34句扩展The most visible benefit is that in retirement homes, aged people can receive intensive medical care from professional nurses and doctors. 本段中心句 To start with, they receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to satisfy their individual requirements, which is of great necessity for those in poor health. Besides, they could gain easy access to regular medical check-ups so that any abnormality could be diagnosed in its early stage. Above all, once any disease strikes, medical services are immediately available. 从饮食、体检&救治三方面对本段中心句进行支持三段分论点（2）+34句扩展A further more subtle point is that living in nursing homes enables them to have more opportunities to communicate with their peers.本段中心句 Keeping each others company, they will not feel lonely and are able to enjoy a considerable number of activities together, such as doing morning exercises, playing games and exchanging memories and stories from their past. On the contrary, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying. 养老院的好处：不孤独；并用if反证法说出呆在家里的孤独四段分论点（3）+34句扩展Last but not least, when aged parents stay in nursing homes, their children can concentrate on their work or studies. 本段中心句 There is no denying the fact that the young generation is living under tremendous pressure from fierce competition. It is unlikely that they would concentrate themselves on work or study with their aged parents around to take care of. By contrast, they might be free from any worries about their parents physical and psychological wellbeing once their parents are sent to old peoples homes.末段让步论证+削减论证+结论+分论点重述+升华/展望（5元素，34句话）It is admitted that aged parents tend to feel more comfortable at home, where they might have been living for decades. However, it is obvious that the merits of staying at nursing houses are far greater than/far outweigh those of remaining at their own homes for ready medical care, companionship as well as relief of burden for their kids. Only by staying at elderly homes can we expect the aging population to live an enriched and meaningful later life.(3) Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 首段背景铺垫+双方观点+过渡套句（3元素，34句话）In recent years, the record of crime rate has been constantly renewed. 一句话背景Quite a few people have the idea that it is wise to send criminals to prison. Nevertheless towards the same issue, many others point out that the law offenders should be punished by paying back to the public. A方观点+ nevertheless towards the same issue+ B 方观点 Both sides of the argument have very strong feelings and sound reasons. 过渡套句二段反方观点+23点理由（5句话左右）There are several reasons which suggest that we should allow criminals to do something outside jails as punishment 反方观点过渡套句. First of all, they are better rehabilitated this way.主题句1 Doing something for society is a sound measure, which not only punishes the criminals but also encourages them to launch a new life as well扩展句1. In addition, the limited jail space is an increasingly serious problem.主题句2 Permitting criminals to do something outside jails relieves the burden of the government扩展句2. 三段正方观点+23点理由（7句话左右）Some other people, nevertheless, hold the opposite opinion, strongly believing that criminals should be sent into prison 正方观点过渡套句. To begin with, they argue that it can ensure a safe living environment to the law-abiding citizens.主题句1 For criminals like thieves, robbers, rapists or even murderers, it is improper or even dangerous to enable them to wander outside jails in case they pose a potential threat to society.扩展句1 What is more, it is the best deterrent to those insidious criminals.主题句2 It will make would-be criminals think twice before they commit a crime.扩展句2 Last but not least, it is a great spiritual consolation to the victims. 主题句3Those who suggest setting criminals free lay too much emphasis on the rights of criminals and hence they ignore the rights of victims扩展句3. 末段过渡+作者观点+分论点重述+升华/展望（3元素，34句话）There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments. As far as I am concerned, it is wise for us to retain the practice of sending criminals to prison for the simple reason that it can guarantee the safety of citizens as well as reduce the crime rate. In addition, it serves as a punishment for the merciless offenders while a relief to the innocent victims. Only by doing so/this can we expect to enjoy a more secure and peaceful existence.(4)What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet? 首段背景铺垫+双方观点+过渡套句（3元素，34句话）In recent years，the Internet has been gaining its popularity at an amazing/alarming rate背景铺垫Some people suggest that the Internet brings us a variety of benefits; but on the other hand，there are also a great many people who strongly advocate that its drawbacks should not be ignored. A方观点on the other hand B方观点It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations on the same issue过渡套句二段正方观点+23点理由（57句话）Those who favor that the Internet possesses varied advantages present their reasons as follows. A方的理由 In the first place，the Internet brings us great convenience and efficiency. For example, we can send E-mails to our friends in other countries in a few minutes while sending a traditional letter takes us at least a week and costs much. What is more，we can make friends with people from all parts of the worldIt overcomes the geographical barriers and makes the world smaller. 【Last but not least, the Internet accelerates the flow of information and spreads education to all corners of the globe. In other words, we can have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide】 三段反方观点+23点理由（57句话）However, the other side of the party voices its strong opposition, saying that the Internet has quite a few weaknesses. B 方理由For one thing，it can easily give rise to psychological problemsAn Internet-addicted person tends to be isolated, self-centered and unsociable. For another, more often than not, it is likely to incur cyber crimes. A growing number of financial crimes such as money laundering are committed via/through the Internet. In addition, it also produces adverse impacts on young people in that they are frequently exposed to a flood of obscene and violent contents online. 末段过渡套句+作者观点+分论点重述+升华/展望（4元素，45句话）There is probably an element of truth in both arguments. For my part, I take side with the latter view that the disadvantages of the Internet far weigh its advantages for the simple reason that it contributes to peoples mental problems; it leads to diverse computer crimes. Besides, It poses a considerable threat to the sound growth of the young. Only by taking advantage of the Internet can we expect to maximize its benefits for our human beings.(5) It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to beGive possible reasons and your recommendations.首段背景交代+原因过渡+观点承接（3元素，23句话）There is much discussion nowadays as to whether or not the relationship between family members is as close as before. Diverse contributing factors can be identified. In the following, I would like to present my point of view.二段原因（1）+34句扩展Great Changes have taken place in family life along with the development of society. One of them is that the once-extended family tends to become smaller and smaller. Many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parent.三段原因（2）+34句扩展Compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work, so that they can achi