初中英语写作公开课(九年级)ppt课件

ALessonofWriting Howtowriteacomposition Example ImaginethatyouareLiMing writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown Keypoints 1 Topic 主题 changes2 who LiMing3 Where LiMing shometown4 tense 时态 pasttense presenttense一般过去时 一般现在时 First considerthetaskcarefully Livingcondition Cellphones jobs transportation changes house cars Second brainstorm 头脑风暴 education shops food roads computers clothes building workingtools农耕工具 reason government efforts liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuilding plantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines studyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschool Livingcondition Workingtools education Livingcondition Workingtools education changes Brainstormforthebody 正文 a Changesinlivingconditions b Changesinworkingtools C Changesineducation OutlineTitle题目 ChangesinLiMing sHometownHeading开头 Greatchangeshavetakenplacein Body正文 a Changesinlivingconditionsb ChangesinworkingtoolsC ChangesineducationConclusion结尾 Thankstothegovernment sefforts 努力 LiMing shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter Next drawupanoutline 提纲 Then writethecomposition Finally checkoverthecomposition ChangesinLiMing sHometownGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing shometownsincethereformandopening up Inthepast peoplelivedinlowhouses Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals Childrenstudiedinoldschools Butnow mostpeopleliveintallbuildings Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools Thankstothegovernment sefforts LiMing shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter Onepossibleversion heading开头 body正文 conclusion结尾 AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown 以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题 按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文 介绍自己家乡的变化 1 过去生活贫困 房屋破旧阴暗 道路窄交通不便 2 现在住房宽敞 明亮 现代学校 孩子可接受良好的教育 马路宽广 许多人有小车 交通方便 人们生活大为改善 3 未来会更加富饶和美丽4 我的感受是希望记住过去 展望未来是很重要的 可能会用到的词汇 poorandbackward贫穷落后的 traffic交通 convenient方便的 Thanksto多亏 thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府 takeplace发生 education教育 modern现代 dreamabout憧憬 Requirement 1 topic 2 who 3 Where 4 Whatchanges 5 Tense时态 First consideritcarefully greatchanges I myself myhometown life roads houses pasttense presenttense Livingcondition transportation changes house Brainstorming 头脑风暴 education roads building Example Outline提纲Title题目 GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading开头 Body正文 a Changesin b Changesin c Changesin Conclusion结尾 Next drawupanoutline LifeHouseRoads houselifeeducationtransportation now Usedtobe Once曾经 past Manyyearsago is are Inthepast Atpresent before nowadays today Was were Makesentences eg 1 Inthepast myhometownwaspoor 2 Myhometownusedtobepoor Then Brainstormforthetense 时态 Livingcondition Cellphones transportation wide roads clean cars Brainstormforthebody 正文 dirty better narrow poor clothes Convinent方便的 improve eg 1 Manyyearsago theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty 2 Nowadays theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean 3 Today manyfamilieshavecars school house Brainstormforthebody 正文 Then writethecomposition 以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题 按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文 介绍自己家乡的变化 1 过去生活贫困 房屋破旧阴暗 道路窄交通不便 2 现在住房宽敞 明亮 现代学校 孩子可接受良好的教育 马路宽广 许多人有小车 交通方便 人们生活大为改善 3 未来会更加富饶和美丽4 我的感受是希望记住过去 展望未来是很重要的 可能会用到的词汇 poorandbackward贫穷落后的 traffic交通 convenient方便的 thanksto多亏 thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府 takeplace发生 education教育 modern现代 dreamabout憧憬 TheChangesinMyHometown IamLiMing todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself Inthepast myhometownwasverysmallandpoor Theroadswerenarrow Thepeoplecouldn tgetenoughfood Butnow theroadsweresowide andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople sneeds Andnow eachfamilyhastelephones TVs computersandsoon Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture ChangesinMyHometown Myhometownusedtobeabackwardplace becauseitwasdeepinthemountains wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty Peoplelivedapoorlife Whileinrecentyears withthedevelopmentofsociety myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads Theycanprovideuswithoxygenandfightagainstthepollutions Sotheskybeco