高考英语写作技巧ppt课件

书面表达之赢取高分策略 NMET书面表达评分原则 1 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次 第五档 20 25分第四档 15 20分第三档 10 15分第二档 5 10分第一档 0 5分 语言地道 规范 覆盖所有内容要点 2 主要内容 内容要点 词汇和语法的数量和准确性 上下文的连贯 语言的得体性 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 3 拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面 评分时 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑 4 词数少于100和多于140的 从总分中减去2分 5 如书写较差 以至影响交际 将分数降低一个档次 Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive why 书面表达如何写 五个步骤 1 审题 题材 人称 时态 要点 2 以词及点 用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点 3 联词成句 用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子 4联句成文 注意 主语和谓语 背景 适当增加时间 地点条件等 逻辑关系 开头与结尾 语篇衔接 5 检查修改 规范抄写 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 整体三部分 Heading点题 一两个句子 概括性 暗示性2 Body中心记述部分 层次分明3 Ending小结 呼应主题 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少 从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 使用恰当连接词 对写一篇有 英语味 的文章很重要 能使文章上下衔接自然 紧凑 增强书面表达效果的技巧 1 Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 2 Weallthinkheisagreatman 3 SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea 4 Thestudentsthereneedn tpayfortheirbooks 5 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure Theplanturnedouttobeafailure Thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable 一 怎样使用较高级的词汇 Weallthinkhighlyofhim Agoodideaoccurredtome Agoodideasuddenlystruckme Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere 6 Whensheheardhehaddied shewentpalewithsorrow 7 ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic 8 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited 9 Inourschool therearetwenty sixclassrooms 10 Youcanfindmyhouseeasily ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic Atthenewsofhisdeath shewentpalewithsorrow Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty sixclassrooms You llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse 感叹句HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter Whatakindboyheis 2 强调句Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible 二 使用丰富的句式 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 3 倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem Therecomesthepolicecar Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman 4 省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus Cometomeifnecessary 5 with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand 6 定语从句Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation Let scometothemainteachingbuilding atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary 7 各种名词性从句That swhatIshoulddo Weshoulddoafavortowhoeverneedshelpatpresent 8 各种状语从句Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Themomentwereachedthefarm wegotdowntoharvesting Solongasweworkharderatourlessons we llcatchupsoonerorlater DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily Practice 1 改变时态 Thebellisringingnow 一般 2 改变语态 Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff 一般 Theregoesthebell 高级 Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff 高级 3 使用不定式 4 使用过去分词 Heissokindthathecanhelpme 一般 Heissokindtohelpme 高级 Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher 一般 Followedbymanystudents she 高级 Onceitisseen itcanneverbeforgotten 一般 Onceseen itcan 高级 5 使用v ing形式 Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane mail 一般 Iftheweatherpermits I llcometomorrow 一般 Onhisarriving arrival pleasegive 高级 Weatherpermitting I llcometomorrow 高级 Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers Theyteach48pupils 一般 NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers teaching48pupils 高级 Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn tturnup 一般 Ihappenedtohavemethim 一般 6 使用名词性从句 Thefactthathedidn tturnupdisappointedeverybody 高级 IthappenedthatIhadmethim 高级 Tohissurprise thelittlegirlknowssomanythings 一般 Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl 高级 7 使用状语从句 Iwon tbelievewhathesays 一般 Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo clock youcangoout 一般 Themealwasverynice Weallenjoyeditverymuch 一般 Nomatterwhathesays Iwon tbelieve 高级 Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore 高级 Themealwassonicethatweall 高级 8 使用定语从句 Thegirlisspokenhighlyof Hercompositionwaswellwritten 一般 Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof 高级 IstudiedChinese maths English physics chemistryandcomputeratschool 一般 ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese maths English 高级 9 使用虚拟语气 Theshipdidn tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain 一般 Iwasn tinvitedtotheparty soIdidn tattendit 一般 IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty Iwouldhaveattendedit 高级 Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain theshipwouldhavesunk 高级 10 使用强调句 倒装句 感叹句 Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920 一般 Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio 高级 WeakasIam I llmaketheeffort 高级 ThoughI mweak Iwillmaketheeffort 一般 Howgladweweretoseethecropsand 高级 Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell 一般 11 使用并列句 Ifyougothroughthegate you llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry 一般 Gothroughthegate andyou llfind 高级 Igotuplatethismorning otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus 高级 Igotuplatethismorning Ididn tcatchtheearlybus 一般 Themorehespoke themoreexcitedhefelt 高级 Whenhespoke hefeltmoreandmoreexcited 一般 三 使用恰当的连接词1 表示递进 在同一话题上补充内容另外 还有 whatismore besides also moreover inaddition2 表示转折关系但是 然而 相反 but however yet instead ontheotherhand onthecontrary 高考大纲中常用的连接词 3 表示因果关系因为 因此 所以 since as because of so thus therefore asaresult 4 表示条件关系如果 只要 if oncondition that aslongas除非 unless否则 or otherwise 5 表示时间关系当 的时候 when while在 之后 after在 之前 before直到 until一 就 assoonas nosooner than hadly when后来 然后 later afterwards不久 soon近来 lately recently自从 since从那时起 fromthenon 6 表示特定的顺序关系首先 最主要的 aboveall其次 secondly然后 then next最后 finally intheend7 换一种方法表述换句话说 inotherwords thatistosay 8 进行举例说明例如 比如 forinstance forexample like suchas9 用于陈述事实实际上 infact actually asamatteroffact跟你说实话 totellyouthetruth tobehonest 10 对一个话题进行总结总而言之 总的来说 onthewhole inshort allinall ingeneral inaword其它常用到的副词Therefore otherwise finally furthermore Thus namely 也就是 although afterwards personally 高考作文类型 A 图表数据说明类文章B 提示议论文类文章C 看图说话类文章D 书信类 写作基本步骤 仔细审题 列举大纲 围绕要点 写出句子 添加过度 确保连贯 先求正确 再求灵活 认真眷写 卷面整洁 Practice书面表达 Ladiesandgentlemen Welcometoourschool Thisvillageisasmallonewith whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people Itusedtobeverypoor However ithaschangedalotsince1978 andhasbeendevelopingveryfast Peoplehere liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore Nowitistaking onanewlook Inthepast theschoolherewasverysmall andmostchildrencouldn taffordtogotoschool Butnowithasbeenrebuilt and whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage Alltheschool agechildrencanstudyhere What smore theyenjoyfreeeducation Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere thenewlybuiltteachingbuilding Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere Thankyou Ladiesandgentlemen Welcometoourschool Thisvillageisasmallonewith whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people Itusedtobeverypoor However ithaschangedalotsince1978 andhasbeendevelopingveryfast Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore Nowitistakingonanewlook Inthepast theschoolherewasverysmall andmostchildrencouldn taffordtogotoschool Butnowithasbeenrebuilt andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage Alltheschool agechildrencanstudyhere What smore theyenjoyfreeeducation Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere Thankyou 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节 你校学生以 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 写一篇短文 Howtowriteagoodcomposition Theoutlineofthewriting Conclusionparagraph Introductionparagraph 主题句的内容要明确具体 语言简洁 开门见山 句式力争多样性 Howwillyoustartyoupassage 问句 从句 Introduction sample WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion 巧用过渡句 过渡词 理顺文章的逻辑关系 Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Thebodypart Point1 65 的人认为应该春游 亮明观点 Sentencepattern Mostofus about65 holdtheopinionthat sinceittendsto whichisunfavorableto Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Reason1 接触大自然 呼吸新鲜空气 有利健康 Sentencepattern Theythinkitgoodtodosth sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion itisofgreatbenefittodosth Eg Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair Reason2 活动是精神放松 大脑休息 有利于学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 递进what smore besides moreover inaddition furthermoreEg theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Conclusion 小段总结 进一步亮明观点 前后呼应 Eg Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Point2 的学生认为不应该春游 亮明观点 注意 使用过渡句 自然衔接句子和段落 承上启下 Sentencepattern However otherspreferto Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Ontheotherhand Eg Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Reason1 高考临近 没有心情玩Sentencepattern Theysay believe holdtheopinion that Eg Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Reason2 春游耽误学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 Eg Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies 表示观点对比类写作套语 A 总起 Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion Differentpeopleholddifferent oppositeopinions Peoplehavetaken adopteddifferentattitudestowards Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion B 表达观点一 ofthemholdtheopinionthat ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat Peoplewhoarefortheideathink C 表达不同观点之间的衔接 However ofthemholdadifferentview ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion Peoplewhoareagainstitdon tthinkso However everycoinhastwosides Differentfromthose peoplethink Ontheotherhand peoplethink D 结尾常用套语 Inmyopinion Personally AsfarasI mconcerned Inshort inbrief inaword 表列举说明的关联词 Firstly Firstofall Tobeginwith Secondly Thirdly Inthefirstplace Inthesecondplace Inthethirdplace Finally Lastbutnotleast 表示递进 强调的关联词 Besides Apartfrom What smore Inaddition Furthermore Moreover worsestill tomakemattersworse WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat Ontheotherhand about35 studentsare againsttheidea what smore Besides A 运用高级词汇或短语B 增加形容词或副词C 灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨 WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies becloseto energetic feel likegoing afford fixtheir attentionon heated fresh 图表类作文写作方法 基础写作 Basicwriting table表格 chart图表 graph曲线图 figure 数据 第一 点主题 1句 第二 分析描写数据 3句 第三 归纳总结 1句 图表作文的一般结构 前提 结合写作内容 1 Thegraph chart tableabove theabovegraph chart itcanbeseenthat 3 正如 isshowninthegraph 4 hasbeenshownfromthetablethat 第一步 shows From As It 图表类说明文的写作步骤 开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题 即conclusion 常使用的词汇有 图表 数据 table表格 chart图表 graph曲线图 figure 数据 动词 tell show represent 常用句型 第二步 分析数据间的主要差异及趋势 然后描写 在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时 可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题 并阐明必要的理由 注意层次 即factsandreasons 增长 减少的表达 表示上升的动词 rise increase climb goup 表示上升的名词 rise increase 表示下降的动词 fall decline decrease drop godown 表示下降的名词 fall decline decrease drop 表示平稳 remainsteady unchanged 常用句型 Facts 1 Therewasagreat slightincrease risein 2 Therehasbeenasudden slow rapidfall dropin 3 Theratedroppedslightlyfrom38 in to31 in 4 Bycomparisonwith itdecreased increased fellfrom to 5 Statisticsshowa20 rise reductionintrafficaccidentscomparedwithlastyear 6 Thepopulationowningmobilephonesincreasedby10 in1999 倍数的表达 fivetimesasmanyas doubled four more 1 Thenumber ratehasnearly 是 的两倍 asagainstthatoflastyear 2 Thenumberisthatof 是 的5倍 Thenumberistimesthanin 比 多 倍 Reasons 1 Thereason isthat 2 Onemaythinkofthechangeasaof 3 Thechangein largelyresults thefactthat Thisbringstheimportantfactthat isthekey 因素 in Itisbecauseof result why for from out factor that 常用表达 ina inshort 简而言之 speaking 总的来说 2 summary itisimportant 3 Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wecan 得出结论 that 4 很明显地 ifwewantto itisnecessary 毫无疑问 attentionmustbepaidto I 建议 thegovernmenttakeeffectivemeasuresto Ithink 就我来看 the goldenweek shouldremain for Obviously Apparently drawtheconclusion In word generally Thereisnodoubtthat 第三步 suggest Personally 归纳总结或发表评论 图表作文一 今日某报对我市几所小学的学生展开了一项关于 什么样的人可以当班长 的调查 请根据下面的图表写一篇英语短文 介绍调查结果并谈谈你认为什么样的人可以当班长 注意 1 开头以为你写好 不计入总词数 2 次数不少于60 Theprimaryschoolstudentshavedifferentopinionsonwhatkindofpersoncanbecomeamonitor 什么样的人可以当班长 范文 Theprimaryschoolstudentshavedifferentopinionsonwhatkindofpersoncanbecomeamonitor Wecanseefromthepiechartthatabout4 41 ofthestudentsbelievethatthosewhohavegoodrelationshipwithothersarelikelytobecomeamonitor Morestudentsaround6 however thinkthatthemostimportantcharacterofamonitorishavingresponsibility Interestingly thereareabout11 04 consideringthatamonitorshouldhaveagoodlookwhile11 76 ofthemsupposethatteachersusuallyappointtheirfavoritestudentsasmonitors Themajorityofstudents about67 believethatonlywhentheydowellintheirstudiescantheyhavethechancetobecomeamonitor Ontheonehand Ithink beingamonitorrequireshighgradesinstudysothatyoucansetagoodexampletothefellowstudents Ontheotherhand beingresponsibleisofequalimportancetostudyingwell youneedtobeagoodassistanttoyourteachertohelpdealwithsomedailyaffairsinclass andsometimeswhentheheadmasterisaway youaretobechargedoftheclass 图表作文二 最近你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查 调查结果见下表 请根据图中提供的信息用英语写一篇短文 介绍同学们的不同意见和看法 并表达你自己的观点 注意 词汇不少于60 参考词汇 piechart饼状图 学生对分类垃圾箱进教室的不同看法及所占的比例 图示 完全同意52 有利于资源回收 并有助于学生养成良好的垃圾分类习惯 完全不同意31 麻烦 习惯很难成 部分同意12 需普及垃圾分类知识 无所谓5 此事与我无关 Modelessay RecentlytheStudents Unionconductedasurveyonwhetherrecyclingdustbinsshouldbesetinclassrooms Ascanbeseenfrom