高考英语漫画类书面表达ppt课件.ppt

1,高考书面表达专题写作指导,漫画作文,Writingbasedoncartoons,2,3,Learningaims,1.通过读图、分析,理解并准确判断漫画类作文的深层寓意。2.通过“描图、析图、建议”三个步骤，练习、总结漫画类作文的常用短语及句型。3.通过实例分析，进一步明确漫画类作文的三个步骤，总结归纳出漫画类作文的写作模板。4.运用本节课所学，顺利写出一篇漫画类作文。,4,2.谋篇,1.读图解意,Whatsthefeatures&characteristicsofcartooncomposition?漫画类作文的特点,5,Judgethemorals/lessonsofthefollowingcartoonsasquicklyaspossible.,6,1）.漫画的题目眼睛2）.漫画的画面细节3）.漫画的文字观点4）.漫画的夸张寓意,读图解意,7,读图解意(theme)-tothepoint,注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！,1.辨明褒贬，准确描述,.联系生活，明晰主旨(thememoral),8,Peoplelackcommunication.,Picture1,9,Peoplecantaffordheavymedicalfees.,Picture2,10,Moneycantbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.,Picutre3,11,Picutre4,Nodrunkdriving!Weshouldobservetrafficregulations.,12,Step1.Descriptionstep2.AnalysisStep3.Solutions,描图/发现问题,建议/解决问题,析图/分析问题,谋篇-organization,Thestepstowriteacartooncomposition:写作步骤,13,1.保证三要素:体裁、时态、人称正确.避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)误解图意大忌！2)企图幽默可笑！3)不明寓意白写！4)中心不明混乱！.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）.结尾要精辟！,注意事项,14,Step1DescriptionAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Fromthepicture,welearnthatThepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.,Usefulsentencestructures:,15,Step2Analysis,ThepictureistheexactreflectionofItseemsveryridiculousthatHowever,suchacaseisquitecommoninourlife./therearesimilarcasesinourlife.ThepictureindicatesthatweNowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthatThereareseveralreasonsbehindthisphenomenon./Thereasonsforthiscanbelistedasfollows.,16,AsfarasImconcerned/Frommypointofview,itisbetter/advisabletoIconsideritnecessaryItstimethatsb.didsth.,Onlyinthiswaycan/Onlyifcanwe,Step3Solutions(opinions/suggestions),ThegovernmentshouldmakelawstoThemediashouldappealforsb.todosthWeshouldraisepeoplesawarenessofEveryoneshouldmakegreateffortsto,17,内容要点：描述文字说明：学生被迫上很多补习班无兴趣可言议论文字说明：太多的补习班是浪费时间学习要有兴趣家长不要强迫孩子参加补习表达希望,18,描图发现问题Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,aboyistiedbyallkindsoftrainingclasses.Hehasnotimetoplayandrelax.Theonlythingheneedstodoistoattendvaritiesoftrainingclasses.析图分析问题Itistheexactreflectionofthelifeoftodayschildren.Theyhavetogotosomanytrainingclassesbesidestheirschoolclasses.Lifeisnofunatallforthem.Thechildrenaretootiredtolearntheselessonswellwithnointerest.建议解决问题AsfarasImconcerned,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents.Thegovernmentshouldtakemeasurestobanorlimittrainingclasses.Whatsmore,parentsshouldgivetheirchildrenfreedomtodeveloptheirowninterest.Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenhaveahappychildhood.,实例剖析,19,写吧,写吧,只有写,你才能写!巴金,Practice:,20,根据图画内容，以“WeWantOurSchoolbagsLighter”题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。1.简单描述漫画的内容；2.作业负担过重；3.精讲精练；4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。,21,高考英语作文评分标准,第五档(很好)(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(好)(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(适当)(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。,22,Thepictureshowsthatagirliswearingapairofglassesandcarryingabigheavyschoolbag,andawomanisdoingsomeexercise.Thegirlsaystothewoman,“Ifyoucarrytheschoolbagforme,Imsureyouwilllosesomeweight.”ItistheexactreflectionofthefactthatweChinesestudentsareoverburdenedwithlessonsandhomework.Whatwedoeverydayistolistentoourteacherslessons,totakenotesanddoourhomeworkwhichseemsendless.AsfarasImconcerned，educationauthoritiesshouldtakemeasurestolightenchildrensheavyburdun.Besides,teachersshouldhelpusstudentsgetmoreknowledgewithfewerexercisesandlesshomework.Onlyinthiswaywillwehavesparetimetodomorephysicalexerciseandtakepartinsomesocialactiv