研究生英语写作第六次

,Unit6,ChineseStories,Synonyms,Writedownasmanywordsforgood,badorniceasyoucan.,MyHamburgerYesterdaywassuchaniceday.WheneveradayissoniceandIfeelsogood,IgetthefeelingthatIwanttogoandgetabig,nicehamburger.Well,yesterdayIwentandboughtaChinesehamburger.UsuallyChineseburgersarereallygood,butforsomeoddreasonyesterdayshamburgertastedsobad.ItwassobadthatItookonebiteandspititbackoutagain.Yuck!Whatabadburger!IhopethatnexttimeIbuyaChinesehamburger,ittastesalittlebetterthanthebadoneIhadyesterday.MyHamburger(Improvedwithsynonyms)Yesterdaywassuchaterrificday.WheneveradayissofineandIfeelsowonderful,IgetthefeelingthatIwanttogoandgetagiant,juicyhamburger.Well,yesterdayIwentandboughtaChinesehamburger.UsuallyChineseburgersareincrediblytasty,butforsomeoddreasonyesterdaysburgertastedsovile.ItwassodisgustingthatItookonebiteandspititbackoutagain.Yuck!Whataghastlyburger!IhopethatnexttimeIbuyaChinesehamburger,ittastesalittlebetterthanthehorridoneIhadyesterday.,BuildanAwarenessAmIrepeatingmyselftoomuch?AmIusingavarietyofwordsandphrases?WhenIfinishwriting,Ishouldre-readmyessay,checkingforrepetition,andmakingsubstitutionswhereappropriate.,Dai,WhatdoyouknowabouttheDaiethnicgroup?SomeDaiFacts:Population:morethan1.5millionLanguage:Dai(asub-languageoftheSino-Tibetanlanguagefamily)Religion:SouthernBuddhismWhereMostDaiLive:DaiAutonomousRegionandaroundXishuangbannaFoods:Glutinousrice,bamboorice,hotandsourdishesFestivals:TheWaterSplashingFestival;theDoor-closingandDoor-openingfestivalsArts:Goodatsinginganddancing(thePeacockDance)TheyhaveacloserelationshipwiththeZhuang,Dong,Shui,BouyeiandLipeoplewhoaresaidtobedescendantsoftheDai,TheDai,TheDaipeopleareoneofChinas56ethnicgroups.TheyliveprimarilyincompactcommunitiesonthesouthwestfrontierofChinasYunnanProvince.Thisareaisalsohometomanyotherethnicminorities,somesaidtobedescendantsoftheDai.PerhapsoneofthemostdistinguishingfeaturesoftheDaiistheircuisineandithasbeensaidthatthegroupproducestwohighlightsinthisarea.Oneoftheseisrice,whichcomesinmanyformssuchasbambootubesandricewrappedinbananaleaves.Anotherissauerkraut,whichismadebyfirstboilingthevegetableandthendryingitinthesun.Afterthat,somepapayasauceisaddedtoitandthevegetableisre-driedyetagain.,Referencing,Whatisreferencing?Referencingisawayofrepeating,orreferringto,previouslymentionedwordsorphrasesinadifferentway.Letslookagainatthewrite-upontheDaiethnicgroup.,TheDai,TheDaipeopleareoneofChinas56ethnicgroups.TheyliveprimarilyincompactcommunitiesonthesouthwestfrontierofChinasYunnanProvince.Thisareaisalsohometomanyotherethnicminorities,somesaidtobedescendantsoftheDai.PerhapsoneofthemostdistinguishingfeaturesoftheDaiistheircuisineandithasbeensaidthatthegroupproducestwohighlightsinthissphere.Themostpopularoftheseisrice,whichcomesinmanyformssuchasbambootubesandricewrappedinbananaleaves.Anotherissauerkraut,whichismadebyfirstboilingcabbageandthendryingitinthesun.Afterthat,papayasauceisaddedandthevegetableisre-dried.,Inyourjournalsmakeatablethatlookslikethis:,Uyghurs(paragraph2),systemofbeliefsx3,Uyghurs(paragraphone)x2,poetryandnarrative,foreignlanguage,Uyghurs(paragraph3)x2,TheUyghurs,Practice1-Lookingforreferences:ReadtheparagraphandfilloutthetableinyourjournalTheUyghursareasub-ethnicgroupoftheTurkicpeoplelivinginCentralAsia,about8millionofwhomliveinChina,mostintheXinjiang-UyghurAutonomousRegion.Overtimethegrouphaschangedtheirsystemofbeliefsmanytimes.Afteradoptingseveralprimitivedevotions,theygraduallymovedontootherfaithsbeforefinallyadoptingthereligionofIslaminthe11thCentury.TheUyghursareknownfortheirtalentinliterature,amongwhichtheyhaveexcelledparticularlyinpoetryandnarrative.Agreatquantityoftheseworks,numberinginthethousands,havebeentranslatedintoforeignlanguages,especiallytheGerman,RussianandEnglishtongues.,PossibleAnswerstoPractice1,TheUyghurs,Practice1:ReadtheparagraphandfilloutthetableinyourjournalTheUyghursareasub-ethnicgroupoftheTurkicpeoplelivinginCentralAsia,about8millionofwhomliveinChina,mostintheXinjiang-UyghurAutonomousRegion.Overtimethegrouphaschangedtheirsystemofbeliefsmanytimes.Afteradoptingseveralprimitivedevotions,theygraduallymovedontootherfaithsbeforefinallyadoptingthereligionofIslaminthe11thCentury.TheUyghursareknownfortheirtalentinliterature,amongwhichtheyhaveexcelledparticularlyinpoetryandnarrative.Agreatquantityoftheseworks,numberinginthethousands,havebeentranslatedintoforeignlanguages,especiallytheGerman,RussianandEnglishtongues.,Uyghurs,Copythefollowingtableintoyourjournal:,TheChaoxian,TheChaoxianethnicgroup,descendedfromimmigrantsfromtheKoreanPeninsula,hasanassemblageofapproximately2millionpeople,mostlivinginChinasnortheast.Somemembers,especiallythoselivinginJilinProvince,speakandwriteinKorean,whilemostotherslivinginChinahaveassimilatedtheMandarinidiom.AsinmanyofChinas56ethnicdivisions,theChaoxianplacegreatimportanceonthefamily.Theoldestsonisexpectedtolookafterhiseldersfortherestofhislife.Ifhefailsinthisduty,hellbelookeddownuponbythewholesociety.SuchanobligationundoubtedlyplacesanenormousamountofpressureonyoungChaoxian.TheChaoxianhavemaintainedseveraltraditionalcustoms.Onesuchcustomstatesthattwopeoplewhohavethesamesurnameareforbiddentomarry.August15th,whichisknownas“TheDayoftheOlderPeople”,requiresyoungpeopletorefrainfromdrinkingorsmokinginfrontoftheirelders.Theyarealsoexpectedtofollowbehindtheagedwhenwalkingdownthestreet.,PossibleAnswerstoPractice2:,TheChaoxian,TheChaoxianethnicgroup,descendedfromimmigrantsfromtheKoreanPeninsula,hasanassemblageofapproximately2millionpeople,mostlivinginChinasnortheast.Somemembers,especiallythoselivinginJilinProvince,speakandwriteinKorean,whilemostotherslivinginChinahaveassimilatedtheMandarinidiom.AsinmanyofChinas56ethnicdivisions,theChaoxianplacegreatimportanceonthefamily.Theoldestsonisexpectedtolookafterhiseldersfortherestofhislife.Ifhefailsinthisduty,hellbelookeddownuponbythewholesociety.SuchanobligationundoubtedlyplacesanenormousamountofpressureonyoungChaoxian.TheChaoxianhavemaintainedseveraltraditionalcustoms.Onesuchcustomstatesthattwopeoplewhohavethesamesurnameareforbiddentomarry.August15th,whichisknownas“TheDayoftheOlderPeople”,requiresyoungpeopletorefrainfromdrinkingorsmokinginfrontoftheirelders.Theyarealsoexpectedtofollowbehindtheagedwhenwalkingdownthestreet.,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.Trynottousesimplepronouns.Experimentwithmorecomplexwordsandphrases.,TheJingpopeopleoftenmakeuseofnaturalfoodsandherbs,massageandacupuncturetoimprovetheirhealth._mightbeonereasonwhyJingpotendtolivelonglives.ManyMiaobelievethatnaturehasaspiritandtheyoftenperformceremoniestodriveeviloutof_.TheDeangtendtobeskilledcraftsmen._areespeciallyknownformakingnecklaces,tobaccopipesandcloth,whichareonlyafewofthemostpopular_.Bonanmentendtowearwhite-coloredclothing,while_womenprefertowearmorecolorful_.TheTatarsarewell-knownfortheirloveofhorseracing,wrestlinganddancing._arealsowelllikedbytheUygurs.,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.,TheJingpopeopleoftenmakeuseofnaturalfoodsandherbs,massageandacupuncturetoimprovetheirhealth._mightbeonereasonwhyJingpotendtolivelonglives.Afewpossibilities:SuchanapproachtohealthylivingThislifestyleThiswayoflivingSuchastyleoflifeParticipationintheseactivities,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.,ManyMiaobelievethatnaturehasaspiritandtheyoftenperformceremoniestodriveeviloutof_.Somepossibilities:theworldtheenvironmentthenaturalenvironmenttheirsurroundings,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.,TheDeangtendtobeskilledcraftsmen._areespeciallyknownformakingnecklaces,tobaccopipesandcloth,whichareonlyafewofthemostpopular_.Possibilities:Thisnation(is)trinketsThenativescreationsThegroup(is)craftsThesepeopleitems,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.,Bonanmentendtowearwhite-coloredclothing,while_womenprefertowearmorecolorful_.Possibilities:thegroupsstylesitsattire(nothing)outfitsthingsgarments,Practice:Createawordorphrasetoreferencethenoun(s)initalics.,TheTatarsarewell-knownfortheirloveofhorseracing,wrestlinganddancing._arealsowelllikedbytheUygurs.Possibilities:Such/TheseactivitiesSuchleisureactivitiesSuchpursuitsSuchleisurelypursuitsSuchrecreationsSuchrecreationalactivities,Unit6（B）,汉译英中的“中国故事”,表达的形式：词语的增减与置换,透彻理解的基础上，译文要忠实传达出原文的各种意义，须在句式、词语方面加以调整，因此译文与原文字面上不再一一对应。从表达的形式上，可分为译文加词、译文减词和译文换词。,译文加词,北京是中国的政治、文化中心。这里你可以游览万里长城、八达岭,BeijingisChinaspoliticalandculturalcenterthatoffersmanyscenicattractions:theGreatWall,Badaling.该段的原文讲的是北京的名胜，而非政治和文化。译文若不加下划线部分限定，主题句和段落内容就不相符。这类加译是为了使译文内容文理通达。枯藤老树昏鸦,小桥流水人家,古道西风瘦马,Oeroldtreeswreathedwithrottenvineflyeveningcrows;Neathtinybridgebesideacotaclearstreamflows;Onancientroadinwesternbreezealeanhorsegoes;,汉语连续用了九个名词,萧瑟凄凉之景,空旷冷落之感在这九个名词中凸现而出,悠然而生,生动具体地抒发出作者当时的情绪和心境,没有任何赘词冗语。许渊冲先生的译文根据英语句法结构,增添了冠词,介词和动词,原句中的九个名词改换成了三个完整的逻辑语句。这样更符合英语的表达习惯。,易词而译,这个旅游项目不会使您失望。,Atourofthesecitieswillbeamostrewardingexperience.把“disappointing（失望）”换译成“r