人教版英语-必修5---UNIT4-----WritingPPT课件

.,人教课标高二必修5Unit4,.,.,.,新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述,写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面:,.,.,即新闻的题目。它是文章的眼睛，既要体现鲜明的个性，又要生动、形象、有美感，才能引人入胜。,.,是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩，包括五大要素：时间，地点，人物，起因和结果。导语是新闻报道的精华，也是信息传递的集中体现。,.,是导语之后的新闻展开，补充更加充实。,.,新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事，所以时态以现在时，过去时为主；篇幅一般不长，内容短小精悍，多用动词，长短句交错使用。,.,5月1日，高二(3)班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校报的英语记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。,.,要求：1.时间，地点，人物，活动。2.老人们的反应。3.简短评论。,.,.,第一步认真审题(analyzetherequirements)第二步谋篇布局(drawupanoutline)第三步联句成篇(organizethesentences)第四步锦上添花(getthearticlepolishedup)第五步查漏补缺(checkthemistakes),.,审主题审体裁_审人称_审时态_审要求,students,_,time,place,persons,activitiesreactionoftheelderlybriefevaluation,didvoluntarywork,aletter,thethird,thepasttense,.,.,标题(headline),StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshine,Whatwouldbetheheadlineofthiscomposition?,.,导语(lead),LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,_SunshineNursingHomeand_.,wentto,didsomevoluntarywork,.,正文(body),They_theelderly_flowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,_and_.Everythingdone,theysatintheyard_.,presented,with,cleaningthewindows,sweepingthefloor,chattingwiththeelderlypeople,.,评语(evaluation),Whattheydidhasbrought_toothersand_theirownlives.,joy,enriched,.,first,second,then,finally/atlast,soonimmediately,suddenly,here,there,ononesideontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto,.,foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhand,but,however,while,though,otherwise,.,because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of),aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless,.,though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)ever,whatsmore,besides,tomakethematterworse,whatsworse,.,inaword,altogether,allinall,ingeneral,.,Theygaveflowersandfruitstotheelderly.They_theelderly_flowersandfruits.,.,Theysaidthestudentshaddonesomuchforthemandtheywouldneverforgetthem.Theysaiditwas_abeautifulday_theywouldrememberitforever.,such,that,.,Whentheyarrived_theirarrival,Upon,.,Theystartedworkingatonce,_thewindowsand_thefloor.2._,theysatintheyard_withtheelderlypeople.,巧用分词,cleaning,sweeping,Everythingdone,chatting,.,名词性从句要用得妙,Whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives.,.,Theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits._theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor._,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.,Then,Everythingdone,.,OnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.,.,Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Thentheystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.,.,WhenItwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave,theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.Theysaidi