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广东英语读写任务优秀范文选登读写任务优秀范文选登(第1例)（一）读写任务(一封对父亲感恩的信) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, Im amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means lion. Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what youd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mothers labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mothers arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart. Welcome to the world, Ari. Love, Daddy 写作内容 假设你就是信中的Ari， 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。 今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：1以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)、读信后的感受; (2)、以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)、表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。 写作要求 1作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。读写任务范文1选登Dear Daddy, Happy birthday to you! Ive just read the letter you wrote to me when I was born. In your letter, you described your eagerness to see my coming to the world and expressed your hope about my growing up. You earnestly hope that I can grow strong and brave and can seize every chance to succeed. I was deeply touched / moved when I read your letter. Its the first time that Ive realized your deepest love for me. Reading the letter, I suddenly remember all the things that youve done for me. Once when I was ill, you rushed me to the hospital and stayed with me the whole night. Each time I felt depressed, you would encourage me with a smile. But when our teacher advised us to help parents (to) wash feet, I thought nothing of it. How silly I was to take it for granted that you make every effort to bring me up and give me everything! I feel ashamed that I failed to notice your tiredness, unhappiness or even illness. Today is your 50th birthday, on which I thank you again from the bottom of my heart and wish you could enjoy a long and happy life. Love,Son / Ari读写任务范文2选登Dear Daddy, Tonight is your 50th birthday. I havent really got the chance to say all of my thanks I want to tell you. I read your / the letter you wrote to me when I was born 18 years ago. In this letter, you gave me the name “Ari”, and hoped that I would be brave and responsible to the sociality. I was so moved by your deepest love to me. And I love you too, Daddy. When I was a primary school student, you always encouraged me to do well at school and each evening I was asked to present at least one new thing I had learned that day. You told me that I could be whatever I wanted to me, as long as I got good grades and continued my education. When I met some difficulties, you inspired me to face it bravely and solve it by my own brightness and effort. At this time, I want so badly to say to you: Happy birthday, Daddy! Thank you, Daddy. Thanks for supporting me over the last 18 years of my life. Thanks for all the advice knowledge over these years. Thanks for showing me, that even you, are not perfect. Thank you, Daddy and I wish you a healthy body and a happy life. Love, Son / Ari读写任务范文3选登 Dear Dad, On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom me gave the letter you wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, Father expressed his love and expectation of me before and after my birth in this letter. He wanted me to be courageous, strong and confident to achieve success and be a contributing member. After I read this letter, my eyes were brimming with moving tears. I never expected Father would be so gentle and sentimental to express his love towards me. But I used to misunderstand him so deeply. Since I was four years, father has taught me playing martial arts as a family tradition. I had to get up at 6pm every morning when other kids were sound asleep and practiced very hard basic skills like licking, striking, rolling, and running or even simply stand still no matter what the weather was like. He even tied sandbags weighing 3 kilograms on my legs and commanded me to run. My screaming and crying did not help at all. After practicing Kong Fu, I had to devote fully to my academic study with little playing time. I thought he was so brutal and I dreaded him-I refused to talk with him for a long period until my mother showed me this letter upon fathers birth-day, telling me what father had done was to make me strong-willed and physically fit And I suddenly realized without fathers “brute”, I could not be confident and independent enough to overcome hardships in both study and life and other activities. I am so proud that I have such a “strict” father and I know he is not that strict after reading this letter. I hope God bless my deal father and I will always be his “lion”! Love, Son读写任务范文4选登Dear Daddy, Im glad I have a chance to read the letter written by you when I was born. In this letter, you concretely describe your expectation to me, that is, you hope that I will grow strong enough and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for myself and others. After I read the letter, I was lost in deep thought. It is not until today that I understand the love you give me. Daddy, the love you give me increases my self-accusation. The more you love me, the more ashamed I feel. I regret what I did before in particular. Sometimes, I turn a deaf ear to you when you had your heart in the right place to give me some advice which was good for me. Instead, at that time I thought you were so troublesome that I couldnt bear at all. However, you didnt mind my complaining and still cared me and protected me from harm. All the time, you have been trying your best to foster me to be a healthy and useful person. Let me say to you, Thank you, Daddy. Today is your 50th birthday. At this time, I am eager to say to you: Happy birthday, Daddy! Thank you, my dear daddy! Thank you for giving me life; thank you for giving me protection; thank you for bringing me up. In a word, Ill thank you and bless you from the bottom of my heart and I wish you could enjoy a long and happy life. Love, Son / Ari2007年广东高考英语读写任务作文亮点回放1、概括简洁，准确。首段以短短三十几个词概括了父亲所写的整封信的中心。感情真实，细腻。 2、在写自己的感受时，完全把自己融入到了情景之中，写出了真实实感，耐人寻味。 3、语言规范，内容连贯。单词与短语使用得当，衔接语运用自如。文章中出现了一些较高级的短语，如 turn a deaf ear to（对、充耳不闻）， have ones heart in the right place（好心好意）等。而且，子结构灵活多变， 不仅用了强调句型、“the比较级，the比较级”结构，还用了定语从句、状语从句等。尤其是在结尾处，用了几个排比句，更增添了文章的气势，这样表达了作者对父亲深深的感激之情。*All, for everybody; everybody, for a person. (一切为大家，大家为个人。) *读写任务优秀范文选登(第2例)（二）读写任务(记日记的作用)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。On Keeping a Diary in EnglishKeeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve our English writing ability. Compared with other forms of writing, it is shorter and takes less time. It can help us to develop the habit of thinking in English. If we stick to this practice, gradually well learn how to express ourselves in English. In keeping a diary in English, we certainly run up against a lot of difficulties. In the first place, it often happens that we have trouble finding appropriate words and phases to give expression to our mind. Secondly, there are many idiomatic（习语的；惯用的）ways of saying things in Chinese. And it is extremely hard for us to put them into English properly. Surely, there are some other roadblocks we may come across in keeping a diary in English.As far as Im concerned, my suggestion is that we should always have a notebook and a Chinese-English dictionary within easy reach. Whenever something beats us, we can first put it down in our notebook and then consult our dictionary. We can also turn to our English teacher for help, if necessary. In short, I believe that it is of great use to keep a diary in English for the development of our writing skills.写作内容1请以约30个词概括短文的要点；2. 以约120个词就“记日记的作用”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点： 要用英语思维，最好写英语日记； 经常用英语记日记，等于天天在练笔； 你对用英语写日记有什么看法？为什么？写作要求 1、你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。2、不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。读写任务范文选登On Keeping a Diary in EnglishKeeping a diary can improve our English. It helps us form the habit of English thinking and express ourselves. When we come across difficulties like choosing proper words, and changing Chinese idioms into English, we can turn to references.To master the English language, well try our best to think in English when listening, speaking, reading and writing; to reach the goal, I believe it is better to keep diaries in English regularly and practice the language. Keeping the English diary means practicing English every day. In my opinion, keeping a diary in English is one of the effective methods to improve English writing skills. The diary is short and small, time saving; we are free to set down whats on inside and outside ourselves. Unconsciously we can use English freely and effectively. 读写任务优秀范文选登(第3例)（三）读写任务(一篇讨论大学校园生活发言稿) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.写作内容 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是 “ Preparing Myself for College Life ”， 内容要点包括：1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1)、对中学生活的感受； (2)、理想的大学生活； (3)、中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。写作要求1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。读写任务范文1选登Preparing Myself for College LifeLadies and Gentlemen:From what Mike has just said, we learn that due to lacking basic life skills, Mike got a very tough life during his first year of college. Once he got used to it, he became active in everything and made many friends.I am a senior student now. The first day I entered the senior school, my parents and teachers told me that I must study hard so that I can enter a key university. I study 9 subjects, which almost takes up all my time. My parents do everything for me in life. All I need to do is studying, studying and studying. I hope I can get more freedom in college. And the college should not judge us only by the scores. I can not only get knowledge from the textbooks but also social practice and practical ability. In order to prepare for my college life, I will manage my own life during the summer holiday. Whats more, I will seek a part-time job to train myself to finish a job independently and get on well with others.Thats all. Thank you!【范文1专家点评】2008年英语高考读写任务题所给的阅读材料是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了Mike如何从不适应大学生活, 到后来在大学生活中“如鱼得水”的过程. 范文中概括部分的确恰到好处地给出了短文的中心内容。写作时，应注意其格式及其前后衔接，要求要写的是一篇在听完Mike的发言之后，给出即时发言稿。范文从体裁上看属于一篇夹叙夹议的文章,后面120词部分的写作中包括三点内容,考生应该把协作的重点放在第一点和第二点的对比上, 因为这些内容贴近生活,“有话可说”才能有利于考生的发挥。从谋篇布局上看, 文章几个段落完全符合“写作内容”要求的协作顺序,且逻辑紧密,条理清晰,表达了全部的写作内容.在遣词造句上,恰当地使用了连词,使词与句之间|,句与句之间逻辑合理,承接自然。 再加上各种句型的合理使用,使得整篇文章句型不重复,表意清晰,条理连贯, 内容紧凑。-读写任务范文2选登Preparing Myself for College LifeLadies and Gentlemen: Ive just heard of Mikes story, from which I learned that he went to a small school where he knew little about some basic skills. At college, he didnt adjust himself to college life at fist, but later he enjoyed it.Now, Im studying in a rural high school. Though the conditions are not so good, my teachers are very strict with me. Im working hard at my lessons all day and all night, in order to live up to my parents. After class, I have to do all everyday things by myself, such as washing clothes, mending socks. Im tired but happy.I hope to have a happy and colorful life in the college. I wish I could do what I like to do and take part in various kinds of activities in my spare time instead of doing homework. I think I can read all kinds of books in the library and travel in the world of knowledge.College life will be very different from that in high school. Everything is new to me. Im afraid Ill get homesick. But I believe Ill be able to adapt myself to the new environment and make a lot of good friends.Thats all. Thank you!-读写任务范文3选登Preparing Myself for College LifeLadies and Gentlemen: Hello, everyone! My name is Mary. From what Mike said, we know that he had great difficulty adjusting himself to his college life at first. He said he knew little about some basic skills because he hadnt prepared himself well for that before he went to college. Im very glad that he is quite used to his college life now.Ill finish high school soon. I get along well with my friends and teachers here. After all, life in college is quite different. In order to get used to college life as soon as possible, I should prepare myself for that from now on. To start with, I will learn more about college both from college students and from other media. Second, I will learn to look after myself, such as dong some washing on my own and dealing with some financial problems.I share the same idea with him that we should be active in things in college. Ill try to become a member in the Students Union. Ill developed interests in sports, reading and many other things. I have a strong belief that in my own capability and I firmly believe that only when I have a common ground, can I make more friends and make my college life more colorful.Thats all. Thank you!=【2008年广东高考英语读写任务写作 名师点评】2008年广东高考英语作文与2007年相比，咋一看略显简单，实里却暗藏 “杀”机。仔细分析我们不难发现，今年考题是让考生就非常熟悉的题材做恰当的书面反应，主要考查考生运用英语的实际能力。考生考场感觉良好，却未必能与考取高分划上等号。 今年的任务写作是以“Preparing Myself for College Life”为题写一篇关于 “大学校园生活”讨论的发言稿。给定了三个提纲：(1)、对中学生活的感受；（2）、理想的大学生活；（3）、中学生活与大学生活的差别，以及你的打算如何适应。得分提点： 1. 写好每段落主题句。主题句也即为提纲翻译，最好是一个简单句，因为简单句短促有力。例如第二个主题句可表述为：My expected/ideal college life is as follows.以主题句开篇，不但可以得到阅卷老师的青睐，同时可以确保内容不偏离主题,这是得分的关键点。 2. 变化性的展开文段。 写完主题句之后， 可以选择不同的方式展开文段。譬如,第一段通过举例论证: For instance, students, especially graduating ones are busy with their study all day long ；第二段可以选择层次论证: First of all, it must be very interesting. Meanwhile, it should be colorful as well.3. 对主题句进行充分论证。很多学生的作文只是干巴巴的将句子罗列，文章论述很不充分，不能另人信服。如何扭转这种劣势？我们可以在第二段的第一个支持句 (First of all, it must be very interesting.) 之后加上: Besides the courses I must take, I can also choose whatever I like. 在第二个支持句 (Meanwhile, it should be colorful as well.) 之后紧跟上: Not only can I broaden my horizons, but I can also have chance to communicate with others. 这样一来文章就显得“底气十足”。读写任务优秀范文选登(第4例)（四）读写任务(一切靠自己) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。“Depend on yourself” is what nature says to everyone. Parents can help you. Teachers can help you. Others still can help you. But all these only help you to help yourself.There have been great men in history. But many of them were very poor in childhoods and no uncles, aunts or friends to help them. Schools were few and not very good. They could not depend upon them for an education. They saw how it was, and set to work with all their strength to know something. They worked their own way up to fame.One of the most famous teachers in England used to tell his pupils. “I can not make worthy men of you but I can help you make men of yourself.”But some young men tend to totally depend on others to help them out. They can never achieve much unless they see their weak points and change their course. They are nothing now, and will be nothing as long as they live, unless they accept the advice of their parents