高考书面表达练与评VIP

高考书面表达练与评,在我国，交通事故频频发生。你班就这个话题展开了讨论。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文。字数：100左右。事故后果：财产损失、人员伤亡事故原因：违反交通法规，超速驾驶、酒后驾车措施或建议：加强教育，增强安全意识,题目分析：一、审题：此篇作文是一篇典型的指导性作文，文章要点明确，包括：1、后果2、原因3、措施或建议。前提有两点，1、中国的交通事故发生频繁。2、在班级内讨论此问题。根据要点，这篇文章可分为三段。第一段提出话题，第二段陈述后果和原因，第三段谈措施或建议。基本时态应是一般现在时。二、根据要点初步确定本文可能涉及词语：property,death,injury,breaklawandregulations,speeding,drivingafterdrinking,raise,awarenessofsafety,等。,习作评析,习作1InChina,trafficaccidentshappenfrequently，whichhaveabadeffectonthewholesociety.Trafficaccidentsnotonlygetagreatmanypeopleinjuredorkilled,butalsoresultinpropertyloss.Thebreakingoftrafficlawandregulationsiscitedasmajorfactorscausingtheincreasingnumberoftrafficaccidents,suchasspeedinganddrivingafterdrinkingalcohol.Thekeytotrafficsafetyiseducation.Ifweimproveoursafetyawarenessandenlargeourknowledgeoftrafficlawandregulations,Imfirmlyconvincedthattrafficaccidentscouldbereducedandavoided.,InChina,trafficaccidentshappenfrequently，whichhaveabadeffectonthewholesociety.,have应改为has。因为which指代的是前面的整个句子,Thebreakingoftrafficlawandregulationsiscitedasmajorfactorscausingtheincreasingnumberoftrafficaccidents,suchasspeedinganddrivingafterdrinkingalcohol.,Trafficaccidentsareincreasingasmorepeoplebreakthetrafficlawandregulation.Speedinganddrivingafterdrinkingaremajorproblems.,习作2TrafficaccidentsinChinaaretodaysmostfrequentkiller,sofarasthepublicareconcerned.Manyfamiliessufferendlesspainbecausetheirfamilymembersaredisabledorevenkilledinaccidents.Thegreatlossinpropertyandspiritwilllastalongtimeastheirnightmares.Carelessdriversaretoblameformosttrafficaccidents.Theyalwaysbreakthetrafficlawandregulations,drivingtoofastorafterdrinkingalcohol.Inordertoavoidtrafficaccidents,peopleshouldgetagoodknowledgeoftrafficregulationsandbuildupasenseofself-protection.Onlythenwillwebeabletoenjoyasaferlife.,Thegreatlossinpropertyandspiritwilllastalongtimeastheirnightmares.,Thefinancialandspirituallossinvolvedcanbecomearealnightmare.,习作3TrafficaccidentshavebecomeasfamiliarasthecommoncoldinChina.Soweheldaheateddiscussiononit.Weallsharetheopinionthatthecauseofaccidentsismainlyduetocarelessdrivers,whodontfollowthetrafficlawsastheyoughtto.Couldyouimaginewhatwillbewaitingforaheavydrinkerifhedriveshiscarontheroad?Theinjuriesandpossibledeathswillteachhimanunforgetfullesson,letalonethecompensationtobepaid.Itisobvioustousthatcrowdedroadsandpeopleignoringtrafficrulesleadtotrafficaccidentsaswell.Inconclusion,wesuggestthatpeopleshouldmakesenseoftrafficlawandregulationsandstrengthentheirsenseofsafetyinordertoallowbothtrafficandtheirlivestomovesmoothlyandsafely.,Theinjuriesandpossibledeathswillteachhimanunforgetfullesson.,unforgetful这个词不存在，应改成unforgettable,练你班将要举办一次主题为WhatcanwedofortheOlympics?的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，从以下四个话题中任选一至二个阐述，说明。1.举止文明2.学好英语3.当奥运志愿者4.向国际友人宣传中国文化词数：150词左右,【写作指导】动笔之前要首先审题，如本命题要求说明为奥运会做些什么，重点应该阐述我们应该做什么以及理由。命题中给出了四个话题，有的同学常常把命题要求翻译一遍就完了，这样是不可取的。写作时，应该有轻有重，要突出的部分多写，次要的内容捎带而过。面面俱到，反而使文章像流水帐，显得没有层次，没有重点。布局结构推荐：阐述、说明主题；对主题进行详细介绍和说明；总结归纳。注意：以一般现在时为主。一定要有条理性，并合理使用过渡词，适当使用高级词汇和表达法。,【学生习作】,Dearclassmates,theBeijing2008Olympicswillbeheldinabout200days.EveryChinesewantstodosomethingforthem.Wecanindeeddomanythingsforit,butIthinktheEnglishstudyandthebehaviorarethemostimportantofall.Asanoldsayinggoes,Withoutcommunicationthereisnounderstanding.Itistrue.ThisiswhyweshouldstudyEnglishwell,sowecancommunicatewithforeignvisitorseasilywhentheycometoChina.Onepersonsbehaviorindicateshisquality,thustheChinesebehaviorhasagreatinfluenceonimpressionwhichinforeignershearts.Today,someabroadstudentsdontbehavewell,leadingothercountriestothinkbadlyofourcountry.Inordertochangethisprejudice,weshouldbehavewhereverweare.Ifwefollowtheserules,IbelievetheBeijing2008Olympicswillbethebestinhistory!,butIthinktheEnglishstudyandthebehaviorarethemostimportantofall.Onepersonsbehaviorindicateshisquality,thustheChinesebehaviorhasagreatinfluenceonimpressionwhichinforeignershearts.,修改：butIthinkstudyingEnglishandlearningmannersarethemostimportantofall.,修改：Thewayapersonbehavesshowshischaracter,thusthewaywebehavewillshowthevisitorsthekindsofpeopleweare.,Today,someabroadstudentsdontbehavewell.Inordertochangethisprejudice,weshouldbehavewhereverweare.,abroad不做定语，应该说studentsabroad，要表达在国外留学的留学生，看看这样说是不是意思更清楚呢？studentswhostudyoverseas/abroad。,用behaveproperly就能表达得很清楚明白了。Inordertochangethisprejudice,weshouldbehaveproperly.,【参考范文】,Dearclassmates,theBeijing2008Olympicswillbeheldinabout200days.EveryChinesewantstodosomethingforit.Ofcoursetherearemanythingswecando,butinmyopinion,weshouldstartwithstudyingEnglishwellandmakingsurewebehavepolitely.Languageisabridgetoconnectpeopleofdifferentcountries.ThatswhyweshouldstudyEnglish,especiallyoralEnglish,sowhenforeignvisitorscometoChina,wecannotonlycommunicatewiththem,buthelpthemaswell.Atthesametime,weneedtobehavepolitelybecausewerepresentChinainforeignerseyes.InordertoprovetoforeignersthatChinaisagreatnationwithahighcivilization,weshouldmakesurewearepolite.Weshouldavoidspeakingloudlyinpublicplacesandspittingandlittering.Ifwefollowtheserules,IbelievetheBeijing2008Olympicswillbethebestinhistory!,人类仅有一个地球，这是我们赖以生存的地方，所以保护环境是我们义不容辞的责任。那么我们应该怎样从身边的小事做起，来保护我们的环境，拯救地球呢？请根据提示词写一篇100字左右的倡议书。,Tips：倡议书往往要针对某一现象发表自己的观点，要以理服人，有热情才能打动人。,keepclean/tidy,spitinpublic,throwlitter,turnoffthelights,shower,rideabike,recyclepaper,planttrees/flowers,Whatshouldwedotoprotectourenvironment?Wehaveonlyoneearth.Itsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Perhapssomeofyouthinkthatyouyourselfarenotresponsibleforanyofthedamage.Butthinkaboutit.Canyouhonestlysaythatyouneverdroplitter?Doyoualwaysbothertorecyclepaper?Thereareplentyofthingswecandotoprotecttheenvironment.Whenyougotobedatnightorleavearoom,turnoffthelight!Takeashowerratherthanrunabathtosavewater.Andwhynotplantanewtreesothatpeopleinthefuturewillhavealittlemoregreennature?,Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeysanditisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.,Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.However,ithaschangedalotsince1978andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peopleherehave/liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmallandmostchildrencouldntaffordtogotoschool.Butnowithasbeenrebuiltandthenewlybuiltteachingbuildingwhichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Whatsmore/Also,theyenjoyfreeeducation.Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.,Ho