高中英语基础写作课件.ppt

,basicwriting,时间分配,基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。,对于书面表达的要求：,1.coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点,avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,4.usethewordsproperly语言的得体性,5.writeyourarticleclearly.,6.mindthenumberofyoursentences.,tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.,toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。,（2）tousesometransitionalwords恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。,(3)tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。,basicwritingskills,waysofwritinggoodsentences,方法一.一句多译,assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.,onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly.,themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.,nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe,hardlyhadwearrivedatthevillagewhenwe.,usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture,方法一.一句多译,一就受到欢迎,assoonaslienchanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.onarrivingattheairport,lienchanandhiswifelienchanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.nosoonerhadlienchanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywerehardlyhadlienchanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere,方法一.一句多译,practice一句多译这本书花了我300元。ispent300yuanonthebook.ipaid300yuanforthebook.thepriceofthebookis300yuan.itcostme300yuantobuythebook.thebookcostme300yuan.,practice一句多译,昨天下午他才来。hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.hedidntcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.,rewritethesentences,方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,（1）mostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromsouthafrica.,mostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromsouthafrica.,（2）nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.,nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.,方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错._manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.unless_tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.,hearing,havingbeentold,invited,translatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，做完作业后，他回家了。,facedwith/facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.,introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.,havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.,方法三.丰富的句式,describethecharacterbyusinginvertedsentence(倒装句),pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.,方法三.丰富的句式,sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful,thedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.thesquareisnearthegreatwallhotel.nearthegreatwallhotelisthesquare.youwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodenglish.itwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodenglish.,ifailedintheexamagain.whatdisappointedmemostwasthatifailedintheexamagain.missliwillgiveusareportsoon.missli,whohasawideknowledgeofenglish,willgiveusareportsoon.wealllikejim.wealllikejim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.wealllikejimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.,1.tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.thoughimweak,illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）,whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.,practice怎样使用较丰富的句式,weakasiam,illmaketheeffort.,itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.,icouldnthavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.,5.iwontbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）6.ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）7hehadnosoonercomebackfrombeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句),nosoonerhadhecomebackfrombeijingthanhewassentabroad.,nomatterwhathesays,iwontbelieve.,studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.,usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful,summaries:,practice,此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事，由此写一篇文章。要求：1必须使用5个句子表达图画内容。2将5个句子组成连贯的短文。,步骤一审题,narration,pasttense,thethirdperson,timeorder,caughtabirdfixedastringtoit,agirllookformotherapolicecomforther,步骤二要点,sendherhomelostinthought,setthebirdfreefeelhappy,步骤二要点,步骤三.扩展成句，连句成篇,1.oneday,limingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.,2.hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.,3.thepolicemansentthegirlhomeandlimingwaslostinthought.,4.limingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.,步骤四.仔细检查，认真修改,查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。查体裁格式是否正确。查句式使用是否科学得当。查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。查过渡词是否使用合理。查时态、语态是否一致正确。查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。查字数是否符合要求。,oneday,limingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.whenplayingwithit,hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldntfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortheran