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entsreceivedtheirpunishment.,Therefore,实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句,提示：两段之间是什么逻辑关系？,AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic,whichledtopunishmentontherestaurantandsomerelevantgovernmentdepartments.,实战练习：将第二、三段主旨句合成长句,AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic.,_,therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmen