AppendixIStrategies

基于问题解决的体验式教学设计-互动式作文评析探究Argumentativewriting英语组童莉,Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplelivingincitiesbegintokeeppets.Somepeoplearguethatitisnotgoodforourlivingenvironmentbecausepetsarelikelytoleavewasteeverywhere.Doyouagreewiththisopinion?Couldyoutalkabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofkeepingpets?,Beautifulsentencesfromthebeginningandending：Theargumentaboutwhetherwecouldhavethepetinthecommunityismoreandmorefierce.(fromJiangYunqi)Thereiscontroversyoverwhetherwecouldraiseapetandpeopleholdquitedifferentopinions.(fromChenYihan)whetheritslegaltokeeppetsinneighborhoodarousespeoplesconcern.(fromLiYunhao)Whenitcomestopets,moreandmorepeoplechoosetokeepthemduetolonelinessandanxiety.(fromShenXiaoyun)residentsintheneighborhoodhaveadebateaboutwhethertokeeppets.(fromTaoJinyi),Weighingtheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofkeepingpets,Ithinktheformerismoreimportantthanthelatter.(fromBaoYining)ComparedwithwhatImentionedabove,Iamfullyconvincedthatpeopleshouldkeeppetsiftheyarewillingto.(fromHuangYuewen)Inmyopinion,thesedrawbackscanbeavoidedifwepaymoreattentionandaremorecareful.(fromYanJiachen)Iprefertoraiseapetintheneighborhoodbecauseallthedisadvantagescanbesolvedifalltheownersconsiderotherpeoplesfeelings.(fromLuRenbing)Sopleasethinktwicebeforeyouarecommittedtoraisingapet.(fromZhangyaohuan),Foronereason,keepingpetwillbringtroublestoyou.Recently,manystudiesrevealedthatthefurofpetshaveavariousofbacteria,lotsofthemisunknown,whichmeanstherewillhavepotentialhealthproblemstothosewhotakecareofthepet.Meanwhile,thereisnothavingafacilitytomonitortheemotionofpets,sowecouldnotknowwhenitisangryorwhenitdontwanttobeapproachingbyhuman.Duetothese,wehadbetternotraiseapetincasesomeunexpectedthingswillhappen.Fortheotherreasons,itisnoiseanddisorderthatneighborsmaybotherbyyourpet,suchasdogsbarktoothers,catsdestroytheflowers.Therefore,therelationshipbetweenyourneighborandyouwillbetense.,The2edpartfromJiangYunqi,Class6,Whenitcomesto(pet-keeping),AsfarasIamconcerned,petkeepingshouldbeallowed,butpeopleshouldfollowthepet-keepingrulesandregulations.,linkwords:时间顺序：first,second,third并列关系：and,aswellas,also转折关系：but,however,yet因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult,thus,therefore,owingto,dueto条件关系：aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless对比关系：similarly,like,unlike,ontheotherhand递进关系：besides,inaddition,moreover,whatsmore,furthermore,whatsworse,linkwords:举例：forexample,suchas,inotherwords,thatistosay让步关系：though,eventhough,inspiteof,whoever,whatever,whenever,wherever总结归纳：ingeneral,generallyspeaking,aboveall,afterall,inshort,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion过渡性插入语：Ithink,Imafraid,asweallknow,inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned,Assignment：,Keepyourshiningpoints.Avoidthegrammaticalmistakesyouhavemade.Makeyoursentencesmo